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By : sunset20

From Extraho on September 06, 2007
i call that a bitter sweet ending, because harry and draco still loves eachother!!!!!! it leaves my heart physically aching every time. frey looks exactly like draco. why dot he just divorc her and marry the real one? a sequel???
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From thrnbrooke on April 08, 2007
You blew me away! I'm glad they both got their happily ever after. Though I wish it were together!
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From graballz on April 08, 2007
PS After reading your story, I had to go to youtube and watch my favorite Harry/Draco slash videos to reassure myself that they were together!!! (and look at my "Harry and Draco" pictures folder on my computer) LMAO I'm such a nerd! I don't think anyone else has ever made me have to do that before! Bravo you!
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From graballz on April 08, 2007
Chapter 4--Awww, thank you! (That feels SO inadequate for me to say, I hope you know). THANK YOU (there, maybe that's better!) Oooohhh, a present? And it's not even my birthday yet! haha Okay, on to the angsty-goodness!

*whimper* My poor Draco baby! Too hollow to cry?? THAT's bad! (I've only been TOO hollow to cry after I've cried myself out a bunch...POOR THING!)

Freya??????!!!!!!!!!! *death glare* OH NO! She looks like Draco?????? (I can't decide if that makes me happy or sad! MGRASRSRE and just GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR) haha Okay, so if she LOOKS like Draco...then Harry should just marry the REAL Draco...not a look-a-like! I'm really, really, really torn here between WANTING to hate her and somehow...not being able to! I guess I'll have to settle for glaring at her and growling, rather than *actually* trying to kill her like I was going to last chapter (*wink*)

THERE WAS AN 'US'!!!!! There should have been, anyway! NO NO NO SHE'S NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN MAKE HARRY HAPPY!!!! Why can't Draco make Harry happier than Freya can? *whimper* Draco! IT'S DRACO WHO MAKES YOU HAPPY, YOU BLOODY GRYFFINDOR!!!!!!

Oh, my baby! Draco! *reaches out for Draco* He's on a downward spiral! (Sadly, I know how that feels!) *sticks out lower lip* Fuck you, Harry, you jerk. See what you did? NOW GO STOP IT AND TELL DRACO YOU LOVE HIM!

Taylor???? *suspicious* Hmmmmm, I reserve judgement for Taylor and the right to pour all of my hatred for Freya into hating Taylor too.....we shall see.............. but for now GRRRRRRRR on you too, Taylor! (Just because you're not Harry...and Draco met you!)

"blue eye"...you mean, Draco got punched? (as in, "his eye was black and blue"?) If his eye is bruised, it's called a "black eye" or you could say that "his eye was black and blue" (the color of bruises) Sorry, just a quick English thing! :)

Awwww, thank you, Taylor, for helping my Draco! Maybe you're not as bad as I feared...*gasp* But maybe you are!!!!!! Draco told Taylor about Harry, and they STILL became a couple????? (bastard Taylor and bitch Freya....my Draco and Harry belong TOGETHER!) *gasp* Harry has a family???

*GASP* *SPEECHLESS* OH. MY. GOD. You...you.....OH MY GOD!!!!! (I'm about to cry!) I AM SO TOUCHED!!!!!! Oh wow!!!!! *BIG HUG* Oh wow! lol I...I...I don't know what to say!!!!! other than "OMG OMG OMG OMG" I had to put the laptop down for a second because I jumped up, covered my mouth with my hand, and danced around the room (like an idiot, mind you) for about two minutes before I went back to the screen to see if my eyes were playing tricks on me!!!!!! And then I started to well up!!!!!!!! OH WOW THANK YOU! Seriously.....just WOW

*giggle* another set of Weasley twins? Watch out, world!

*crying* OMG You did it! You made me cry! Harry gave up on him and Draco to have a family (and a daughter named Andrea) with Freya???? (Again....problem with deciding whether to be happy or sad here!!! So I'll settle for tears!) haha

Ohhhhh, Harry! Babies, you could have had a family together!!!!1 (Right??? It could have happened!!!) *whimper*

Oh no!!! She saw the tear! *on the edge of my seat with a huge box of Kleenex* OH MY GOD!!!!!! *happy tears* OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!!!!! She she she called him "Uncle Draco"!!!!! *WHIMPER* SHE HUGGED HIM!!!!!!! OH THAT IS JUST TOO CUTE AND HEART WRENCHING!!!!! My heart is definitely wrenched and fluttering!!!!!!! YAY GO Andrea! ;)

*gasp* And what that did for Draco!!!!!!!! *happy sobbing* I think I'm going to die!!!!!! OH WOW

*reads paragraphs about the Look between Harry and Draco and dies*

OOHHHHHH SO TRAGIC!!!!!! (I'm speaking from beyond the grave now, btw)

DAMN! Fertile bitch...(and I mean that in the nicest way possible *grin while still sobbing* Yeah, I'm still sobbing...this could take a while)

*sobbing and whimpering* But it should be Harry and Draco!!!! Harry and Draco!!!! Yay to Taylor for being a good guy and all but HARRY AND DRACO!!!!!!!!!!!

Ohhhhhh, SO tragic!!!! Harry stole....Andrea gave it back.......BUT IT SHOULD STILL BE HARRY'S!!!!!!! *whimper* (This is SO ANGSTY!!!!!!! You weren't kidding about that!!!!!)

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA Yay a little bit of humor to make me laugh and not die from beyond the grave at such tragedy!!!!! (But Spice Girls? Really? 6-year-old Andrea listens to the Spice Girls????? Hmmmmmm, I'll have to get Draco to give her some "Disturbed"!!! That'll take care of this "Spice Girls" phase!!!!) ;)

Eeeeeeee!!!!!!! She's the Slytherin Princess???????? SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!! Just *eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

Happy Easter to you, too!!!! My fault for a happy ending? *big grin* I'll take that blame!!!!!

Alright, so in my broken little mind, here's what I see transpiring:

Since Draco and Taylor are part of the family (going on vacations together and all) and with both Harry and Draco teaching at Hogwarts, I envision a sort of "swinging" session breaking out between them! Wait, wait, hear me out!

Taylor discovers that he's bisexual, so he doesn't mind being paired with Freya all the time! And Harry and Draco still love each other, so THERE YOU GO! Harry and Freya are still married...Draco and Taylor are still together...but HARRY AND DRACO on the side! The kids never know, and the four of them are all mature adults to be able to handle Harry and Draco being together without jealousy!

What do you think? No? *lower lip*

Seriously, though, all kidding aside, this was a GREAT story, and I am so touched by the little Slytherin Princess you threw in there!!!! *hugs self then you* YAY Harry's little girl!!!!!!! THANK YOU!
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From SoriaUndead on April 07, 2007
this reminds me of something that happened to me and makes me wanna cry [DAMN YOU AND YOUR GOOD WRITING!] but in the end it gives me hope ^_^ thanks for that
WRITE SOMETHING HAPPY!! lol
you're a brilliant writer
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From thrnbrooke on April 05, 2007
Married? Why? Need chapter 4!
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From graballz on April 05, 2007
Chapter 3--Okay, I'm back to being happy-go-lucky today! YAY FOR CHAPTER 3!!!

"But"....I can't tell if that's good or bad! "But" is usually NEVER good! (as in "I love you, BUT...") BUT (haha) right now, Harry's...upset with Draco for saying "I love you" so the "but" could mean: "I tried not to love you BUT"

*squeals* Okay, fine, I'll read the actual chapter...*crosses fingers* Here's hoping!

Okay, still Draco's POV...right? Right. OH NO!! NO NO NO DON'T LEAVE!!! NO BAD BAD BAD DRACO, YOU'RE WRONG! YOU HAVE TO BE WRONG!!!! *whimper*

Oh please!!! Please he's wrong!!! It's not the end...right???

OH MY GOD!!!!! HE DID IT!!!! HE SAID IT!!!! YA-oh no! NO NO NO NO that's a bad "but" noNONONONONONONO

*whimper...deep breath...begin screaming at top of my lungs*

NO HARRY CAN'T GET MARRIED!!!!!! WHO'S THE BITCH!!!!! I'LL KILL HER!!!!! I'LL FUCKING KILL HER, STUPID TRAMP WHORE BITCH SLUT!!!!!!!!!! THERE IS NO BREAKING UP MY DRACO AND HARRY, AND SO HELP ME, I'LL FUCKING KILL HER IN HER GODDAMN WEDDING DRESS!!!!!!! WHO IS SHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*pause for breath* Oh wow, I'm worked up right now, but grinning wildly!!! GREAT chapter!! I feel so...alive! I was all scared and worried and shit when Draco thought it was the end (damn you, btw, for making me feel that :D ) and then relieved and happy, only to have it interrupted by that damn "but" I forgot about.

And now I'm ready to go on the warpath to find whatever cunt is coming between my Draco and his Harry...(see, I AM pissed off! haha)

NEEEEEEED Chapter 4!!!!!!
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From thrnbrooke on April 04, 2007
I think Harry protests too much. If he's not careful he's going to lose Draco! One day he's going to stop waiting! Need chapter 3!
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From graballz on April 04, 2007
Yay Chapter 2!!!! (Please be gentle...my mind is bruised right now!)

Chapter 2--Ohhhhhhh! *happy/sad/terrified* I don't know what to feel!!! my poor baby Draco! Lucius is a fucking bastard and I'm glad Draco killed him! YAY Harry went to him!!!

Unworthy....deserving of indifference?? *tearing up* I can't handle this right now! *whimper* OH MY GOD! I can't tell if Harry's REALLY being mean or if he's hurting too and covering for it! My babies! YOU LOVE EACH OTHER, YOU STUPID DOLTS! (said out of love, I assure you)

Ohhh, please, Chapter 3!!! What's wrong with Harry???
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From graballz on April 03, 2007
*happy dance* Another one of your stories!!!! I don't mind an open and emotional Draco...I mean, I like him dark and brooding and all, but I like open and emotional too! *pause happy dance* What's gonna happen to Harry??? *gulp* btw I just had a TOTALLY FUCKED UP idea for a story, and I felt so bad about what happened to Draco!!! I'm going to post it soon, I think!

Chapter 1--*whimper* Oh no, you weren't kidding, were you!!! My poor Draco! *hugs for Draco* I know, not as good as Harry, but it makes ME feel better!

Ohhhh, I like the plot twist of DRACO being the one who falls first and HARRY being the "playa" haha Like Chrissy said, normally it's the other way around, but this is interesting!!!

YES YES YOU DO, DRACO!!!! HARRY WILL COME BACK (he always comes back!!!) GREAT Chapter 1!!! I'm hooked! Let's have Chapter 2!!!
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From thrnbrooke on April 02, 2007
Oh no! I sooo need chapter 2! Don't let Draco kill himself! Harry needs to go fix this!
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From ANON - jenny on April 02, 2007
Such a sad start..... i will be waiting for the rest. thanks.
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