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From SoriaUndead on July 06, 2007
ARGH!! >_< CLIFFHANGER!! MAKE IT GO AWAY!!
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From rafiq on July 05, 2007
This story keeps surprising me. I like that. And it helps that it is so well written.
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From ANON - YG on July 05, 2007
Oh, I LOVE devious cunning in control Draco ^O^ absolutely loved it! I agree Blaise deserves punishment... but Ginny deserves even worse -_- argh, you've made me hater her like I never thought possible before, the b*tch >.< I hope she suffers (and dies *please?* ^^)
I'll be waiting for the next chapter anxiously ^O^
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From cameowitch on July 05, 2007
I can't begin to tell you how much I'm enjoying this. The only thing that would make this better would be to suck all the magick from Blaise, the bitch and unfortunately the baby. Hmm Have Mad Lucius do it, overload his system and kill him off with the backwash. Harry and Draco don't have dirty hands that way. (Just call me vicious).

Can't wait to see more!
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From thrnbrooke on July 05, 2007
Soooo need chapter 22! I hope Draco makes them both pay. Harry should have someone check into Ginny's prenatal records. I don't believe not one bit about the baby!
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From Angelsfear on July 05, 2007
I don't think I've ever held my breath that long! IM GOING TO KILL GINNY AND BLAISE! Lucius -in my mind -can kind of be forgiven because he's mad and well... mad. BUT BLAISE AND GINNY! I will MURDER THEM in their SLEEP! I want Draco to kill her.

Yes. He should.... outside of the courts of course. And without leaving a trace BAHAHAH!

Omg I'm going to cry! And Ginny DARED demand the Invisibility Cloak that James left to Harry? OHHHH her bloody greed and selfishness knows NO BOUNDS! I bet James is turning over in his grave!

OHHHH you are master of this whole concept and I love it to bits and I'm even more excited that these two chapters were posted so quickly!! Need moreeee! PLEASE! MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
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From ANON - oo, brrr on July 05, 2007
I do love firey,icey, raging Draco, and I do look forward to his flip-side performance at the Broomsticks. I can't imagine it or how Blaise, Ginny, and even Harry will react but I am sure it will be a ball to read.

The Wizarding World must think quite highly of marriage to allow the divorce process to be so difficult. I would love to hear what the reasoning and history about why the process is the way it is, is. Though I do imagine it would be somewhat humorous.

Poor Narcissa, I hope she is okay. I wonder if she was happy or dismayed to see him.

About the Mouth Binding Law...The judge only mentioned owls when she made it an accepted concession, but there is more to it than just not allowing owls through to Harry right?

I am highly greatful for the quick update. It was a very sweet thing for so early in the morning (on my part).
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From ANON - darquiel on July 05, 2007
OMG!!! Cliffhanger!
I love your idea of the wizarding divorce. It's cool and archiaric!
Now Draco is out for blood. I would like to know if Ginny is really involved in all parts of Blaise's plans. If yes than she really turned into a damned bitch.... poor Narcissa. The divorce seems to hand the tow partys a "card blanche" on the other but does that involve the Arguer too. Should it be illegal for Blaise and Ginny to target Draco and his family??
Ahhhh... can't wait for you to post the next chapter. This story ROCKS!!
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From misslala on July 05, 2007
Holy shit! I love the way the dynamic between Harry and Draco changed in this chapter. Harry, however grungingly seems to be accepting his attraction more and more and it's wonderful and eloquent! I want them all to die, but it isn't going to help much to hope since you are the writer! LOL

Ginny is dispicable in this story!
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From ANON - Jien on July 05, 2007
ooooOOoooo..update soon!
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From KCRae on July 05, 2007
Nooo! How could they?!? Ginny is a lying and manipulative and cruel person who ought to get punished for the way she is treating Harry. She never truly loved Harry 'the man' and her and blaise have no right to punish Draco for taking Harry's case! Oh I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Every time I read this I feel a step closer to seeing Ginny get what she deserves! Thank You!
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From ANON - Tori on July 05, 2007
Alright I guess I can tolerate that.
Nice chapter.
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From berkie88 on July 05, 2007
of course she'd go for the invisibility cloak. they know darn well Harry wouldn't go look for their child, they just want it because it's useful and has sentimental value to Harry.
I wasn't surprised that the enactment of the Mouth-Binding Laws was the concession they asked for: they did say it wasn't used a lot and therefore it would probably be more difficult to get.
And I'm pretty sure we still don't know what Malfoy's plan is...

well... no we know the consequences of Harry not giving the money... but that new manipulation is just... they had to have planned the kidnapping before trial and have it done while they were there so even if he'd given them the money, how could they have gotten word out not to take mrs. Malfoy? it'd probably been done already! they'd just have asked for something else. and using the child being born sick (whether or not that will be true is another matter... I'll believe it when I see proof!) to get money and a house... I'm no expert on people with heartproblems so I don't know if warmer weather is better for them but I think there are plenty in England who do well... and naming her Lily?! they did that just because it's Harry's mothers name and again, whether that will actually happen... since I doubt they'd want to name their child after the mother's ex-husband's dead mother...
yes, this might have sounded heartless if what she said was true but considering how she's been so far...
hope for more soon! Malfoy on a rampage... that will be fun!
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From ANON - oh no she didn't on July 05, 2007
I do feel for the unborn child's "by word of mouth 'supposed' situation". But frankly the unborn child's condition is only hearsay and has yet to be confirmed by Harry so it is not certain that it really exists.

Regardless, even if the unborn child (I can't call it Lily, yet, reasons for later)has a condition that is confirmed the child's medical bills and lifestyle are the concern of that child's parents and family. Ginny has family. Blaise has family. Ginny's brothers are not broke. Ginny's parents aren't feeding the mouths of 7 children any longer or clothing them or paying for their education and books any longer. Her parents are too, not broke. She has friends who like her. She should be asking them to fund her bastard child's health expenses. Not the husband, to who(m) she broke all her wedding vows, some laws, and even the foundations of decency with.

I don't even think Ginny deserves any money from any vaults and the same goes for her bun in the oven. If somewhere along the line Harry wants to donate some money to the care of Ron's niece or nephew (if the sex of the baby has only been confirmed by Ginny then it has yet to be truly confirmed as it could be a lie) out of the goodness of his heart then that exchange of funds and gratitude should be done well away from any court room and legal binding agreements. Such good-will money should not become apart of an undeserved and ill-gained pot of gold.

And the name! The audaciousness is disgusting. Still it has truly yet to be confirmed that the child's name is definitely Lily. That could very well be a middle name or a 3rd middle name and conveniently used to egg Harry into agreeing to craziness. Nevertheless it is like trying to make Harry feel close or related to their affair and the proof there of like some sort of bloody hand print on a crime scene. disgusting.

And the threats! It was a true slap in the face even after all her pleading. I hope Draco goes ballistic on those two...no mercy. I'm not talking murder. There are worse things than a knife to the chest.

I was surprised and as equally pleased as Draco when Harry said he trusted him, though. Aww ww. And again when Draco basked in Harry's praise for a brief flickering moment. And Harry doesn't get....yet. **squeals with glee on the inside**

This was a great chapter. It was full of surprises and was definitely tense, highly anticipated, engaging word by word. I love it when I find a fic that I could easily read again and again and again and again...It is great.
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From ANON - Lola on July 05, 2007
Well that was unexpected....damn. This chapter proves that Ginny is a souless harpy. I mean how dare she insinuate that Harry would try to steal her child and she named it after his dead mother that's just low! But to take Draco's mom-a woman who is ill and unable to care for herself- is heinous. I just feel the need to stab something! lol Yes, you should take that as a compliment to your ability instill emotion. XP Update soon!
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