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Reviews for Nox Noctis Est Nostri

By : ainaak
  • From scoobyfrg on October 07, 2007
    I love this story and hope that you continue it soon. I think that Ron and Hermione should be loyal to Harry. I think Dumbledore should be manipulative, but just trying to do the best he can with a bad situation. It would be interesting if you could work Draco somewhere in there, like Vitis could be his squib twin sister or something. Just an idea. Hope to see an update soon!
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  • From Coconut on August 30, 2007
    I know its been awhile, but please, please continue this story, ive been checking on and off for updates, and I was hoping you would consider posting more. ^.^
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  • From Zet on August 29, 2007
    Oooh, Ghostwalkers! I love this series so much! Well, here's what I think should happen: Dumbledore=manipulative and in cahoots with Whitney; Ron=betraying Harry as a spy for Dumbles; Hermione=loyal to Harry. Just my thoughts on things, though. Good story! Just one key thing I noticed off; you need to make each new piece of dialogue a new paragraph. For example, if Lily talks and one of the others answers, it needs to be a new start, not a continuation of a paragraph. Just a little help. Can't wait for more!

    ~Zet
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