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Reviews for Harry Potter and The White Queen (BP3)

By : slashpervert
  • From LycheeTea on April 04, 2007
    Awww how sweet, Poor Draco feeling that way about his arm, but atleast Harry doesn't have a problem with it!
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  • From Jan on April 03, 2007
    The last line Draco used on Bill and Fleur was a little corny but sweet. And again another great update.
    Please update soon. ^__^
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  • From LupinsLady on April 03, 2007
    Chapter three was simply HOT!!! I love the nasty Draco and that chapter was written incredibly. I've just read chapter four and the discription of Malfoy Manor is awesome. Can't wait for an update. What will Harry and Draco do on their first night in the manor?
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  • From graballz on April 03, 2007
    Chapter 4--Okay, I'm basically brain dead right now...and completely masochistic because I can't resist clicking the "next chapter" button...

    God, what a house!!!! FUCKing christ!!! Oh shit!!!! Merde!!! Merde merde putain de merde!!!! Draco's speaking French again!!!! (PS that was a REALLY vulgar phrase in French I just typed...don't use it around children or your mother haha)

    Formal!Draco!!!! *curses happily* I'm gonna die!!! *squealing* AHHHH BRILLIANT CHAPTER!!!! Very nice!!
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  • From Angelsfear on April 03, 2007
    I'm always excited when they go to Malfoy Manor, in every fic, because I love the idea of that house ^^ this was such an amazing chapter, too. All of them were so dumbfounded by the rooms and Draco is such an amazing host lol I wanna live there! haha Need to know what Harry and Draco are going off to do ^_^
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  • From graballz on April 03, 2007
    Okay...going for Chapter 3...so far, so good...I'm loopy (sober...but loopy) but I think this might be the end of me for right now...*shaking with anticipation*

    Chapter 3--oh oh oh ohoh even better than I imagined!!!!!! MmmmmmmI remember that parseltongue conversation........GAH now I wanna go reread THAT!!!! (soooooooooooooooooooo ADD!)

    Harry......bound....tied up.........*yummy* *flashbacks....* whimpering....much whimpering.....SO FUCKING HOTTTT

    aYES YES EYS SAY MY NAME BITCH!!!!! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKKKKKKING HELL SAY MY NAME BITCH!!!!!

    *limp* fucking beautiful...and get Draco a kitten....a magical kitten that stays forever a kitten...
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  • From graballz on April 03, 2007
    Chapter 2--*giggling madly* I LOVE the naturallnesss (fuck it I can't spell anymore) of Harry and Draco in everyday life! I WANT THAT

    YAY THEY GOT IT!!!! *happy dance* Victory sex??? (NO NONO NOT BETWEEN HARRY AND RON!!!! Ack, talk about killing myself! Harry and Draco in one corner...Ron and Hermione in the other....fuck, you have NO idea how much action my backspace key is getting to make these words spelled right!)

    Losing grammar...and we're not even to the sex yet! (This is a baaaaaaaaaaaad sign...it must be spillover from the end of Chapter 1...)

    GAHHHHHH WHAT I WOULDN'T GIVE TO BE AN ONLOOKER AT THE MINISTRY RIGHT THIS FUCKING SEDOND!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD YES YES HOT KISS!!!!!!! BLAH YEA YES YES EYS YES TAKE A NAP YOU HORNY BOYS!!!!!!!
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  • From graballz on April 03, 2007
    Chapter 1 (continued)--I am going to die. I am going to die if I read more than one chapter in one sitting of this story because my brain explodes. (Not that I mind, mind you...but I certainly can't be expected to write a short or coherent review if you INSIST on keeping up this delicious hottness)

    That...was....SO....bloody....hott! *falls to knees with Yami in front of altar* I bow to you, you lovely writers, you! And FUCK YOU for making me cry with such sweetness at the end of Chapter 1!!! (Yes, I made it to the end!!!! woo of...chapter...one...3 more to go until I'm caught up....better start digging my grave now!)

    Actually, no not "FUCK YOU"...."HEY YOU, HAVE HARRY FUCK DRACO" or something to that effect...haha

    I love you guys for writing this! Okay, I'm going to try for Chapter 2...and I think that I might have to go with reading the ENTIRE chapter before writing the review...if I can even do that...because writing the review WHILE reading YOUR chapters causes my brain to short circuit and malfunction.
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  • From Selera on April 03, 2007
    Look forward to the next chapter so get it up soon.
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  • From LycheeTea on April 03, 2007
    Gosh the Malfoy manor sounds amazing, that would be a place I really want to see, Draco is so gracious to his guests, I love the part where Fluer was like to Bill, "You deed not talk about zee wedding..." LOL!
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  • From graballz on April 03, 2007
    Chapter 1--OH MY GOD THEY'RE MARRIED!!!!! HOW FREAKING CUTE IS TAHT!!1!!!!! It makes me want to find a black kitten and masturbate on it...(inside joke...dont' ask unless you really want to know...and then email me)

    Ohhhh, explanations! Information is GOOOOOOOOD! (And SO well thought out too! AWESOME!)

    Grrrrr on Lucius for making Draco and Harry wince...bastard.

    HAHAHAHAHAHA NOW THEY HAVE TO TELL EVERYONE THEY ARE MARRIED!!!!! THAT'S FUCKING HYSTERICAL!!!! I WAS IN STITCHES!!!!!

    Mmmmmm my Draco is one smart cookie! OH MY GOD YOUR INSIGHTS INTO MY DRACO AMAZE ME!!!!! Every fucking time!

    "As you wish"......LMAOROTFL Are you FUCKING kidding me???? "Princess Bride" reference??? REALLY????? FUCKING BLOODY SODDING HELL LMAO

    *whimper* Why do they keep kissing each other?? This is turning so romantic, I might have to seriously go find a black kitten....

    *gasp* Name changes??? *raises eyebrow* Hmmmmm how about "Harry and Draco 'Hottest couple EVER' Fucktoys" and just do away with the whole "Potter" and "Malfoy" conundrum!

    HALLOWEEN???? Ooooohhhhh Harry!1 *hugs* YAY DRACO!!!! FUCKING BLOODY BRILLIANT HELL! You guys are amazing! (You guys being the writers! FUCKING WOW)

    Remus....crying....sappy Draco *bursts into happy tears* Damn you for making me cry when I'm kitten-less!

    OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!!!! "worked up"......"arse cheeks".....*laughing through the tears* That's great!!!!

    You had me up until "Merde"...gooey puddle...coherent review to be finished later...
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 03, 2007
    Wonderful! I love the colors! And Lilies! Sooo need chapter 5! The first night in Malfoy Manor. Though I'm worried about Harry. He seems overwelmed by his new home. Foreshadowing?
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  • From jademalfoy on April 03, 2007
    I realize that you have the whole story written out and are only posting one chapter at a time for the sake of your betas, but I am leaving for boot camp in a week and like this story so much i would like to finish reading it before I leave. So I was wondering if you cold email the rest of the chapters to me plz? I don't mind if they are beta'd or not I could maybe even help with beta-ing.
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  • From Angelsfear on April 02, 2007
    That was awesome!!!!! Sooooooo hot I love the 'evil old Draco' scenes because it's just so delicious haha and the cat thing made me laugh! I love it I need moreeee!
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  • From YamiBakura on April 02, 2007
    Chapter 3

    They roleplay! .... As themselves. XDD

    That was what I was thinking about halfway through this. I don't need to tell you how much I love this story/series, and the two of you. *holds up a sign that says, "Biggest Fan" messily*
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