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Reviews for Harry Potter and The White Queen (BP3)

By : slashpervert
  • From NightLo on April 16, 2007
    I do agree that construct would be an issue, lucky that now a solution has been found!
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  • From Angelsfear on April 15, 2007
    Awwwww Draco can't fly properly anymore!!! *sob* that must be heart wrenching >_< I know I would cry if I had suddenly lost that ability, not that i have it to begin with T_T anyway it was such a wonderful chapter! The scene in the turret was fantastic!
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  • From LycheeTea on April 15, 2007
    Poor Draco, I wish they could do something about his arm... or atleast get something prettier and lighter so he won't hate it so much... its making him so miserable!
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  • From NightLo on April 15, 2007
    Since I am unable to finish the poll in your livejournal, I leave my comment here:
    1) I would choose - I like it especially when this can enhance the story and mix it well..(sth similar)
    2) Harry - personal preference
    3) Harry - especially after reading chapter 15, though now and before I highly doubt that would be Draco (as this one is too emotional, just like a pregnant male/woman)

    Okay, back to story comment - obviously that construct hand issue needs to be discussed, as this is a life matter, if help is available, would Harry ask for it? How about Snape? He should know about that and why didn't he act?
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  • From yume1122 on April 15, 2007
    ^_^
    i'm starting to see the M-preg coming...s'why the Manor accepted them...
    & Narcissa's going to be a problem isn't she? talk about Wedding Crahsers.... sheesh
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  • From Jan on April 14, 2007
    What a fabulous update. Please keep updating as quickly I just love this story. ^__^
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  • From Angelsfear on April 14, 2007
    aww poor Draco has to explain everything for the rest of us stupid people, like Harry hahaha I guess the Manor knows about Mpreg XD sneaky little house, isn't it? not so little @_@ anyway lol great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From LycheeTea on April 14, 2007
    LOL it means that one of them is going to get pregnant!!! LOL! I've nvr liked MPreg stories before, but now I can't help but look forward to it.
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  • From NightLo on April 14, 2007
    That is confusing, or is that your plan? But if the magic of the Manor will ONLY accept a pure-blood wizard/witch that is capable of producing an heir, and it can detect things that is still unknown...I would look forward to the visit of Godric Hollow.

    However, if ever time comes to part (e.g. confrontation with Narcissa), I believe Harry would accept and let it go.
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  • From Angelsfear on April 13, 2007
    Ah SNAPE! nooo he's always so mean!! Ah well maybe Harry can curse him good this time or something hahaha that would be great T_T but I don't think it would help matters. Ah well, anyway, I love the little scenes where they just hold each other ^^ it's so tender and sweet, I just melt inside! Must know what Snape wants though!
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  • From LycheeTea on April 13, 2007
    Hmm... Wonder what Snapey wants, can't be anything good... Guess we'll have to see!
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  • From kalaway on April 13, 2007
    I love the setup of one "line" Draco, one "line" Harry. It seems like it would be confusing, but it works really well. I've never read a story that showed the emotions of more than one character without being muddled. Really a unique and great job!
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  • From NightLo on April 13, 2007
    So...what does Snape want to talk about? Binding? Horcrux? Wedding? Mind me - they are married and bonded already, only one thing to change - the sexual binding...

    Still, does Harry have any special talent?
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  • From Angelsfear on April 12, 2007
    AH THAT WAS SO FRIGHTENING! I was biting my lip and shaking the whole way through! Just the description makes me want to cringe X_X to think of what Harry and Draco must have felt there, AH it's just so scary! OMG I'm still shaking hahah great chapter! Need more!
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  • From LycheeTea on April 12, 2007
    Gosh that must of been awful to see, Poor Draco... but yay another Hocrux down! I wonder how many there are left... Great update!
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