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Reviews for Deception

By : brayzen
  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2007
    I really think you should continue this story
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on October 22, 2007
    I like it! So you asked for suggestions on where to take the story:

    Maybe have Hermione continue to act like Pansy and Draco "play along" for a few more encounters trying to pick up clues about who it is. Then when he finally has a pretty good idea about who it is, he could suggest some bondage games during sex, like using ties or rope then when she goes to tie him up he'll over power her and tie her up instead, fucking her brains out repeatedly until the Polyjuice wears off. Then maybe he could use her her deception against her. Like stealing ingredients for Polyjuice potion and forcing him to engage in non consensual sex as blackmail to get *other things* he wants...

    ::shrug:: whatever you come up with I'm sure will be fine, you've done a great first chapter so far,so wherever you decide to take the story just please update soon!
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  • From wudelfin on October 20, 2007
    yep, now tht a hermione I see in the shadows..so where's the rest???...is he hooked from one taste????
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  • From Sroya on June 03, 2007
    Love it. I vote continue. I would definitely like to see where you take this!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 14, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From lukablack on May 06, 2007
    I really liked your story, more from how he knew something was different from how tight she was.

    I would love to read how he goes and figure out that one out, please continue with the story.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on April 10, 2007
    This has great promise to be a story.

    Like how Draco's going to feel when he finds out? What Hermione's reason was for doing that to him? And Pansy's reaction to it.
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  • From ItalianBeauty on April 09, 2007
    Very interesting, I would definitly like to see you continue this.
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  • From lolatotalus on April 09, 2007
    Interesting. I'd like to see this continue.
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  • From ichiruki on April 09, 2007
    I would be interested to see more should you take it past a one shot!
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