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Reviews for Paradigm

By : KaylaisEvenstar
  • From ANON - Diana on April 29, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From xsuzuakaix on November 14, 2007
    Word usage and description are excellent. Little complaints are to be said when reading this magical piece that surpasses even the original author's writing skills. Pray do continue or else I go mad with anticipation.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2007
    I really enjoyed reading this story; it's very well written and entertaining. Though--Harry's incompetence in more than one part in that third chapter was annoying. He's much more, I don
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  • From PuckxEddyxEh on August 18, 2007
    From the very beginning, I was riveted to the spot - well, to my chair, but you get the point. I am truly glad to see an author of superior skill to J.K. Rowling! Hah! I've been laughing in her face mentally because it is of my opinion that you could have completed the seventh book yourself! Not to say stealing her series would be rude, but I think I much prefer your skills over hers. I was rather tired of seeing stories that made the characters so OOC, thus I commend you for the canon. I really do. I appreciate writers such as yourself, as they are such a rarity. Thank you for the great story and please do continue it. I'll be waiting patiently.

    Signed,

    Your Dedicated Reader.
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  • From Selera on July 24, 2007
    YAY! I'm glad you are continueing the story.
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  • From Selera on July 22, 2007
    I say just follow your original plan and screw DH! I want this story continued.
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  • From dianahuntresss on May 26, 2007
    You've got an interesting if somewhat original story going here... Keep it up..

    It's hard to find the right balance to get a good Harry/Voldemort pairing because they are such
    complete opposites. You will have to move them so that they are not so diametrically opposed constantly.
    Harry will have to become a bit more ruthless and voldemort will likely have to have some moral and a conscious or it will just never pan out. It will little more than lust and sex and that's just not something to build a relationship on.

    As for the magic and electricity thing...This is how I see it: Harry did do uncontrolled magic at the Dursley's as I understand it ALOT of magic will interfer with things that run on electricity its not that neither will work or not. If not for the underage magic ban Harry and Hermione could both do their summer homework and it would work. Think of magic as a kind of feedback on the radio or a signal that disrupts TV reception..one kid or adult praticing at home or doing magic at home won't make a big difference on what works or doesn't... 5 might because of the AMOUNT of magic. At hogwarts there is so much magic that electricity is more disrupted than able to work so they just flat out say its not possible there. I am guessing and this is only theory mind you but rooms in a purely magic household can be shielded so that electricty will work properly... and if it wasn't for magic detectors (like the one that reported Dobby's hover charm) then most magic in muggle or mostly Muggle homes would be common place and not even a reason for discussion... those halfbloods or complete muggleborns would work out exactly how much magic they could do or live with before it interfered with the workings of their otherwise MuggleStandard home.

    hope things work out in your real life situation and that my rambling explaination didn't throw you off too much.
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  • From Kaitlyn on May 26, 2007
    Very well written.

    I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From Vex on May 23, 2007
    I love this fic. Far too many HP/LV fanfictions have a friendly Voldie, missunderstood/ukish Harry and so many other oddities..
    I love slow plots and an in depth story. I'm really going to enjoy watching this fiction.

    Good luck writting it, please don't give up on it. I already love it too much!
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  • From ProfessorSibly on April 27, 2007
    *Reads the first to chapters with more then a little interest.*

    Ok, you know have my full and complete attention...

    Great start, love, and I'm enjoying all of the intellectual and adult bits you are adding into it.

    Keep it up, love, and you'll make yourself a loyal reader out of me.
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  • From Danine on April 27, 2007
    Slightly hard to follow at first, but I do love LV/HP. So neville is the true chosen one, eh? I like that, I've used it before (well, implied really. it was a HP is LV and crazy story, anyhow) I always thought that had great potential for a plot. i only shudder for the wizarding world if it were true. He's not near as clever as Harry. There is a conundrum about that though, at least for canon, in that JKR said when Harry was chosen and given the scar, it automatically made him the chosen one. It could easily have been neville, if Voldemort had gone to his house that night, but then he probably would have died unless his mother copied what Lily did.

    I love the idea of Harry being a Horcrux, like Nagini. Lord Voldemort seems to bestow great affection upon her. I wonder if he'd do the same with our hero... Mmm!

    Anyway, these two are my utmost favourite pairing. If you want any help or ideas, or need to work something out, feel free to email me. And please continue. It's not a terribly popular pairing, and unless you make Harry preggers with a baby voldie and slip Draco in there somewhere, I doubt you'll get too many hits. Don't let that deter you, there's still plenty of us out there that love these two together. I think the challenge of getting them to get it on is simply the best part!
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  • From DaemonSadi on April 27, 2007
    I have some sugestions but first I must say that having the chapel was a wondeful idea. One to wich I can suscribe as being voldemorts quite easily.
    You could make this all easier by having voldemort fall in lust with harry and then finding out ( at the same time or before) that harry was indeed one of his horocrux's would give him alot of power of harry of wich he had been until that moment not awear. For just as he controlled the creatures (such as snakes) that he possesd while formless so in a very simmilar manner does he seem to controle Nagini who is also one of his Horocruxs'.

    Dae
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