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Reviews for Hidden Inheritance

By : TwinPhoenix222
  • From mina-sina on June 22, 2014
    i like it!!!1 please make the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2012
    i was really wondering when you will be adding more chapters to this story i really liked it can wait to read more so please update soon!!!!
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  • From rah172007 on January 16, 2009
    Are you done with this or are you going to update on it? I really enjoy it! Please update!
    ~rah~
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  • From MoonTart on February 25, 2008
    This was actually interesting. You did make one mistake, but it is a common one. You mentioned Harry might mate with a succubus. It would actually be an Incubus, the male counterpart of a Succubus. Not many people realize that Incubi and Succubi are the same species just different genders. Hope you continue with this story.
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  • From alma on February 09, 2008
    Totally awesome start.
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  • From Auroawinter on August 27, 2007
    I hope you write more, I really enjoyed the first chapter.

    Ja ne

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  • From KismetQ on August 27, 2007
    I just finished reading chapter one of your story and I must say that I found it quite interesting to read. I like how you payed attention to detail and gave valid explanations (well as valid as one can expect in the world of fiction) without coming off as farfetched. So far I am really enjoying your fanfic and can not wait to read more!!!! By the way when will you update? And when/if you do is it possible for you to notify me that you did? I only ask because otherwise I would lose track of this story and that is something that I do not wish to do. Thanks!!! :)
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  • From hilfreak on June 05, 2007
    This story is so good! I really hope to see an update soon!
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  • From roni004 on June 02, 2007
    i hope you update soon
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  • From stasa on April 30, 2007
    Like the story. I don
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  • From NightLo on April 30, 2007
    So...your meaning is - even Harry possesses all female features, but he has some percentage of MH in him, so he is a male, and called a male - but after his inheritance and reveal, would it be more proper to change him into her?
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  • From Jan on April 30, 2007
    WOW! Love this story so far. It's very unique. I did get confuse with this whole thing of Harry being a boy but with out his penis thing-y, to me 'he' is more a 'she' but I did get what you said in your A/N. Because of that I am starting to understand, but it's still weird seeing him as a boy without his penis(after all it is the best part of him *wink*). I really hope you update soon. Like I said I love this story so far, it's brilliant. ^_~
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  • From hilfreak on April 30, 2007
    This story is very unique. I am looking forward to reading more! I hope you can update soon.
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  • From zozobozo4444 on April 30, 2007
    Ok I think I got that... So because Harrys a MH he shows a preferance towards one gender other the other, but still has slight charateristics of the seconed gender thus making him a MH. Also mabe the ability to change shape abit, or is that just a realy complicated glamer charm that has everyone seeing Harry as a male?

    Thanks for the information feed back update soon plz
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  • From TwinPhoenix222 on April 30, 2007
    I hope everyone read my A/N Chapter. It explains (hopefully) about MHs and what an Archin is. Review again if you need more explaining, and I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the reviews! Love you all!
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