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From ANON - Camryn on November 22, 2007
aaah...nooo...mommy, daddy....whaaaat!?!?!?!
jesus christ, u shocked me there...
severus dead??? more power for voldypants?? death for draco???
i'd love to see u try get out of that mess :P
don't u dare let draco die!!! or hermione for that matter!!!! ;P
anyway, hurry up, wanna see what comes next, nice writing though, poor snape (never thought i'd say that)
whose are the twins, btw??
Cam
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From ANON - Nawdz on November 22, 2007
I totally got lazy logging in and just clicked on your story on the moment I saw it. AND continue on reviewing right away. Inspite of the burning cooking for thanksgiving.

Taps on the back for your another surprising transaction of events. But I really and totally hope that Hermione's babies won't look like a pair of missing nosed freaks when they're born. I'll totally go ballistic.

Poor poor Draco. A new juicy challenge on the way for him. Make right decsions Draco... :O
And don't let me start on talking about Snape. You just started putting him on your story and then all of the sudden he's gone. Woah. Poor for him too. Well he didn't much have any use to your story anyways. ☺ So its cool.

The only thing I have to tell you now is,
Goble, goble on Thanksgivng and may it nourish you to be inspired to come up with a speedy new update.
Nawdz
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From myangeldraco on November 22, 2007
wow that was a slightly unexpected chapter! it was good though and so filled with angst!!! please keep up with the excellent updates

while I'm here I just wanna ask if we can get another chapter of the deflowering of Draco Malfoy - please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ichiruki on November 22, 2007
Snape dies eh? Draco will want to off himself in addition to all the crazy...well that's not hard to see how he might be pushed to that point, poor boy has the shittiest luck ever! And my, my, Voldie was very devious wasn't he, what with his plans for the twins....right now I'm hoping snake poo is all he gets and those kids are Malfoy's...I still can't entertain the thought of combo birth either...they both must be both Malfoys!

LOL, wishful thinking aside- I'm a guilty one, I've not been working on my story at all, in fact I got hit in the head with plot bunny turds and anytime I sit down to work on not so I get sucked into these type thoughts like

"what if this happened in this other story...oh, that would be great fun...no must return to the one I'm working on! Oh shit no!!!! I must not type lines for stories not this one....arrrgggg damn traitorous fingers! Going to surf internet now..."

LOL, so that's about where I'm at. I don't think these other little side stories will be terribly interesting as Deflowering Of Draco Malfoy...which I btw now that I mention it, I could use another update of that one too...that was wicked how she taunted him I must know what happens next!

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From ANON - Verie on November 22, 2007
Awww.
Happy Thanksgiving to you too. :]
No need for body guards I can assure you that. Well for me that is. ;]

Another Aww for Snape. Poor him. I'll surely miss him. NOT!
Aww for Draco too. This only means one thing for him, another dilemma on the way for dear-ol-Draco? I totally feel sorry for him now.
And one last Aww for the dream thing. Why?? I wanna know! Just kdding.
Ofcourse.. I totally understand. The writer's rule, Suspense. Secrets. Surprises. Sooo Slytherinny. :] Readers Likey. :]

Hmm. triplets? Why the hell not? Told you so that I will really read it between the lines to make sure I won't be able to miss anything from your bravo story.

And you know its not actually a bad idea for Draco to switch like, say for him to drop 'accidentaly' an ounce of polyjuice potion to Blaise's drink don't you think? And then make Pansy come all over the pretend Draco/really-Blaise. But whatever your plans for the story will be great. :] As long you break the binding real fast. And for snakey-Voldie's plans, I just wish that Draco wouldn't fall for it. It will really bring him to complete lunacy. One loony is enough for HP.

I miss Hermione on this chapter though. How's the preganancy going? Back Pains yet? Twins are really a pain on the oven during baking.

Verie

And oh yeah, eat a lot on Thanksgiving. and one Last...
Update Soon! :]
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From reirei on November 19, 2007
I really enjoy your writing style, and flow. You make the charachters very believable and I am enjoying this story. Thank you so much for sharing with us!!! Please update soon.
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From sherrithewriter on November 16, 2007
I love this story. So sorry your message didn't arrive. My e-mail address is: sherrikillamwilliams@yahoo.com. My review e-mail no longer works. I love the last two chapters. I just hate that Draco has no way of telling anyone about his predicament. Could he ask Hermione or Blaise to play a game of opposites with him? That way he might be able to reveal the truth without revealing the deal he has with Pansy. I'm just waiting for her to be the one to break her vows. Should be easy enough -- she's such a slut!
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From ANON - rainydai on November 16, 2007
Please update! I LOVE this story so much! I check back every day! I can't wait to find out who the daddy is! I love stories where Hermione and Draco have children and they are still at Hogwarts!
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From Heidi191976 on November 12, 2007
This story is incredible. I hope that Draco can get out of the binding with Pansy soon. He really needs to be with Hermione now. I would love it if Ginny or Blaise did something to Pansy to make her break the binding. That way Draco would be free to be with Hermione. I look forward to reading more soon.
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From ANON - Mischi on November 10, 2007
After knowing that Hermione's going to have twins, can't Draco just go on and tell her that He impregnated her in the first place?! (well, a possible and one of the 2 candidates who impregnated her) or will that too set the alarm of the ring?! Sheesh. Poor Draco. tsk tsk. Honestly I can't think of a way out if I was in Hermione's place.

Awesome story and chapter!
Love your other stories too!
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From Verie on November 10, 2007
I totally agree with Verie.
Its seems that everything I have to say was written by the many reviews.
You really have to cut some slack for the two of them. Specially if Hermione is really going to get twins. It would really add up the pressure. Having one is enough but two?! HOLY MACARONI! And to the fact that she feels so helpless? Good thing that Ginny went into knowing her pregnancy. But not knowing the father is just plain chaotic for her. Phew.
Draco have been having troubles to considering his tasks for Voldemort in the beginning and having Pansy blackmailed him and not being able to express his feelings for Hermione is a one way golden ticket to insanity.
Woah. you better fix one of each.

But nonetheless, I'm still loving it.
The problems they're having is totally the cherry on top of your story. Reason of its intriguing thoughts.

Update Soon :]
Nawdz
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From ANON - Verie on November 10, 2007
I absolutely agree with the Kim Kardashian thing. hahaha

Anyhow, back to your brilliant story.
TWINS?!?! I totally didn't see that coming. TWINS?! wow.
Well, I have this weird thought and knowing that this is your story/fic and anything can happen regardless of any scientific explanations. Are both of the babies Draco's or Voldemort's?! or each?!

And I totally feel sorry for Draco, having a thought of hopeless situation. CURSE YOU PANSY!
Same thing for Hermione, having the thought of a baby out of the blue and not knowing that Draco does loves her back just sucks.
Its like your whole world is crapping you out.
I really hope you'll spill the beans and bring them back to action. And yes, from now on I'll be remembering every detail in case you try to shock us again. From reading your first chap and so on. I have another question too. Does Hermione's dream on the first chapter has something to do with the ending.. and *wink wink* Draco in it?! :]
*Squee.

And oh yah. Do you do mail alerts? If ever here's my email verihappy@yahoo.com

Please Update SOON!
Verie
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From Citten on November 09, 2007
okay... one i loved the chapter and i love that she is having twins-i would like twins, but i have a hard question to ask are they both dracos? two--well i think you should leave the chapter title as is. third-sorry i have been slow on the review side but hope this makes up for it. forth you do wonderful on the writing maybe some can learn writing techniques from you because some people are terrible. fifth DO HURRY AND POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON! AND HAVE SOMEBODY FIGURE OUT ABOUT THE STUPID SPELL! and can somebody finally start working on a way to revive hermiones memories?-please it is just driving my nuts! oh! maybe severus can help!:) just a thaught.
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From chelleybelle on November 09, 2007
I absolutely love this story and have been following it from the begining...i can't remember if i have reviewed before or not...great chapter...please please please, don't do something tacky like have draco be the father of one twin and voldie be the father of the other twin...anyway...that was all i had to say. great job.
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From ANON - Camryn on November 09, 2007
soo... great new chapter!! i love how u solved the issue with him trying out writing on parchment... poor blaise didn't know what he saw there... *snickers*
as for the rest of the chapter, i LOVE it! at last, somebody knows... what's up with madame pomfrey though?
i kinda expected twins.... but i'm dying to see how (and if) draco'll tell her the babies are his (or, maybe even the dark lords)
alright, enough of me
another amazing chapter!!
ques though, how far along is hermione?? can't be much left, can there??
lov it, update soooooon i'm dying!
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