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Reviews for Better This Way

By : snapescauldron
  • From Ladyaph on May 01, 2007
    Wahh Wahh "now I know i've got a heart coz It's breaking" uncontollable sobbing comming from here. Paper hankie stock definatly depleted now using loo roll and hubby having a fine laugh at me for snivelling over a story, No dinner for him tomorrow

    It was another fine chapteer loved the cliff hangers they made me want to continue the story. God Severus better get off his bum and no something soon instead of drowing his sorrys in brady or what other comes to hand or he is going to lose that girl for sure.

    I think Mr and Mrs Ganger must suspect her heart is not really in thsi so clled marriage perhaps ther is hope if her mum or dad think staight

    Will tune in for upsate as soon as I can

    (forgot you might be american not British Hankie = Kleemex)
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  • From ANON - Kris on May 01, 2007
    I like how you update with two chapters a day. I cant wait for two new chapters tomorrow! And I have a feeling someone is going to have a baby, and someone needs to find that box with the ring in it.
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  • From Katha on May 01, 2007
    NO.. gosh... don't let this happen!! xD ... love it!! :)
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  • From AnnaV on May 01, 2007
    Seriously considering chaining you to your keyboard till you finish this. OH, btw, you misspelled a word you have scourgified as sourgified. hehehe
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  • From ANON - sinbad on May 01, 2007
    Please, please, please someone smack that girl into reality. What a mess she is making and while we're at it some one smack Severus over the head with a charmed wraught iron frying pan, oh wait it might damage the pan, Lol. Very enjoyable keep up the grate work!
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  • From ejana on May 01, 2007
    Yikes! Severus better hurry up and tell her whats in his heart. Watch her marry Victor and be pregnant with Severus child!
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  • From SorceressFujin on May 01, 2007
    Excellent updates!!! (As always!) This story just gets better and better. :)
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  • From ANON - ava on May 01, 2007
    What ??? This story is near the end ? No...please, no !!! This should be longer story. I like it very much. It will be perfect longer and with a happy end. I just like happy ends ;-)
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  • From Ladyaph on May 01, 2007
    well Hermione would not be the first woman to say goodbye to an old love before marrying someone else nor I dar say will she be the lasy, but you could have warned me I would need a bigger stock of hankies (sniff, sniff, bawl, bawl)

    will tune in for next chapter even though my heart is broken and I want to kick that Servus right on his bum for being such a bloody fool




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  • From draegonfire on May 01, 2007
    I can't believe Severus would do something so hurtful to Hermione as let her go. I hope he intends to win her back before she can marry Viktor. I think Severus definitely needs to tell Hermione how he feels, and that their relationship wasn't just a fling to him. If he bought her a ring, why didn't he ever give it to her? Was it only because he didn't think she would've stayed with him? I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes. Now if only AFF has some sort of story alert, like FFN, that would be really cool, since I would know when this story is updated. But please feel free to email me when the story is updated, so that I can keep reading.
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  • From Katha on May 01, 2007
    OMG ...Thanks for the unpate... O_o ... she can't marry that dunderhead!!! ... DO SOMETHING!!! ;) ..Update soon
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  • From barbarade on May 01, 2007
    OOOOOHHHH. Poor Severus I can't believe that Hermione will marry that oaf. I really hope Severus gathers the courage.
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  • From AnnaV on May 01, 2007
    Somebody pass the tissues please.
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  • From LustBlood on May 01, 2007
    Very nicely written story. Looking forward to more chapters. Please update soon!
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  • From barbarade on May 01, 2007
    Whoa that was not expected. You got to update really soon.
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