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Reviews for Honeymoon

By : abc123wizard
  • From americanwerewolf on April 12, 2007
    really need a beta, good try though
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  • From Mishra on April 11, 2007
    Hi there,

    I am glad that you consider my stories inspirational and I am always ready to help a newcomer out. The spelling in this version is much, much better thanks to the proofreading you did. The whole stories feels "rounder" so I guess you are on the right way. Unfortunately there is no golden rule how to write a good story. It took myself more than a year to arrive on the level of writing I am now, so don't be discouraged if your stories are no prize-winning novels in the beginning. Here's my piece of advice:
    1.) read other fanfiction and concentrate on good ones (e.g. "The Prodigal Daughter" and everything by Melindaleo, both to be found on fanfiction.net). If you are looking for inspiration for high-class smut the restricted section of www.simplyundeniable.com is a good place to start searching. You will learn a lot of good expressions and how to properly express thoughts and linking actions by reading these stories.
    2.) Keep writing, practice ALWAYS makes perfect.

    Btw. Fortress of Woe is getting posted in a betaed version on simplyundeniable, so maybe you will want to take a look.

    Yours

    Mishra
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  • From Hermyone on April 09, 2007
    Very very hot, well written story. Glad to hear your going to write more stories as you've definitely got talent. Harry getting Ginny pregnant young is an interesting idea, look forward to that. How about a Harry/Ginny/Hermione story, that could be fun.
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  • From Hermyone on April 08, 2007
    Wow, two for two. Your good, I really hope you carry this one on as well as Foursome Fun. A bit of incest in both stories would be good though so Ron and Ginny can have some fun.
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  • From xxlizziexx on April 07, 2007
    Oh I loved it! Just I think it needs a really good beta. I'd do it for you, but I don't exactly know.. what to do, like I can edit and stuff, but I don't know how to go in and edit and now I'm not making much sense.

    And nooooo! Stick to Harry and Ginny. They are the best couple and .. yeah.
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