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Reviews for Dance Floor Jealousy

By : Firelady112
  • From gabby1234 on December 02, 2007
    jesus why a cliffhanger more please i didn't think lavender was overdone i think its important to know deeper plot lines to know how happy hermoine really is. thanks for the fluff stories its different and brave and i love the fact that you did it after the war its very refreshing i was wondering if i could make a suggestion, maybe you could have a really long chapter at dinner with hermoine and draco talking about the past and settling animosity and hate and lust i mean i love love love this story i just think if you added a bit more plot about the hate between them it would beef it up a bit either way i will keep reading and loving this story
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  • From shelagh on December 02, 2007
    I'm loving this story. I like that you seem to be updating quickly keep up the great work!
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  • From pickles87 on December 01, 2007
    I was so tickled to see this updated.
    I think you are doing wonderful.
    Now will Blaise & Lavender happen to appear at the same restaurant?
    Or will Hermione be mystery lady while Lavender is trying to find out who Hermione is seeing that night?
    Will Draco consult his cousin about Hermione?
    Waiting for more.
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  • From gabby1234 on December 01, 2007
    OH MAN PLEASE KEEP WRITING I LOVE IT AND YOUR KILLING ME MAKING ME WAIT LIKE THIS! NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From bananasforyou on December 01, 2007
    omg more i loved it!
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  • From nonentity on December 01, 2007
    It's nice to see a story where they're skittish but act reasonably straight-forward. No pouncing on each other, no insults, just a little uncertainty but determination. So Hermione's not speaking to Ron, but she's willing to make appointments with Lavender?
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  • From Kilalla on August 22, 2007
    i loved it!

    lol
    I love the fact that Draco has a cell phone... lol I'm really excited about this story.
    keep it up!
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  • From luvhp on August 17, 2007
    Gods that was GREAT!!! I truly love this story and am very happy to see you are continuing it :0)

    Hmm, messages from Mione to Draco...something naughty and Slytherin like would be good, hell if I can think right now, too worked up over their dreams. Please update soon!
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  • From Kilalla on August 14, 2007
    i love text messages lol like you dont even know.
    so herers my idea

    hey This is Hermione, you told my friend to give me your number? whats up?
    or
    Hi, this is hermione, what were you doing in a muggle club with a muggle cell phone??
    or
    Hey this is Hermione, want to get to gether to catch up?
    or
    Hey this is Hermione, Haven't heard anything about you in ages, how are you?

    lol idk if you want her to be flurty os what not so i just put simple straight to the point texts. lol

    I really like your story!
    Update soon yes?
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  • From myangeldraco on August 12, 2007
    Sounds good, can't wait till you update. PS.I like the happy ending, but do what you feels right for you xx
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  • From Kilalla on August 11, 2007
    i think this story is really cute and your dream idea for the next chapter should be intersting too...I also think that you should end the story happy... lol

    great start!
    update soon yes?
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  • From shelagh on April 25, 2007
    OK keep going. So far so good. ;)
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  • From SnapesSweetheart on April 25, 2007
    Just let it go where it leads you. Sometimes stories will do that. Don't worry about the ending till you get there. I can't wait to read more
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  • From SnapesSweetheart on April 24, 2007
    I hate cliffies and I love it so far so continue to write please. I don't care if it is happy or sad because both have the opportunity to be good.
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  • From Sekhmet on April 24, 2007
    Yes.. I think you should continue, it could be awesome.. please?
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