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Reviews for Deception

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  • From bloodravyn on November 07, 2011
    oooh, is there an update on the horizon for this soonish?
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
    RE: chapter three

    Oh my, Hermione is truly evil to go out of her way to distract Draco in such a way as having EVERY girl in school pay attention to him; the poor fellow will go bonkers trying to figure out what is going on... hey?

    Well done--I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
    RE: chapter two

    *::cackling::*
    OMG--too funny, Hermione is such a tease to be driving poor Draco slowly insane trying to figure out who it is that is toying with him.
    ;~D

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
    RE: chapter one

    Hmm, I'm wondering if Draco got a charge out of how different "Pansy" was acting with him.
    ;~D

    Does he want more of the same?
    If so would it be because it is NOT the S.S.D.D. (same shite different day)?
    Is he perhaps wondering if life wouldn't be more exciting with someone new?

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From jaceni50 on May 20, 2009
    This is a great story! It's rare to have Hermione as a stalker AND have a good story plot. Are you going to be waiting at long bits of time to update each chapter? There are some great suggestions on how to continue it, but even with how the story left off shows you have ground to work with. Anyway, great story and hope you continue it soon. Does anyone know how to get story alerts for this website or if that is even possible. It would be great if I could get notified of an update. Thanks.
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  • From kazfeist on April 20, 2009
    Looks like this will be enjoyable! I read the first two chapters. Thanks for putting it up. :D
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  • From smmz79 on April 20, 2009
    wow great first chap.... so draco noticed the differences but was to caught up in the moment to care... hmmm great chap
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2007
    Hey!!!!! Where did you go?! :(
    Where's our next chapter?! :( Is everything ok? U suddenly disappeared. It saddens me. :( U were my first big fan and I miss your reviews. And how do i know if DRaco ever finds out about it bein Hermione in your fic?!
    Please return. We need an update :D
    Vixen x
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  • From myangeldraco on October 26, 2007
    This is an excellent fic. Please!! keep up with the updates!!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on October 25, 2007
    Interesting direction you're going in....can't wait until she reveals her self...but don't do it too quickly..I'm enjoying the ploys..
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  • From bananasforyou on October 25, 2007
    need more!!
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  • From wudelfin on October 24, 2007
    love this...an old pagan tale has a veiled woman of the morning mist
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  • From mariecke22 on October 23, 2007
    you have to write more!! the first chapter is so good!! What i would like to see happen is that hermione has to get info out of molfoy for the order. She does this as pancy and doesnt know malfoy already knows its not her. So when she comes over he does wathever until she turns to Hermione. Draco is repulsed first but thinks about all the things he could do to her. Something like that maby??
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  • From appleblossum24 on October 23, 2007
    oh my gos, you simply MUST continue..what a great start to a fic. And I can already see the flamers going on about how this is OOC for Hermione....don't listen to them. Who's to say our favorite Gryffindor girl *wouldn't* do that!? :) Please write more...pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
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  • From bananasforyou on October 23, 2007
    i love it, i think he should follow her maybe!
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