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Reviews for Good Heaven

By : Aiatar
  • From katecooley on April 17, 2007
    I wouldn't worry about your English. It seemed fine to me! And this story is good! I like the whole "Harry wants Draco, but it's Draco's dream" thing. Fantastic!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 16, 2007
    It was a dream? No!!!
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  • From blackpaddy on April 15, 2007
    Hi there! I have to say, for someone whose first language isn't English, you sure do write better than some people whose first language IS English! (I should know! I've beta-ed some truly shocking work that nearly brought me to tears from looking at it!)I thought this story was humorous and cute though Harry's monologue did tend to drag on a bit somewhere in the middle of the story... there are a couple of mistakes here and there...
    mainly, 'cheast' is meant to be 'chest', 'Dormity' is meant to be 'dormitory', 'Chaces' is meant to be 'chases', 'Shoud' is meant to be 'should'... other than those few spelling mistakes here and there, overall good effort... it might be worth it to just get someone to give it a quick edit as authors generally tend to miss their own mistakes when reading it over...(haha! Once again, personal experience with this! ;D) it is worth it getting someone else's point of view...
    Once again, great effort with this story! Keep up the good work!
    Stef
    =)

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