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By : YamiBakura

From Juana13 on July 27, 2009
awwww loved this!! I remember reading the Create Your Own Adventure books. One of my faves as a child. This was a very unique and wonderuful idea creating a story like this : ) Loved this!! gonna create another? that'd be awesome!! I read this over and over again going through each adventure. seriously didn't like that one where they both get killed... nevertheless, in a Create Your Own Adventure book, you always ending up dying or some other tragedy happening eventually if you took a wrong turn. this story was just like that. : ) Thanks for writing this.
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From ANON - Destaney on July 18, 2009
I loved this story. The style in which you wrote it brightened my day. I didn't think anyone remembered the old Choose-Your-Own-Adventure books. They always made you more involved in the story, I thoght. I recently found some of these in a Goodwill and am trying to introduce my children to them.
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From thrnbrooke on April 16, 2007
Fantastic! I used to love those stories! I read all the variations! Love it!
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From lissagal99 on April 15, 2007
Wow. It's like 3 stories in one!
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From Heksy on April 13, 2007
Yami, I took the great route.
No character death for me!
Yay...this was fun.
Thanks so much for writing this.
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From ANON - L_C on April 13, 2007
I really loved this! you should do more choose your own path stories. I read all 3 versions before reviewing and my fave had to be the 'boyfriend' one...too sweet!
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From ANON - Jien on April 13, 2007
done reading all 3 endings of it. fancy the work very much but i don't see the point of them dying in chappie 14 LOLz
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From graballz on April 12, 2007
Okay, they are IN the forest! OH YAY! And we're back to "friendly cute" bantering!!! *hugs self* AWWWWW! They're holding hands!!!!!! OH FUCK another choice!!!! *whimper*

I'm suddenly reminded of the "character death" warning from the first chapter....WHAT DO I CHOOSE?????? (okay, this is Chapter 12...)

I'm going to start by saying that they stay.....*gulp* *crosses fingers* please hot gay teen sex in the woods up against a tree please hot gay teen sex in the woods up against a tree please hot gay teen sex in the woods up against a tree

*gasp* Unicorns aren't carnivorous....good sign? *whimper* OH YAY! SO CUTE! Mmmmm more kissing! OH people!!! OH OH OH OH OHOHOHOHOHOHO (that's all I can say)

*blubbering mess of goo* YAY!!!! THAT WAS A GOOD ONE!!!!!! *hugs Yami* THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! You are so talented!
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From graballz on April 12, 2007
I'm just going to review about a million times...I hope that's okay *giggles* Maybe I'll set a precedent, because I'm anxious to know what everyone else picked too! haha

Okay, so I went back to Chapter 4 (since no directions at the bottom of Chapter 8) and I'll choose Harry winning the fight...AHA! "They have to talk"

I'm going to guess that's where I was supposed to go at Chapter 8, too??? YAY for talking? (except that "we need to talk" is code for "break up"....bad!)

YAY Hermione! *hug for 'Mione* *gasp* Do I smell hot gay teen sex in the Owlrey? *hope hope hope* YES YES YES The stage is being set for all the right things!!!!! *heart lifting* Please be gentle! (hehehehe)

*squeal* YES YES YES FUCKING YES!!! WOO HOO GO BABIES GO!!! YES YES YES Wait, WHAT??? Hogsmeade? Great Hall?

NO NO NO!! Where's the choice of "Go back to Slytherin and shag the ever-loving fuck out of each other" or "Go to Gryffindor and make sweet, sweet love" THOSE ARE THE CHOICES I WANT!!!! (haha I'm insatiable)

That being said...I'm more inclined to think they'll get it on if they stay at the castle so....Great Hall!

OH YAY!! SWEET!!! *giggle* Oh god, I don't know if I can stand Harry and Draco being mischievious together....TOO CUTE!!!!!

OH FUCK YEAH!!!! BACK TO GRYFFINDOR?/ Awwwww!
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From graballz on April 12, 2007
Okay, starting out with Draco (Chapter 3)...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA "Do I look like a bloody girl" and yet he proceeds to give fashion advice!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!! *giggles then sighs* Ah, Draco, you sweet gorgeous oh-so-Harry's blonde sex kitten!

MWA cliffie!!!! hehehe (not really but I cackled in delight!)

Chapter 4--*jumping around* OH YAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYA Y Please fighting leading to hot gay teen sex!!!!! We all know those boys can't keep their hands off of each other!!!! YIPPEE

Oh shit....now I have to choose!!!!! OH DAMN OH DAMN OH DAMN WHAT DO I PICK?????? FUCK (I want Draco to win...)

Here goes nothing...

Awww, Draco stood up? Punk. He's supposed to be STRADDLING Harry in a wrestling match! *gasp* OH?

*confused* Okay, so at the bottom of Chapter 8, there are no directions? What do I do?
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From graballz on April 12, 2007
OMG THIS IS SO FUCKING COOL!!!!!!!! (Yes, I know, I sound about half my age) I remember the "Choose Your Own Adventure" books! OMG OMG OMG Actually, I had the idea for a Harry/Draco CYOA, but I SUCK at writing those types of stories, so I've always had it in the back of my mind that "it would be cool if..."

AND NOW YOU'VE TAKEN IT OUT OF MY HEAD AND PUT IT ON PAPER (well, the computer) SO COOL!!!!! Okay, yes, I just read the first chapter...I'll be starting out from Draco's POV, and I'll let you know where I end up! ;)

KUDOS to you! I'm so excited to read this!
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From ANON - laney on April 12, 2007
Okay, I know I loved the Harry POV of this story, but I haven't read the other stuff. I'm not sure if I like the whole pick your own story thing but it was different and I'll try anything once, some things several times if I like them heehee. I think I liked being able to guide myself through the story but I also like the surprise that comes from not knowing if Harry is going to win or if they are going to run. Great job and great idea. I have never read anything like this!
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