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By : princesspeach
  • From TsuQ on August 19, 2007
    I like this fic quite a bit... It shows that you don't have to throw plot and good characterization out the window when writing uncensored fiction, although that does tend to speed things along! The way the characters interact seems to have a pretty natural feel to it. There could be more conflict, given how good of a plot there is... Draco's need to be protective can't change him much because he's still following orders. There's supposed to be a certain ambiguity over the result of Draco's original plan which he doesn't reflect upon much. Also I was surprised he didn't take the opportunity to cover his tracks when he got his orders from home... The drinking is interesting, although it doesn't work as well as most of the plot... Sometimes his reasons are thin, the bar is a bit accomidating, and he seems a little superhuman... The best part has to be the dialogue, it seems to be realistic no matter what the given situation, and the description of the nonverbal communication that accompanies it sells anything that might seem ooc at first glance. I think switching between viewpoints is done fairly well, most importantly, the switch from one viewpoint to another is never confusing. Maybe once or twice, I wished you hadn't gone back in time so far to pick up the other characters' viewpoint... I think this is most obvious when we already know a future state (especially the current state) of the other character from events in the first characters viewpoint... The recent bar scene is a good example if I remember correctly... I think it'd be cleaner to switch over to the character as they exist in the now, and do a line of thought or dialogue to get the why across. Guess that's drifting a bit into style, so... Anyway, good job. Like the fic.

    -TsuQ
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  • From ANON - jessica on August 18, 2007
    please update soon. is there anyway for me to find out when you update
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  • From Clare1984 on August 18, 2007
    Oh god, this is so good. poor Hermione - I so wanted Draco to tell her just to see how she reacts and I like him being just a little bit sweet before he reverts back to the hot slytherin we know and love!

    glad you are rid of your cast now if only so you can type more!

    please post soon - I love this story so much!
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  • From xsexxandxcandyx on August 18, 2007
    GOD DAMMIT DRACO !
    Why won't he just tell her ?
    She deserves to know the truth.
    Sure,
    She probablyy won't believe him,
    But there's ways of showing her he's telling the truth.
    So he should tell her !
    He NEEDS to !
    That poor girl thinks she's a virgin,
    She has the right to know otherwise.
    I'm happy he didn't sleep with Pansy though,
    She's such a little slut,
    I hate sluts.
    Anywayss,
    I'm glad to hear your hand's healing up.
    Please update soon !

    Much Love...
    XXX
    Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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  • From myangeldraco on August 18, 2007
    LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE This story!!! Yet another excellent chapter, hope I don't have to wait too long for the next update, can't wait xxx
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 18, 2007
    that was a great chapter..... please updte sooner rather then later!


    PS your going to end this story? oh please not soon!?!?
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  • From flyawayblue on August 09, 2007
    You can't leave it there!!

    More please, lovely fic. H & D's interactions are brilliant.
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  • From hpbcn on August 07, 2007
    oooh my what a cliffie!!! please let her get all hysterical and sexy draco malfoy to calm her down. Can't wait to see how she explains this miraculous conception.

    keep on the good work
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  • From xsexxandxcandyx on August 03, 2007
    I like it !
    Very interestingg way for her to find out,
    Much better then any of my ideas.
    I feel so bad for her though,
    Now what's she gonna do ?
    I mean,
    She still believes she's a virgin !
    That poor girl.
    && who's she gonna tell too ?
    Probablyy no one,
    Why would she say anything if she doen't even know how it happened ?
    That's just too many questions to take l0l
    Please PLEASE,
    Update ASAP,
    I love this storyy !

    Much Love...
    XXX
    Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 03, 2007
    oh please update asap..... i really want to know how she reacts.....
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  • From PaperAirPlanes on August 02, 2007
    This story is absolutly amazing. I started reading it and couldn't stop for the life of me. I can not wait until you update. I wish that creative talent didn't have to take any time at all to formulate. I am not sure if this comment makes sense or not. But the only thing that is clear to me is that you need to hurry and get these two togather because clearly, I will explode. My blessings on your next chapter and be sure I will check back for it.
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  • From ANON - Becky on August 02, 2007
    You are EVIL!!! I hate cliffhangers!! Awesome chapter though. The way she found out was totaly unexpected. I thought Draco would slip and say something or something to that affect, but I liked how you did it. Well, update soon (Please! lol) and have a good trip ^^

    -Becky
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  • From Katay on August 02, 2007
    That was a fabulous way of letting her know! I loved it and can't wait to read more!
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  • From luvhp on August 02, 2007
    Yeah, an update!!!!
    WHat agreta chapter. Poor Draco, falling for Hermione and actually getting hurt by the words she said.
    I love the fact that you used the RoR for letting her find out.
    Have a great vacation and we'll be waiting patiently (hell, we got 6 months or so, right??) LOL

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  • From ichiruki on August 02, 2007
    Evil cliffy I can't wait for the Hermione reaction chapter damnit! Must know how she freaks out, or whatever it is she does! I guess the chair with the tissues by it are for her though.
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