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Reviews for A Ghostly Curse

By : ShilohDarke
  • From ANON - steph on July 16, 2007
    Hope your still working on this story its interesting.
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on July 11, 2007
    Cool! I love your story! I find it very well written and you are keeping the suspense turned hard to on!
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  • From ANON - Steph on July 09, 2007
    More then ready for an update, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lana on July 08, 2007
    Hey,

    I have read all of your stories and I can't seem to get enough of them. I do hope that you update soon and if you could notify me when you do update would be great. I am looking forward to seeing more of this story and others. Please keep updating!!!!! Thanks
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  • From ANON - LustBlood on July 08, 2007
    i LOVE it! My only complaint... the chapters are too short and far in between!!!!!!! Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Tasha on July 06, 2007
    Love this story...you definately didn't go over the top with this. It is smutty with a limit...nothing too overdone. Tasteful is the work that I am thinking of. I hope you continue it. I think it has great potential. I would love to see it completed in more chapters (with a happy ending..hehe) I shall be looking forward to the next chapter. Toodles...until then!


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  • From skydancer on July 06, 2007
    *giggles a little at the appology for too many sex scenes!!!*

    hemhem: ADULTfanfiction.net........adult....

    I think the story is progressing quite nicely, and that the need for a few lemons/limes/grapefuits is part and parcel to its completion


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  • From ANON - firewall on July 05, 2007
    Ch 9 - Heck no! you didn't go over the top. Hermione is very lucky that she was dumped by Snape...he loves Ginny but has to visit a brothel without her knowledge. He'd be lucky if all she did was castrate him if she found out but then again, maybe that is more Hermione's style. I didn't feel this section of your chapter was out of place. It just re-enforced that Hermione has moved on and is ready for a new interest, Lucius. Hmmm, I'm waiting to see if there is going to be a confrontation between the two wizards though. Severus should not be fixating on Hermione. I perceive a bit of trouble here. Will it destroy their friendship if it happens?

    I enjoyed Hermione and Lucius together, especially since she gave him satisfaction as selflessly as he had her. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update. This story is very compelling.
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  • From scotsgirl on July 05, 2007
    What a brilliant chapter well done, so looking forward to the next update. Hope Severus learns of his mistake swapping to Ginny.
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  • From dragon37 on July 05, 2007
    Oh yes, they have to find his body
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on July 04, 2007
    excellent!
    at least she doesn't have the mess to clean up afters...
    wonder if sev is going to get busted while tramping around?
    waiting for more.
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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on July 04, 2007
    nope doesnt offend me. Love this story and look forward to more.
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  • From ozarkmoon on July 04, 2007
    As of Chapter 9, no, there is not too much sex. It is all an integral part of the story and each scene of lemony goodness has its proper place.
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 04, 2007
    Chapter 9: I don't mind hearing Severus' thoughts on marriage and the two women he's managed to attract. It makes sense that he would be sexually drawn to the woman who makes him feel that way (everyone knows you can't control that), but he would also have a strong affinity for a female who offered him intellectual stimulation (although from our previous 'peek' into the Snape-Granger marriage, it didn't seem like he was spending much time wallowing in her mind - he was rather standoffish and remote).

    All in all, though, it does seems that Snape would like to have his cake and eat it too. But if secret fantasies were known to all - as we are hearing his in this chapter - I suspect a great many of our thoughts would sound exactly like Snape's. I'm mildly disappointed in his infidelity and selfishness mostly for Ginny's sake but not much - she stole Hermione's husband so I haven't much sympathy for her either. This is a Lucius/Hermione love story so I'm perfectly happy for Snape to have a less than angelic persona here. (snicker)

    I have faith that Lucius is going to sweep all before him, winning Hermione and showing our 'feet of clay' Snape that he threw away something precious. Snape needs to learn to desire what he has, not yearn for what isn't available. I do think he's mostly horny and apparently he has a high sex drive which is bothering him right now, due to Ginny's pregnancy. I wonder if he will ever want another child knowing now how Ginny will react to sex.

    That Lucius has more tricks... He's already found a way to get around his noncorporeal body, using the ol' mutual masturbation ploy. Such a deliciously virile man with a never-ending sexual appetite. I do love a man who verbally directs the sex play.

    You have certainly moved into a different league with the frequency and variety of your lemons. Of course, you know from my stories I'm not at all offended. I'm mesmerized. You definitely have a talent for smut. Hot, hot, hot. And you've woven in enough sincere feeling between the two participants to make it more than cold sex. That gives your sex scenes a more intense, caring dimension that elevates their lovemaking to greater possibilities in future chapters.

    Wonderful writing!
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  • From ANON - Lazart on July 04, 2007
    I'm loving the story!! I love the suspence in it...anyway can't wait for more so update soon!
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