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By : Angelsfear

From on July 04, 2007
.......GAH! I knew you would pull a fast one on us!! BUT who put Ginny under the curse!HA! *ponders* This chapter really went to the heart you know? I mean no Neville was never one of my fav characters but he did diserve what you gave him...I also really wnat to see Bellirtx get whats coming to her! HAHA KARMAS A BITCH EH!?>D AND OMG WHEN NOTT WAS THERE! I WAS LIKE....*whisper to Draco as god would do*"KILL HIM....KILL HIM" >3 I see that came true!...for a second there I was like oh no!!Notts back! Run Draco!RUN!!BEFORE HE RAPES YOU AGAIN! You gave me a heart attack almost.I said almost. I do have to say thou...that battle...wow.I had to re-read it a couple times beacuse I kept jumping a head and not reading what was in front of me. 8D

SNAPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEE.SNAPE.....GAH SNAPE!!O.o....I am weird. Woot! I just loved how tonk was hidding amoung the Death-Eatters. xD

Poor Harry...He needs Draco to be there so he doesnt go insane....Ha..Harry insane. But really poor Harry....T_T I still love you even if you killed Neville.^^ I cant wait for more.
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From misslala on July 03, 2007
*sniffles again* *wipes tears* I always did like Neville. I'm so sad that he died, but he did die a Hero's death. How horrible :( I can't wait to read more.
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From thrnbrooke on July 03, 2007
I was soooo hoping that Neville would have killed Bella with that spell as well as take out the cup! Poor Neville! Sooo need chapter 67!
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From danradfan84 on July 03, 2007
That was great. It was really sad when Nevill died, I am still a little teary eyed. I thought it was really sweet when Draco said that Nevill was already a hero. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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From stasa on July 03, 2007
OMG those orphans ware SO CREEPY!!! And GINNY!?!
What is she on? What is going on? Need chapter 66...

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From claire2007 on July 03, 2007
loved your description of the orphanage
and wow now you say that about the plants it seems true
and you said lucius had the diary well malfoys have always been in slytherin haven't they

and eek!
what is ginny up to ?
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From thrnbrooke on July 03, 2007
Uh oh! Ginny is a traitor? I soooo need chapter 66!
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From on July 02, 2007
GAH!!I hate that my computer.!!!I had this long long review for you and then its like FREEZE! Hahaha computer user. So there went all my writing.I will try to write it all again.

I really liked how you have the theory about all the different horxs. Thats pretty cool. I also have to agree with you on the imfrui(sp). I know I would have a hard time killing those things. I know it would effect me you know?

Also about the house..I dont know why I care about it but the Door? Why did it shut!?Why couldnt they get it open!? Sorry I am weird sometimes. xD You know? And then my other problem would be where was Tonks and the guys? Was it like what happened at Harry's house?!?! They couldnt hear or see them? I dont know just wondering...I am weird.

OMG GINNY!!>) I knew it. xD I mean or you could want us to think that she is "EVIL" and then you would pull fast one on us! HA I am on to you now! Jk. Lol But really IF Draco and Harry come out of this or if Ginny is ever in Draco's site I wonder what Draco would do to her?! I know that he would give her a piece of his mind. >D...I wonder if you can make some one go crazy by using your mind?hmmmm...Dont know. But if what your hencing at I have no doubt in my mind that Draco will get her back...oh he will get her back VERY good. >xD I really cant wait for that!!!

POOR LUNA!!! I mean I knew she was crazy from the begining(Hence why we all love her :D) But I wasnt really shocked if she went mad..intill she did! xD I was like O^o. I did laugh thou. It was kinda funny to see what she would do if she DID went mad.

IT CANT END!!>.< I dont want it too!! You will have to start a new story then!! Right!?!? lol. I am now a hug fan of yours. Also just wondering will there be any Kinky sex later..if later? *takes a cookie* I will wait for the next chapter.ehheheeI wonder what Dracos reaction you know? Will it be the whole "You little *beep, beep* Slut!I will kill you!" or will it be "I knew it! You were leading us on!" or something...or will it be both..either way I really cant wait to see his reaction...and i wonder what Harrys will be.....hmm..maybe he will be shock!??!hehe I really wnat to know now. xD

~Ley
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From danradfan84 on July 02, 2007
I wander what happened to Ginny, even though I can't stand her. I really want to know, can't wait for the next chapter.
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From misslala on July 02, 2007
Wow. This was a very intense and damn well written chapter! :) You keep surpising me at every turn of events and that cliffie is evil! Wow... I will be calm and hope for a good explaination for Ginny's actions, but then again, it might not be Ginny at all.

That may be one of those tricks old Voldie is using against them, he is rather familiar with Ginny from her first year. Hrm... you are driving me nuts! :) I love this story! >:) Can't wait for the update.
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From ehcie0utada on July 02, 2007
Since you didn't update today, I was able to post a sole review for chapter 64. I will also add some comments that apply to the whole story, as I noticed that it is starting to get to the end *sniff*. Man, I hate to see your story come to a close.

Anyway, here goes...

Review: Chapter 64

Wow, Ginny is getting bitchier and bitchier by the minute. She is really pushing Draco's patience too far. Not only is Draco pissed - all the readers of your fic are pissed with her!

You must really hate her. You have no idea how evil you made Ginny in your story! Hehehe!

Draco's "little-big" insecurity is a good add. In a way it makes Draco more human. He had been good at hiding his pain from the other members of the Order for a long time that he seems robotic at times. Of course, we readers know the pain he's going through because of the diary entries, but to the HP characters he must look like someone incapable of having any human emotion. That uncalled-for outburst was a great way to show to the members of the Order that Draco is the same as anybody else - a human who also suffers from the turmoil happening around and in them.

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From stasa on July 01, 2007
Draco
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From claire2007 on July 01, 2007
that made me feel really sorry for draco
and i think you're definaitly right about him being insecure

and about a weasley dieing ... there are so many at least one has to
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From on July 01, 2007
Wow. O.O I saw some real Ginny bashing there. xD Not that I dont mind. Lol. As for Harry ahd Draco's little game woot! xD I have to say that thank god that was a dream of Ginnys. I think Draco would have gone mad if he found out those where true....thou...He kind already is. xD

CHARLIE!??! Whoa there...that I wasnt expecting. O.O Man..but youa re right. THIS is a war. And I give you soo much credit for making it feel like a 'war'. You are right. Good people do have to die in wars. Its just the way it is.

I really hope that Harry knows what he is getting into. lol.

Now, I agree with you also on the whole Draco thing. I kind dont like it when he is all HIGH and mighty. I dont mind it but I think he is human too. I hate it when they have fanfic where either Harry or Draco cheat on another. If its rape thats different..but Draco and Harry are just soo....Prefect for each other.Why would they cheat you know?

Hahaha. Great reasoning for killing Charlie. I know. You cnat kill Bill. Dude he is the only hottest Weasly. Jk lol. But After the whole "werewolfe" thing that happened in book 6...I just..I hope to dear god that JKR DOSENT kill him. First she makes him scared for life.(his face) Then he is half werewolfe, and if she killed him...well lets say there wouldnt be many fans that would be happy. >> Percy...GAH..I do hope he dies. I think that would help some of us crazy fans out. Lol. Eh...really I could care less about Ron..I think I have said that before..but it would be sad if he did die...as for Ginny..I hope Draco poisons her....>> Or maybe she Betrays them all! Like she hands them over to the darkside! It might explan some of the reason why some people are going missings...She has actess to the minsitry...hmm...Sorry. Its just what makes my little insane yaoi fangirl happy. xD I know that cant happen. But its worth dreaming right? xD Fred and Geroge are other characters that I would be horror struck if they died in the book or this story. I would be like O.O YOU DIDNT!? Then I would freak out and then about 10 minutes later after I had some ice cream I would be fine. xD Lupin, Tonks, Moody....hmm...that would something differet? As for Draco and Harry.......I wouldnt have it any other way. If they came out perfectly find I would be like...eh...oh is that possible? But I DO expect them to live...just not all in the best of health....hehheeh...hmm....I just read something...men getting pregenet.....xD Sorry I had to share. But I would think that one of them would have some broken bones you know? Maybe they might start a little family...wow I am already thinking of the future. xD WHAT YOU CAN NOT END IT!!! NOT THAT SOON! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO FOR THE REST OF MY SUMMER?! I have already read all your other fics.....I really hope you write more.^^......wow..this is turning into a long long review..xD I also had a question for you but I can remember......oh man...>-< Also Yay for More Death Note. xD *takes a smut cookie*Omg these are yummy....you should be a cheif. xD Cant wait for the next chapter. ^^

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From thrnbrooke on July 01, 2007
Ginny isn't good enough to fake memories so who polyjuiced themselves to look like Harry? Sooo need chapter 65!
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