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Reviews for A Ghostly Curse

By : ShilohDarke
  • From Sampdoria on July 04, 2007
    First of all let me assure you that the sex-scenes in your story are very well done and fit the plot very, very well!
    Seccond, I am very happy that Ginny now have the honour of beeing married to Severus. If he can't stay faithful to the one he is supposed to love so much while she is pregnant with his child, there is no reason to believe that he would ever be faithful. Please, please don't ever let Hermione fell into his bed again in this story, that will most certenly ruin the story for me, he doesn't deserve her, but he deserves to know what he has lost for ever. I hope Lucius will realise that his "pureblood" ideas are rather daft, and that he is smart enough to hold on to Hermione. After what she went through with Severus, I think Lucius will have very little leeway with regards to mistake in their relationship, as it should be. I love the smut and the battle of wills, but "my" Hermione will have a backbone and self respect even if she is in love. Besides, I could easily in my mind see Severus and Lucius sitting in front of a fire, nursing a glass of firewhiskey and Lucius telling Severus how pregnant hormones make Hermione even more wanton and demanding in their bed (or where ever else she wants to "enjoy" him:-)) I can see the twitch in his eye, knowing what he has not. That scene makes a very, very beautyful picture in my mind:-)))
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  • From ladyravenna on July 04, 2007
    That was hot. LOL. I like seeing the growing development in Lucius and Hermione's relationship, it's really coming along nicely. I agree with Hermione that they better find Lucius' body soon, 'cause I am sure the sex will be a lot better. LOL.
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  • From ANON - Moonchick on July 04, 2007
    Brilliant as always! I've been following your stories for quite some time and I love each and every one of them! Very well done and I hope you update soon! =D
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 04, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From ridert on July 04, 2007
    I don't think it's over the top at all the sex in the story seems (to me at least) to be an important part of the whole thing. I am not sure that Hermione's character, as you have her written, would want to find Lucius's body as badly as she does if it weren't for the physical attraction she is feeling toward him and the physical pleasure she is recieving from him.
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  • From wicraven on July 04, 2007
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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  • From DarkLady on July 04, 2007
    alright thanks to this chapter honey I am thoroughly addicted :D I loved Severus's reflections and that fact he's cheating on the red head whore *snorts* ohh Does he walk in on Lucius/Hermione? :D and I really hope you post this at GE soon I think it would go wonderfully :D
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  • From DarkLady on June 26, 2007
    SQUEE! She was cold! And Severus is fooling himself if he thinks he's not jealous, how did Ginny not pick up on that she is incredibly stupid...I hate her so much LOL zomg you are a dirty girl for that Lucius hand I nearly fell off my chair in shock :D
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  • From DarkLady on June 26, 2007
    *stmaps foot* I wanted her to be really cold with Ginny, if you haven't guessed already Ihate Ginny but love your Lucius hehe he's so yum!@
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  • From DarkLady on June 26, 2007
    ohhh woman I want to slap your bottom! She let Severus and Ginny get away with it much to easily...bloody bastards *mad for Hermione* hehe although I'm chuffed that Ginny didn't have anything to do with Draco thank the gods there is like an unwritten Draco rule amongst Hermione fans...if he isn't with her then he's gay *Snorts* or maybe that's just my rule? *laughing* alright off to read more :D love that Lucius is wicked :D
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  • From ANON - Peaches on June 23, 2007
    Oh, it's delightful! UPDATE.
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  • From TerryITA on June 13, 2007
    yeah!go lucius!!!!i love this story,and i would like to help Hermione in her research of Lucius's body!!!ghghggh!!!
    keeps going on!
    ciaociao
    terry
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on June 12, 2007
    Thank you for the new chapter. It was great! Seems Sev was getting a little bit jealous that Hermione had a sucker bite. I think if I were Gin I would have been a bit pertrub with my man for acting that way.

    waiting for more. hurray up
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 10, 2007
    Chapter 8: Oh, I adore Severus' snit that Hermione has moved on without caring about him any more. That does my heart good. (I told you I wasn't sweet-natured like her.) The hickey mark on her neck was inspired. Nyah, nyah, Severus!

    A double shock for our mean, old Severus: Draco's alive and Lucius is a ghost. Ooh, you're getting him good in this chapter.

    Wow. Double wow! Fisting. That Lucius certainly has an fascinating repertoire and it sounds like he's just shown her a only little slice of what he's capable of. My goodness, what next? I love Lucius when he slips off the goody-two-shoes radar into more 'creative' loveplay.

    IS it love yet? Perhaps it's too soon yet for them to be more than sexually attracted to each other. They don't have enough going for them yet, I guess, to feel more. We'll need many more chapters of lemonade, lemon pie, lemon drops, lemon grass (oops, how did that get in there?)

    Now about this DADA professor - will she be a match for Draco or is she much older than he is? And you are planning a gruesome end for Bellatrix, I hope.

    Sexy, naughty chapter - just the way I like them - great work. Thanks for sharing and tell your muse she's outdone herself.
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  • From Sampdoria on June 10, 2007
    I loved this!! I loved how Severus had to face the feelings of Hermione beeing able to live very well without him. Must have been a blow to his ego, very well done Hermione!
    I am a bit nervous about meeting this new professor of yours, somethings tell me that you wouldn't bring another female into the story for other reasons than to hurt Hermiones feelings. I sure feels that having one man leaving her and betraying her the way Severus did was more than enough. Anyway, a truly brilliant story, I really love it! Update again soon.
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