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Reviews for Life as I experience it

By : BlindedHP
  • From Expeliarmus on October 09, 2015
    Nooo, you can't leave it here!
    I loved those first chapters, just as I loved Life as I know it...
    I like the poems, they reflect Harry's state of mind and we don't have a lot of it otherwise.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 29, 2014
    Well so far I like it but I wish it was Mpreg. His problem is caused by Dursleys? But what's the grey and red eyes have to do with it? That's not Narcissa's baby is it? Or Voldemort is back? Again? Can't they put a big rock on his grave to keep him down?
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  • From SoulMore on March 16, 2014
    FAN!~
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  • From Ladydragonstar55 on December 23, 2013
    This is an awesome story I hope you come back to it.
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  • From hokuto92 on January 17, 2011
    Amazing! I just finished rereading Life as I know it (I read it a year ago) and then got to this. Please do continue
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  • From ANON - tamikolee on November 09, 2010
    Hey, I would love for you too finish this!!!!!:)
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  • From ANON - NJamicus on September 02, 2009
    I've not written any reviews before but I do like your works. I've already read 'Life as I know it' two times) And your poems are amusing. Write more of 'em there please)))
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2009
    Wow, I love where you're going with this. What snape did to VD hardly seems equal to the pain poor harry is suffering, but that's a hero's life, isn't it? I really like the poems at the begining, it gives another dimension to their relationship and harry's thoughts. Please e-mail me if you plan to continue this story. I can't wait to read what's happening with harry.
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  • From ANON - Hobbit on May 17, 2008
    just started this today, and i would love it if you could email me updates, your fics are some of my favorites. my email is zombie.sushi on yahoo.

    hope its not to late to vote about this but it sounds like Harry has mono. i was like that when i had it as a kid and the symptoms just fit very well. as for the memory loss i don't know, but it sounded like what he said about the baby was like what happened when Sybil had a prophecy about Harry in book 3. she didn't remember it.

    keep up the excellent work and wonderful portrayal of the BDSM dynamic between Harry and Severus. ((i myself am in a D/s relationship with my husband and its not often i see such a honest depiction of this type of relationship))

    feel free to email me if you like, i would love to talk if you have any questions:)
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  • From darkwish on October 23, 2007
    Wow, this is getting really good!I noticed sometimes you use have instead of has or had, I assume that has to do with English being a 2nd language for you? I only notice these things because I tend to play with languages a lot.
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  • From ANON - Britt-Britt on September 18, 2007
    OMG! I have been reading this after I read the prequel and the other current ongoing one: The Rules of life.

    I want to see where Snape and Harry take themselves.


    I also love the sub/Dom roles you have created- I want to know more about that type of relationship - also more on BDSM stuff too ^___^

    Keep up the goodwork - I am rooting for you!
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  • From flidaisus on July 13, 2007
    I've just finished reading Both parts to your stories. I'm rather pleased with how you've portrayed a Master/slave relationship like theirs. I'm a submissive, and had been looking for some good Snape/harry fics. I really enjoyed this. Any plans on finishing it? Do you think you'll use more aspects of BDSM into their relationship? Great story.
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  • From scobb0707 on May 09, 2007
    Amazing I just loved that you made a sequal I was like Yeah!! oh and I like the poems
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  • From erisjade on April 25, 2007
    A bit of cc here, try to keep the a/n's to a min, or at least in one spot. the poems ar nice, but you want to have more story than filler. It is a very good start, and I am looking forward to reading more chapters, but remember it isn't about how many words you have on the page, but the story that you are trying to bring to life....
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  • From cocoasnape on April 24, 2007
    First...i hope your father is ok.

    Second, i want to say that i read and enjoyed your previous story (prequel to this). I don't do much reading these days, but can't resist new D/s stories....

    I'm glad you decided to continue this series....clearly your ending of the prequel was intentionally unresolved so that you could continue.

    I hope my comments serve more to kindle ideas, etc, rather than offend. Apologies if they do....

    I confess I am a bit confused about your narrative direction. The plot seems a bit muddled at the moment, perhaps that will change, but I find myself very confused about what you're doing with harry (and not in a 'i don't know what's going on' sort of way). I think the problem is that this story seems completely separate/dissociated from your prequel. It's almost like you have abandoned what you started there...although you may get back to it (please!).

    Your focus on harry's illness has served to 'de-sexualize' Harry completely. You have in essence made him seem 12 years old again, completely weak and dependent on Severus. What this does, is make sexual advancement of their relationship very difficult for you. In fact at this point, it would seem perverted.

    Now...perhaps this is your intention. You ended your prequel with a significant forward momentum in the sexual arena between HP and SS. I'm sensing that you want the reader to 'take a breath' and pause as you develop another solid story that will serve as a catalyst in the development of Severus's/Harry's relationship (?)

    What I am hoping you do eventually get to is a point where Harry is healthy "physically" so that you can explore his still fragile "mental" health - specifically as it pertains to the growing D/s relationship between HP and SS. I envision HP having difficulties with the conflict of being a submissive while his independence is just now flourishing for the first time in his life. I envision HP having difficulties as SS pushes his limits as the dominant, which of course he will do. I envision Severus having to carefully judge Harry's limits and adjust, etc. I am hoping this is the part of the story you get back to.

    I am, however, a big proponent of author's free will - in fact, i don't think being overly swayed by reviews is a good thing. Sometimes they do help an author, but often (as i have found) they can sidetrack an author's vision/strategy. So what's my point? I think you should take my comments with a grain of salt. If they resonate with you, great. If not, please take no offense and continue with your plan.

    Either way, I am very much looking forward to your next chapters!
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