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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on July 17, 2007
    A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing this wonderful fic. I look forward to reading more from you.

    sincerely,

    ~ rAiNwAtEr ~
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on July 17, 2007
    Chapter 29: Draco's thoughts on how the wizarding world would act when they descovered his and Harry's relationship:

    "The wizarding world would explode into flames around them.

    Draco imagined it in his mind
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  • From tivogirl on July 17, 2007
    I have really enjoyed your story. Very unique plot, great writing style. The dialogue was very natural. I also love any time that Ginny gets what's coming to her.
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  • From ANON - bthatcher2002 on July 17, 2007
    i know i have not reviewed any of your chapters but i just wanted to let you know i love this story and i am sorry to see the end.i hope to see more of your stories or i hope you write a new story.thanks again for a great story.
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  • From Dezra on July 17, 2007
    I love your story. I love how Draco and Harry came together at the end, it was beautiful. I'd be glad to stay on your e-mailing list Please.
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  • From ANON - Herovillain on July 17, 2007
    Well, I started reading this on fanfiction.net and then I found it here, where you are some chapters ahead. I love it. It's simply so pure and so attentive to details. I loved "A year's temptation" because of its intensity, and I love this one because of its pace. Simply magical. Hope to read more from you soon.
    Kisses,
    Herovillain
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  • From SoriaUndead on July 17, 2007
    awww... how sweet ^_^
    glad to see Narcissa has remembered how to play her harp
    can't wait to see what Draco is planning for Harry
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  • From ANON - The End on July 17, 2007
    OMG! It was the last chapter! I got all the way to the end of the chapter and didn't realize until I asked myself what chapter number it was. Ack!

    This wonderful fic is at its end. Thank you for a great read. The ending was so nicely simple and warm. It left a lot of hope for whatever Draco and Harry's future maybe. It was highly adorable, too. I love the fact that Draco and Harry were able to show each other off to the Wizarding World. Public shows of affection are a nice perk of love. It was a perfect ending.


    But if you wanted to tag on an epilogue I wouldn't mind. :D
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  • From bananasforyou on July 16, 2007
    so wonderful and exciting at the same time!!
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  • From ANON - sak on July 16, 2007
    I loved the contrast of Harry's trip to the Zabini residence and then Draco went shopping! Just tickled my funny bone. Thank you for these extra chapters. You could have ended it with the trial rather than having Draco and Harry interact with the Weasleys and the rest of the world. But this is nice and the conversation (well, gazing) with Narcissa was a lovely touch on this chapter.
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  • From LoonyLunaLovegood on July 16, 2007
    This fic is awsome! Probably one of the best I've read. Draco is smexy...
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 16, 2007
    I sooo need chapter 33! Narcissa approves!!!
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  • From ANON - band wagon fever--forgive me on July 16, 2007
    I could not believe my eyes in chapter 31! A lemony scene. It was like the 21st coming early, and Harry initiated it, too. Ha! Harry showed that Lady. What a yummy public kiss with necking, too. More public displays of affection, please! Those two are so cute. Besides, Harry is Prime Rib--He's got the stamp of Mum's approval to prove it. Let the feast begin and don't forget gravy.
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    I want in on the rant!

    Possible book 6 titles: (this is all old but why not)

    Harry Potter and the Master of Taking Short Cuts

    Harry Potter and the Master of Getting Away With It

    Harry Potter and the Hello- I am my Father

    Harry Potter and the Reason Snape Didn't Like James

    Harry Potter and Romance Crack Fic from A Famous Publishing Company

    Harry Potter and a Lesson in How Not to Think for Yourself

    Harry Potter and the "Boom--I Got Your Girlfriend" Trio featuring a tenor, alto and soprano

    Noted Shortcuts:
    Short cut to Quidditch victory--Harry wasn't there to win the game, but he laid claim on the winner and the win mighty fast through a lip lock association

    Short cut to knowledge/work--Snape ready cliff notes, why work for it when I have these great notes? Sorry Hermione your position has been filled.

    Short cut to luck--the Felix charm

    Short Cut to Getting Away with Murder--Hey it's Malfoy, DE junior. A neglectfully cast (easily fatal) curse can't be as bad a cruciatus curse (even though the fact is that Draco's version may have been just as ineffective as Harry's from book 5 and would not have killed Harry even if cast at Voldemort level)--but it is just Malfoy

    Short Cut to Empty Victory--Hey, he told you so. He was right all along. Draco was up to something. (When has Draco not been up to something from book 1-6?) And for once he fingered the right person (though for probably the wrong reasons). Though, he had no idea it was a plot to kill Dumbledore until he was on the Tower, but now his desire to peg Malfoy Jr. as the most evilest DE student to date will be a cinch. Victory!

    Short Cut to a girlfriend--Harry's claim on Ginny all the sudden, did seem to come out of jealousy and little thought to who she actually was, like it was off the backs of those before him...she's ripe for the picking (like she wasn't just waiting for him to finally take notice, probably always ready for that rebound. would have been more believable in compatibility if she'd said no in book 6 and then yes in book 7 in my POV)



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  • From ANON - whoops on July 16, 2007
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  • From ANON - sorry for the rant on July 16, 2007
    Someone get that child away from Mrs. Zabini. I don't care how pretty Harry thinks her face is what an awful fate for a child. Mrs. Weasley better stand up for her granddaughter and do something. It wouldn't be hard to prove that current custody holders are unsuitable rich or not.

    (by the way, so not impressed with Harry's take on Mrs. Zabini's face. I would rather not have my opinion of his good taste be diminished. I supposed people's character doesn't break through the surface of their foundation often enough.)

    Ginny was stupid to move into the Zabini house. Everyone knows mother-in-laws are generally worse than one's own...generally. And she can't argue that Mrs. Weasley is a bad person. She better suck up the occasional shame-downs (mean talking too's ) and move back home. Though no doubt her husband would probably be unwelcome...that child is ruined if she stays in the Zabini household.

    But, I am also very glad to read a fic that allows for Ginny-hatred so well. Although, I never find that hard to do even in fics that try to write her nice, intelligent, and powerful (cause I don't care). It is all based on the principle that I don't like her character/role in the books, either, despite JKR's attempt to make Ginny the "ideal girl" for Harry. Rant alert....

    I don't get how JKR can say in so many terms that Draco's character can't/won't change into a better person but Ginny has "clearly" grown into an ideal girl for Harry.

    Draco, is a character that from book 1-6 has gone through some pretty significant events in his kid-young adult life even if every actual ideal moment is not shown on page. Getting a turned down in friendship, having one's ideals constantly challenged, being humiliated, having a family torn apart by the leader he is supposed to follow, etc...the list is nearly endless...But through all this Draco can't change. His character is so flat and on a set path...

    JKR-- "Draco, who, whatever he looks like, is not a nice man. It
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