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By : Angelsfear

From misslala on June 30, 2007
You are still doing so wonderful! :) I love it. I hate that CHarlie died, but I am aware that people are going to die. I am interested to see what happens at the Orphanage and whether Sanpe turns up, if it is an ambush or if nothing happens at all aside from finding a horcrux. whee! *hugs* Hopefully things will get better soon!
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From claire2007 on June 30, 2007
great chapter
you can tell it's getting near the end though
kinda sad cos its been so long
i'm amazed that you've been able to keep it so good the whole way through and keep everyone reading =]

glad you made draco taller too, he just doesn't suit being short
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From NightLo on June 30, 2007
Finally I have enough rest and strength to face computer again...

Well - actually I must admit that...such chance of torturing Ginny was way too good, as this Ginny is practically a prat in disguise...

However, for Neville, though he was not BLW, still he was a first-war veteran...and I agreed, such fate was worse, maybe he has been tortured and made fun of in his past, making up his present presonalities. Still, as pointed out by Dumbledore, he has great potentials, he has great potential to accept, to forgive and to love. He really can be a great help - even more helpful than Ginny - and he has proven himself correct...good work, Nev.

But finally...I see my most happy sentence of this story - really, this is everyone's war, and all must be prepared. False hope on relying on others to protect you or doing for you is incorrect, you must fight for something you want...and Ginny better to think that Harry was hers...sure this is wrong and even Molly and Arthur cannot help her...

And for the last horcrux and the link with Kingsley...well, has the information of destroying the fourth horcrux and the plan leaked out? I agree the release must be either a trap or a hint from Snape, and this was the reason that they fight - really...just like family fight between godfather, son and son-in-law, really really interesting! However, having a fight on Valentine Day, what a memory!

BTW - would Draco and Hermione try to brew some potions and...lubricant for future use? You know - for precaution!
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From mystiedaze on June 29, 2007
yet again antoher wonderful chapter. i say good for neville standing up to ginney. someone else has got to tell that girl what for.

the sex was hot!!! so wonderful.

next chapter please.
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From Ryko427 on June 29, 2007
Well I absolutely love love love the past two chapters. Sorry I didn't review, but I have been busy with someone and have been going to bed late without reading. Teheheh, anyways! I think you are definitely doing a marvelous job, and you keep that suspense going with Snape and such which is great! I do hope Snape is a goody goody =( because if he is bad, well... it will be Draco's fault that they are led into a trap! I would like to continue reviewing right now, but I am very tired and my mind can't think of what else to possibly say about the chapters except I love them and all the smut your adding ^_^.

Much Love, and Keep up the Good Work!
Ryko
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From stasa on June 29, 2007
Snape is good, I know he is, please, please don
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From thrnbrooke on June 29, 2007
Sooo need chapter 64! I think Neville is coming into his own.
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From eLeMeNOhPee on June 29, 2007
i love this story. and even if i haven't reviewed after every chapter, i'm still here avidly awaiting the next installment. =)
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From ehcie0utada on June 29, 2007
Okay, this will be another looooonnnnnnnggggggggggggg review for both Chapter 62 and 63. Again, I apologize for all the trouble.

Review: Chapter 62
I must say, the one thing that struck me the most was the Legilimency and Occlumency "test" that Draco did to the Gryffindors. Especially with Ginny. It just shows how much of an arrogant git she is. I sometimes wonder why she is put in Gryffindor and not in Slytherin...I mean she's too arrogant (and sly) as Draco! The only difference is she lacks the common sense Draco has.

It's not that obvious (yeah right) that I'm not much of a fan of Ginny.

"Locked in a room with those three, purposefully throwing all the most violent and brutal curses and hexes that you can imagine while they pitifully attempt to defend themselves.
That
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From misslala on June 28, 2007
OOoh I like hot angsty make up sex. Whew!!!!! How brilliant! I love it! I can't wait for more.
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From mystiedaze on June 28, 2007
it is nice to see some common ground between draco and nevile. i honestly hope all of them get bella at the same time. could you imagine what that would be like. kinda like draco and friends that one train ride home. ginney's attitude towards draco is something else. she defientaly does not like having to lose to draco. and her attitude might impare her ability to learn what draco needs to teach her.

keep up the excellent work.

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From claire2007 on June 28, 2007
loved it =]
and cant wait for the kinky stuff youve got in mind lol
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From stasa on June 28, 2007
Good chapter and I liked that Draco and Neville made some kind of a, not a connection, wouldn
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From thrnbrooke on June 28, 2007
Sooo need chapter 63! I can see Neville being strong in occulmency. He's been hiding that secret for years. And attempting to live on as well. Glad Harry is getting better. He better hurry.
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From misslala on June 28, 2007
Another wonderful chapter as always. :) I found the scene with Draco and Neville to be enlightening. :) Thank you so much for sharing!!! I can't wait for the update!
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