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By : Angelsfear

From redneckmama236 on June 28, 2007
Awww poor Draco no love on Valentines Day. I like the way Neville proved to be good at something. Cant wait to see what is coming. Guess ill just have to wait and see? thanks for the goodies *takes sweets* did i mention i love this story.
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From NightLo on June 27, 2007
Well...Harry, Remus and Hermione got it all wrong - those who knew about that night, apart from DE and the Order, also includeed some students...esp. one red hair Ginny! And her love for Harry, care for Hermione and Ron would possibly 'protect' them from the public and the paper...Damn! Actually I quite agree with Draco's suggestion, though using a discreet potion would be more...more appropriate. And with Draco's skill, this would just be too easy for him!

For the training, that was nice, really - when you can have EVERYTHING, why would one ice prince demand revenge or getting himself hurt rather than sex and HOT HOT kink? Though I agree that only with Voldermort gone and Harry is still ALIVE with a COHERENT mind...would there be a future for both....but I am really tempt to read some kinky stuff like role play, cross dressing as maid/teacher-student...and other sexual aids... (but I doubt, even the wish is granted, they are unable to access those materials)...

If ever Ginny is the one, she needs to be revealed SOON...
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From claire2007 on June 27, 2007
hark work for harry there
but i think he needed it
hmmm wondering if he'll see some of dracos memories like he did snapes
annnnnd valentines day soon
x x x x x x
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From ehcie0utada on June 27, 2007
Sorry if I was a day late with my review. Too much homework at hand, as what I've said in my e-mail, and I was only able to read chapter 60 at around 10 pm yesterday. Anyway, I included my review for chapter 60 with chapter 61's, so this might be pretty long. Hope I won't bore you with my observations, Daft Fear. Anyway, here goes...

Review: Chapter 60
That Parseltongue bit was really REALLY clever. I have always been wondering why Lucius Malfoy swore allegiance to Voldemort, a half-blood, when he despises anyone who is not a pure-blood. Your explanation about Malfoys having a weakness for Parseltongue really suits that. I wonder how you came up with that idea. JK Rowling really has some serious competition.

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From stasa on June 27, 2007
I hope Draco teaches Harry how to defend his mind, he need
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From Ryko427 on June 27, 2007
+_+

If you kill off... well Kingsley I guess I can deal with.. but if there is an unhappy ending you will pay dearly!

And what is GOING ON?!!??!?! So confuzzled and entices me to read more and more. I can't wait for the next chapter, erm you can get some chips too... or actually... some cereal and milk... The whole cookie thing isn't too good for my figure... Especially after eating 61 of them -_-

Anyways! I always love your chapters, and I adored this one! It was cute, and funny, and I want Draco to kick Ginny's teeth in. I hate her, and I want the game to continue! NOW! It was just getting good! Soon shirts would be next! Hehehe, shirtless Harry and Draco ^_^. OH AND I SOOOOOO WANT HARRY TO WIN! HARRY NEEDS TO FUCK DRACO! DRACO HAS HAD IT COMING FOR A LONG TIME! NEEDS TO BE DONE!
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From thrnbrooke on June 27, 2007
Soooo need chapter 62! Nice chapter!
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From on June 27, 2007
...hmm....I wonder who saw Draco.As you hinted at. I think he is right I think some one is warning him. I thought at first it could have been his mother but then I was like oh duh she is DEAD. The Black tamperyingy showed that. And like they said I dont think it was Snape....hmm....*ponders*

Now as for Luna...That girl is one of my other favorite characters. And if I could wish one character a happy ending it would be her. But she wont need it because she is always happy in her own little world. And I also was just wondering..How was Luna able to stay alive? Not that I would want her dead but Cho and Pansy have both died. And werent they a little bit mroe powerful then Luna? Well Pansy. So I kinda wonder where Luna was all this time during the war? You know...I was just thinking out loud. ^^;;; But I did like her mark to Draco. Totally Luna.

Hehehe I liked that game you made for Harry and Draco. *snickers* I love how he left no loop holes either. Good Draco. I cant wait to see more of this game. xD

Hurt GINNY! >.< I dont think anyone will miss her. xD
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From Shananigans on June 27, 2007
GOod chapter, I wish they didn't interupt. I would be interesting for Harry to finally be able to master defending his mind. I'm like soo confused about the article, well, not confused. But yea.. i dunno. I liked this chapter tho! Neville and Luna:D:D Luna is a mystery, thats for sure. Good chapter, can't wait for your next update!
Shannon xoxox
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From misslala on June 27, 2007
My god, if Petunia sold out Draco, so help me! Although Bella seems like a good enough candidate. It does seem off that Harry, Ron or Hermione weren't mentioned. LOL Gods woman you have this thing planned so well and so very eloquently exocuted as well :) I can't wait for more. I'm a greedy fan!! LOL
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From claire2007 on June 26, 2007
Perhaps it was because he hadn
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From Ryko427 on June 26, 2007
I liked this chapter! So much cuteness was involved ^_^. Although lately no dreams -_-. Sorry I didn't review last night, I got caught up with someone on the phone for hours, and went to bed right after that. And thank you sooooo much for the cake! And wine... but I am not a fan of wine... *spills wine into a plant's soil* Maybe it will grow grapes to make wine now!

I thought it was cute that they finally held hands! They have never held hands, and Draco is not dangerous! Stupid newspaper.... they know nothing... And Kingsley! Omg! How could you?! HOW COULD YOU?! If you kill him off! I will kill you off! Kingsley is one of my most favorite characters! I can easily picture him in my head! Strong built black man with a thick African accent, bald, maybe a little facial hair, and that huge gold hoop earing! He sorta reminds me a djinn.... would be funny is he was half djinn ^_^! Oh and if you don't know what a djinn is, well it is like a Genie... or Geney? I think it is Genie... you know the blue dude from Aladin? That is a djinn.

Anyways! Loved chapter 60! We hit the breaking point, many more chapters to come I hope! Can't wait!

Much Love
Ryko
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From stasa on June 26, 2007
Thanx for answering my anxious questions :)
They ware really bugging me... As for the new chapter, I am truly amazed that after 60 chapters you still managed to keep my full attention! I bow down to your writing skills *insert me bowing* :D
Like that the war is getting more intense, and even do I
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From sunset20 on June 26, 2007
Thank you for another wonderful chapter! I must tell you, I really needed this today! I have just finished reading HBP and I was shattered. I never really liked Dumbledore but I was sobbing during his funeral, it really got to me! Especially when Harry was thinking about Draco and what he might have to face now! Only seeing Draco healthy and happy with Harry could calm me down, so thank you! :D
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From NightLo on June 26, 2007
Oh...good development, now naturally they cared for each other and practically can be released as an offical couple...However, for Harry, if Potters are weak to dark forms of soul magic - how did this relate to his scar? Any bad influence and control? Definitely Harry needs more practices on Occlumens and Legilimens in order to protect his mind and soul and magic! Oh~~ and definitely more physical training and disarm/reple magic training, so that Harry can get near to Voldi and punch him in face...really - a top must-to-do list...

Ginny...memory charm and control spells...hehe...though memory charms will be too obvious, however, if ever...ever Ginny develops some attachment to others, or just simple control her to be with others and declare public....a once and for all removal technique for love rival!

For Black...well - one suggestion - as they are obsessed with powers, then...try to send some obsence pictures of Voldi and Harry to Bellatrix's mind and triggers her madness - a good and discreet way to remove her...BTW - remember to notify Tonks of her weakness...

And finally, Draco must find a way to hide himself, even in a glamour...and Harry should stay with him ...

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