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Reviews for Harry Potter and The White Queen (BP3)

By : slashpervert
  • From NightLo on April 06, 2007
    Okay, more questions coming instead of comments...so, does the order Harry gave in chapter 3 outdone all other orders in the future? Would Harry remember that particular piece of order and remake it? Or would Harry just ignore and ask Draco to do whatever he wants? Personally I support this idea as they are now married, they should be equal instead of Dom/Sub...though I notice you have put up such warning in the summary...

    For the guest list, would Draco re-acquaint with his former Slytherin friends? Especially Pansy, Blaise, Goyle and Crabbe? Would there be interaction later? As some of their fathers knew about the truth, how would the juniors react?

    Lastly, is there a possibility for Draco to have his own hand back? Though you have explained clearly before, would Harry try something for this?

    BTW, using lilies as flowers is a good choice - as it means 'pure' - a good word to describe their love!
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  • From NightLo on April 06, 2007
    Well...I am just thinking while reading chapter 4...as Draco might not have very good experiences/memories in the Manor, can Harry 'help' along in creating new and happy and exciting ones (please note the multiple)?

    Well - one more question before I move on - will Cissa appear later in the story?
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  • From swirly on April 06, 2007
    Boy, after reading for a whole week I finally caught up with you, and it kinda sucks cause now I have to wait for the next chapter to come out. I love this story so far. Something that bothers me though: In the first story you were pretty HBP compliant with Remus and Tonks, but then you brought up a Sirius/Remus relationship, so is Remus just trying to put Tonks off, without admitting that he doesn't like woman that way or what? When are you going to go back to the Horcrux thing, not that don't like all the...umm...smut, but well they have to get rid of Voldemort somehow. And wouldn't he be planning to attack Harry and Draco at the wedding. I hope Narcissa is found soon so that Draco has his mom again. How does the whole Mpreg work, because it doesn't seem as if either Harry or Draco (or anyone else) thinks of that as a possibility? I would think that Harry and Draco could change the aspects of their bond they don't like by repeating a 'bonding' but planning what they say while they do it, that way they can get rid of the whole need to have sex everyday with Harry topping (which you haven't mentioned in a while).

    Well, can't wait for the next chapter (and the next one after that, and the one...well you get the point.)
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  • From NightLo on April 06, 2007
    Before I carry on reading - I forgot to ask - what is Harry's special talent?? Draco has skills in potions and sensing magic, but Harry ONLY has flying speciality?
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  • From Selera on April 06, 2007
    Lovely chapter I look forward to the next.
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  • From soloflamelady on April 05, 2007
    I just love all this story. Sex and intruge that is so hot a roller coaster feeling that I just can't stop reading. That just means you have to keep writing. Now I want to read with babies just love babies I do hope it is draco that gets pregnant I'd love to see a very very protective Harry. So please update soon and more more more
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  • From NightLo on April 05, 2007
    Just wondering...before goint to sleep - are there 2 bindings now? Would the first one, especially the sexual part on Draco would be removed? Or the second one override the first one?
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  • From Angelsfear on April 05, 2007
    awwww poor Draco is so sad! I wants to hug him! Now the question is: is Narcissa alive? *dundundun* and is Snape going to make a big scene out of the wedding thing? *gasp* I need to know! And Draco really needs a proper hug...and a cheering charm. Yep.
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  • From Jan on April 05, 2007
    Gods! I feel so sorry for Draco. I wish there was something you could do for him. Like a miracle happening and the hand coming back out when Voldamort is dead or Hermione or Severus finding a spell or a potion to rebuild his hand, like Voldamort got a body again or something like that. I don't know, I just feel so bad for him and Harry too. Or maybe like Voldy did for Wormtail. Well either ways please update soon. ^__^
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  • From Selera on April 05, 2007
    Poor Draco.. if only he wasn't stufk with that artificial hand...
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  • From LycheeTea on April 05, 2007
    Poor Draco, he must be sad about his arm again... I hope he gets over that... I'm looking forward to the wedding.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 05, 2007
    Poor Draco! I sooo need chapter 7! Will Severus make trouble at the wedding? Is Narcissa alive? Will she support them?
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 04, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 6!
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  • From Angelsfear on April 04, 2007
    Awww Draco is adorable! The H in his bedpost is so cute lol and I love how his parents thought it was school XD lol I can just imagine a 12 year old Draco carving that into the wood ^^
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  • From Selera on April 04, 2007
    That was lovely. I look forward to the next chapter. So when do you find out who is gonna get preggers?
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