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Reviews for Draco's Companion

By : Shananigans
  • From misslala on May 22, 2007
    yay an update! Good chapter, I am looking forward to more! ;)
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 22, 2007
    OMG! That was some nightmare! I sooo need chapter 23! Will Harry treat Draco differently? Will he tell Draco his dream? I sooo need more!
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  • From MissMiki on May 22, 2007
    OH my my my.... Harry's a bit of a mess right now. Poor guy lol Glad to see you're back!! But I'm very curious about that dream...does this mean that Harry might give Dumbledore a chance?? maybe? hahaha
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  • From MrGalion on May 22, 2007
    Okay that was strange...
    What bad thing can happen now?
    Usually i'm all for the light side but your story brings out the evil in me.
    I think the Dream was Dumbledores Fault and dumbledore was chasing him.
    And giving the order to kill him i refuse to believe voldy is a bad man... LOL
    I'm half asllep if you didn't notice ill reread the chapter in the morning. Night :)
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  • From swirly on May 20, 2007
    If your problem with spelling is your word processor, then you can download a free program Open Office at openoffice.org , it works just as well as Word but is free to download.
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  • From SoriaUndead on May 11, 2007
    dude it's chill ^_^ we'll all still be here to read your gloriously grammar-mistake ridden story. If people really care that badly about a few little mistakes they can go suck a tree frog! Your story is absolutely fuckin' fantastic! Have fun in the Boondocks!^_^
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  • From DD1018 on May 11, 2007
    i like the story,and i hope you have fun in the boondocks.ive never been there but a freind of mine has and she loved, she even met her husband there.update when you can,and dont rush a good story.going a lttle slower will be fine cause youll have to unpack and stuff,but have fun and enjoy ur vacation.

    sam
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  • From anniea on May 11, 2007
    *emits an Lucy Ricardo wail* i wanted more updates but with a promise like that i guess that i can wait. get back to civilization soon. *kisses* Amai
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  • From danradfan84 on May 10, 2007
    Well, it does suck that you won't be updating for awhile, but I think I can deal. I love this story, so I can't wait until you do the next chapter.
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  • From una on May 09, 2007
    where are you? it's not like you not to uptade. please come back to us...
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  • From Sanguiyn on May 09, 2007
    Okay. I hope this won't come across as a flame, because I certainly don't intend it this way. Your story has an interesting plot, a nice development and some good characterisation (especially Harry), considering the plot. It is NOT badfic, or I wouldn't have read it up to the latest chapter... but...

    "I don't need a beta". Sorry, but you do. Badly. Or at the very least use a word processor with a spell-checker. There are many mistakes - spelling, grammar, ponctuation - some of them repeated all along the story, meaning they're not mere typos. You may not care, but some readers will find them disruptive enough to stop reading your story.

    This is a nice fic you've got here, but a beta would improve it tenfold.
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  • From Pheobi on May 07, 2007
    lol...it's poetic_justice_served@hotmail.co.uk and I thought I had it on my profile. Does it not show up? What crap...I'll try to fix that, lol. I await your e-mail! ^_^

    ~ FA
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  • From Pheobi on May 06, 2007
    Okay, the smut was...okay. It was a bit choppy and kinda rough, but if you've never written smut before that's to be expected. My suggestion is to read a WHOLE lot of smut right before you right a scene with it so you've got something to work off of fresh in your memory. My other suggestion is to possibly get a beta who writes a lot of smut. Such as me. ^_^ No, it was very good, I promise, other than the expected choppiness.

    Write more! Your Devoted Reader, ~ FA
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  • From Leentjef on May 04, 2007
    WOW VERY VERY GOOD STORY
    KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From danradfan84 on May 03, 2007
    I loved it. I have read this story so many times, that I almost know every sentence. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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