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Reviews for Acid Aphrodisiac

By : Mistaken
  • From tanyaflorio on March 27, 2010
    PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From bananasforyou on July 18, 2007
    it was a lil scary but i like it!!
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  • From akume on May 16, 2007
    Yay! Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see Lucius confront Draco about what he did to Harry. Until then.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 15, 2007
    I soooo need chapter 6! What is going on in the castle?
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  • From Vibora on May 01, 2007
    no! don't kill harry or draco please! you should continue though! cant wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - manx on April 30, 2007
    OK, good start, BUT why didn't Snape try to find out what Draco did to Harry before sending him to bed? For all he knows, Draco could have killed Harry and he's wasting valuanble time by not trying to find out what happened. Pretty pathetic for a spy!!
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  • From Jicky on April 30, 2007
    nooooooo, please, dun kill them!
    (aside from stupid ugly evil guys like Voldie n Bellatrix n WWormtail)
    haha i dun see Lucius as someone who would willingly live in the Shrieking Shack. but saving his own neck is probably worth the trouble.
    oh i'm dying to know wut Severus read from the book. you should write out the function n the fine print of it.
    ah i'm glad u were able to fix the space.
    n the A.N. are nicely done, informative but not too long.
    i think the story has been progressing nicely. althou, i think it lacks a bit of content in your writing. it makes me feel that it's a bit fast or choppy.
    there's a couple awkward phrasing, but nothin too noticeable.
    i hope u'll find these points helpful.
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  • From on April 30, 2007
    gasp! What happends next?
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 30, 2007
    Don't kill them! Oh I've got to have more! What was in the fine print? Must have more! Need chapter 5!!!
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  • From akume on April 30, 2007
    Please don't kill off anyone. Well, maybe just Voldemort. Anyway, I love your portrayal of the three Slytherins. Until next time.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 30, 2007
    Thank goodness Lucius was there and had those supplies. Can't wait for chapter 4!
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  • From Mistaken on April 30, 2007
    I'll be adding it*ch#3* probably in about....an hour? Thanks for the reviews! ^_^
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 29, 2007
    I sooo need chapter 3! Poor Harry! He could die from his injuries. Fever could set in as well as infection.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2007
    wow.....that was wow keep updating i would love to see what you come up with next
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  • From Jicky on April 27, 2007
    i liked the summary, thus why i came in to read.
    it's a good start, and i like the plot so far.
    i love the angst, and hope to see more of it.
    not a lot of character development seen of Harry or Draco, but that's understandable. so i want to see how they will progress.
    i like seeing Severus, but he seems very irresponsible. i would like to see how he will react once he finds out that he exposed Harry to his torture.
    oh n i would like to see how Lucius fits in.
    other than that i truly look forward to the next chapter.

    ps i was gona have a whole paragraph about how i hate that huge ass space in the beginning of the chapter. but thankfully i saw the review page. since u haven't been able to fix it yet, u should put in an A.N. in the 1st chapter.
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