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Reviews for Bad Harry

By : LovelyPair
  • From blackemeraldsirius on December 09, 2007
    I absolutely LOVE this story as well as baby Harry. I noticed you haven't updated in a while.
    PLEASE try to soon? If anyone knows any stories like these my email is emerald939@Hotmail.com
    Thanks
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  • From Aquataine on August 02, 2007
    Wow that was great.
    I had an idea for a story similar to this so seeing as i cant write stories id let u know about it and see if you wanted to develop it. Oliver or Cedric decide to punish Harry for loosing the quiditch match to hufflepuff in his third year. Harry gets a snitch up his ass that flutters about all day and empties water into him when he cums. If he makes it back to the quiddich pich with a normal sized stomach then he escapes punishment. Needless to say poor harry dosn't stand a chance and gets punished by bieng taught how to fuck the quiddith equipment. (extra points if you use it all, brooms, snitch, bludgers an Quaffle) I have a great immage of bludgers, power turned down of course, attached to nipple clamps or poor harrys balls. Have fun with this if you decide to develop it. if not great couple of harry potter stories and write some more soon cause they are the best.

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  • From leilanilei on July 20, 2007
    i love this story! how does the blowing harry's stomach work? can that really happen? What is it called??Keep writing!
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  • From rommiedylan on July 13, 2007
    That was unusual to say the least. Good read, though. Are you planning a next chapter, because it looks incomplete.
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  • From Riverterra on June 20, 2007
    I LOVE it I want to hug it and maybe fuck it!! j/k I love and would love it more if you continued it I can just see it Harry getting double fuck by snape and his dad, james gets a dog to randomly fuck harry around the house.*day dreams* yummyyyyy
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  • From Chibes on May 24, 2007
    Spelling errors as long as it is legible is alright in my book...

    Updating any of your stories will make me love ya forever...yes I've noticed in practically all your stories you leave us poor fans hanging...(stories on the list I am eagerly waiting continuations are: Bad Harry, Baby Harry, Fill Up Nice, Loser, Elevator, and Nursing school)
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  • From sanda on May 06, 2007
    good story
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  • From lambentness on May 04, 2007
    ohh please say there's gonna be another chapter!
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  • From ulla on April 23, 2007
    Surprisingly naughty, which is weird because this is AFF. Not for the feint of heart. And since you asked I thought I should point out these spelling errors: humongous not humungous, dagged? you might've meant dabbed, banana not bananna, potatoes not potatos, squeezed not sqeezed. Okay. There are some grammatical errors, but nothing terrible. I am prone to dropping commas whenever, wherever I want. Not to mention run-on sentences.

    Thanks for a great read. Is there more to the story? I hope there's another chapter or two in there. I'm smitten. Kudos.
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