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Reviews for A Vampire's Soul

By : Lunadeath02
  • From ANON - Shiko on October 07, 2007
    Only read Chapter 1 so far, I am going to continue later... But I am sure, that 'Dracul' actually means 'cruel', not 'Dragon'.
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  • From Jan on October 04, 2007

    OMG! Have I told you that I love this story yet? Well let me tell you, I love this story. ^_^

    Though I feel bad for what happen to Sanguini, poor Vega, maybe Proudfoot could finish the bond between them, you know... to make him a little bit happier, a bit more complete.

    Please update chapter 28 soon, please. ^_~





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  • From DracoHarry on October 04, 2007
    I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the fucking fantastic work.
    Kat
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 03, 2007
    Dark Daywalker? Oh that sounds bad! I sooo need chapter 28!
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  • From QueenB on October 02, 2007
    Ch. 23 The image of Harry and his Sire fighting while stark naked and locked together is really funny. I have to fight to keep from laughing out loud; there's no telling what the other library patrons would think.
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  • From misslala on October 01, 2007
    So I'm curious why Harry and Draco didn't just fuck one another after becoming aroused after taking the blood? Why were they so intent on possibly getting it on with Ginny and Luna?

    Glad things are coming together a bit for them. The Horcruxes are going to be interesting.
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on September 26, 2007
    very good chapter and i cant wait to see what happens next just like always
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 26, 2007
    Sooooo need chapter 27!!!
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  • From ANON - kitty on September 22, 2007
    loved the story, can't wait till there is more but there is some things that I just have to point out that bugs me. Um...the fact that hermione and ron already knew who harry's sire was before the story of what happened to them in the forest. Because after the story that the minster told they were all like, "oh my god! he's your sire?!" but they already knew that before, so maybe do a little tweaking in that chapter and maybe have them say "I still can't get over that fact that the minister is your sire" or something...I mean if you went back and read it, you would see the mistake. Also when Harry and Draco are in the woods while harry was turning slowly into a soulless one you put that Draco was taking off Harry's shirt and tie, though I really don't recall Harry even putting on clothes. As I recall it, Harry was still naked when he was in the hut and he never had the chance to put ne clothes on, even his Sire didn't have clothes either. But like I said, it's a great story and I can't wait to read more, I love it so much and I'm happy that Draco is a Daywalker, it makes me want to squeal in joy. Other than those very obvious mistakes there are probably a few words missing or out of place, but very very easily fixed. Please keep in touch to tell me when a new chapter is up. I really didin't review to point out some mistakes or laugh at you for not rereading the chapters about 50 times just to make sure that everything is in order. I mean I understand, when I'm writing I'm in the zone, but it's just a fellow writer helping you to make you into a better, no, a fantastic writer that I know you are. sorry I'm writing way to much, well keep up the good work and please keep me posted. -Kitty
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  • From misslala on September 20, 2007
    Wow. Harry's desire to include Remus in things is interesting, but I have to say I was hoping they would be monogomous. Not because I have anything against the triad, but it's like it took them so long to get together and now Harry wants to share. ehehe Damn that sex drive of his. He's becomoe pretty seflish over the course of the story, which is interesting. Is that because of his change as a vampire or what?

    My apologies if this isn't clear, I just took my contacts out and can barely see, LOL Anyway, looking forward to more. :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 19, 2007
    I sooo need chapter 26! It was a fake? What did the other creature turn into? Must have more!
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  • From DracoHarry on September 19, 2007
    This is really good. I especially loved the sex scene. Come on, who do you know that could fuck that hard and still want more. Plus, you made Draco the sub. I love Draco as the sub.
    Ok, as to the note that you left at the end of this chapter, you could do like J.K. did and just all of the sudden put a dragon into the story plot. Hell, this dragon was even kind of nice in the book. Well, keep up the great work.
    Kat
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  • From ANON - Omnni on September 14, 2007
    So cool that Draco will be a vampire. Love it. Hope there will be more soon.
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  • From chantalmalfoy on September 14, 2007
    Wow... So now Draco's a vampire too?!?! Poor Harry. But at least now Harry won't live forever while his mate grows old and dies...
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  • From DracoHarry on September 14, 2007
    OMG!!! You turned Draco into a vampire. I didn't see that coming. Keep up the great work and update soon.
    Kat
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