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Reviews for A Year's Temptation

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From QueenB on November 04, 2007
    Ch. 9 I had to stop reading this story. At this point, it
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  • From QueenB on November 03, 2007
    Ch. 6 I do not believe this woman! Okay, I know this story is already finished and it's going to end up being Harry/Draco; there's nothing I can do to fix that. But the woman is danged stupid to leave without a fight! She knows Harry's struggling with his feelings. She knows Draco is a Malfoy, a Slytherin and a Veela and all of these things means he will play dirty to get what he wants--and probably succeed. So why would she think the solution to the dilemma is running off?

    So she's not a hero like Harry is. Every woman becomes a fighter when her loved ones are threatened; why should she be any different? Pansy may be a lowdown, conniving witch but at least she's willing to do what she needs to win.

    Frankly, I don't see why Draco should be so upset at her efforts or fault her for her tactics. She's a Slytherin through and through and he hasn't been playing fairly either. He's getting a taste of his own methods and the idea that he's falling for Harry doesn't excuse his behavior. He's being selfish, thinking only of his own feelings and disregarding that of other people involved. He deserves to get a sample of how that works.

    So now I'll read and see how the rest of it turns out.
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  • From ANON - sayanything76 on November 02, 2007
    This was a nice change from the typical Veela fics. I loved that Harry and Draco were older with established lives already. It added a whole new element to the story. There was a maturity present that you just can't get with teenage boys. I also loved the timeline in which the story was written. Getting to see feelings change over the course of a year and watching the different timelines or "dates" come and go gave you something to look forward to just in wanting to know how everyone was going to deal with things when they didn't go according to plan.

    Anyway, I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for the lovely story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2007
    Didn't Amycus died? In chapter 6 you mentioned that the "rest of the Hermes Corps were working with Richard Yaxley and Amycus, who seemed more likely to give them information".
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  • From spaghetti on October 02, 2007
    your pansy is the first i've ever really disliked, but during august i felt so bad for her
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  • From Jan on September 14, 2007
    OMG! I just loved this story! Your Brilliant! ^_^
    ^_~
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  • From villepassaro on September 01, 2007
    i adored it!
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  • From ANON - Gonrie on August 12, 2007
    Honey... I think I'm in love with you!
    You just...wow. Incredible writter is exactly what you are.
    I'll defenitively go check for more stories from you and I hope to find somes.
    You did an excellent work.
    Gonrie
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on July 27, 2007
    Another great story writen by a great authoress. This story was wonderfully delightful. It flowed perfectly and I am so glad that I came acroos it.

    Hoping to read more stories from you soon; your fan,

    ~ rAiNwAtEr ~
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  • From Britneylaws on July 04, 2007
    I hope you don't mind, but I recommended this fic to someone on Live Journal. There was, of course, talk about how brilliant your writing is, so I hope that is consolation if you don't like the idea of me giving links to this fic.

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  • From cynaga on June 25, 2007
    Absolutely delightful~! Sad to hear there will be no sequel.
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  • From Mdunlap on June 25, 2007
    Very, very good. I haven't been on AFF much in the last year because some people were jerking us around, but this might be enough to bring me back on a regular basis. I love Veela!Draco stories, and this is one of the better ones. Thanks.
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  • From caroll on June 24, 2007
    Well I'm so sad that this wonderfull fic has come to an end and that there'll be no sequel but thanks anyway it was awsome all twelve chap!
    I'll try hard again to enjoy B.W.W.0. but in my opinion it's not as well written as AY's T, in wich the end leave the aftertaste of an unfinished business.
    Still great plot and hope to read new intersting works in the future,hope there be more smutt in it (hihi).
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  • From NightLo on June 24, 2007
    Finally the two are magically and legally together, though the way to happiness and acceptance, as pointed out by them, is still way beyond reach...however, they have each other for support, which is not an easy thing to do...

    This is a brilliant story, and the characters are by all...the most nearest to original ones I have ever read, I really did enjoy much, thanks for this good journey...

    Hoping to read more of yours in the future.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 24, 2007
    I sooo don't want this to end!!!
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