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Reviews for A Year's Temptation

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From acr1228 on June 24, 2007
    yeah! great fic! Though I would like to see Ginny and her new boyfriend. Is it Ralph?

    BTW, it might be cool if Draco just started his own Quidditch league, where all the players are magical creatures!
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on June 24, 2007
    That was simply one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. Here I was thinking that I could sit down and read a few chapters and pick it up another day, but this story was so captivating that I ended up reading it in one go. I couldn't be happier about that choice either. Rarely have I had an author make me feel the pain and love the characters in the story go through but you have managed to put me through an emotional roller coaster. I applaud you in making this story have so much depth and wonderful qualitites that all tales should have. Simply by reading this alone I wish you the best of luck if you ever decide to write an original story and have it published, though you wouldn't need it. You're writing style is so captivating that I doubt there would be anyone to turn it away. Thank you so much for writing this, you are an exquisite writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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  • From Annie on June 24, 2007
    :takes a deep deep deep breath: :exhales for a good ten seconds:

    wow

    I mean...

    ...hotdiggorydamnholymerlinwhatastory...wow.

    I'm going to have to print this last chapter out and read it over and over and over again because it's so perfect, so passionate, so fucking raw that I can't help wanting to do anything else than cuddle the hell out of something right now...and wish I had a boyfriend really really badly, for once, so that I could cuddle him instead. Or maybe even have little Veela!Draco and HisMate!Harry dolls and squish the stuffings out of them.

    The love scene was flawless. The feelings Harry experienced, from fear to fearless, were magnificent. The confession at the end was mind-blowing. Hell, even the divorce scene was outstanding.

    I do wish that there would be more of this, but you gave so nice of a closure that I am actually more satisfied this way. I wish I can write like you do. Anyway, this story was a wonderful ride, and I hope to read more from you.

    BTW, congrats on getting my longest review on this site =P
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  • From LupinsLady on June 23, 2007
    That was soooo good!!!
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  • From misslala on June 23, 2007
    Oh Bravo, what an excellent story! ;) Thank you so much for sharing this! It wasn't like all of the other tired and played out Veela tales. Awesome job!
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  • From ANON - Sol on June 23, 2007
    Loved the whole story! a Harry and Ginny divorce AND veela!Draco. What a combination! Love BWWT too! Your plot bunny must be extra fluffy and cute!
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  • From ANON - Britneylaws on June 23, 2007
    That was perfect. It's a real shame you are not going to write a sequal, but it is fantastic, so it doesn't really need one. I hope to read more of your work in the future.

    Ja ne
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  • From Drkluver on June 23, 2007
    Gosh I hope that wasn't the end.
    It's about damn time they had sex too. >:-)
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  • From ANON - sak on June 23, 2007
    Wonderful, incredible and satisfactory story. Thanks for all your hard work in writing it.
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  • From ANON - RRW on June 23, 2007
    This is one of the best Veela stories I have ever read. Thank you for giving me the chance to read such a brilliant story.
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  • From ANON - Moyima on June 23, 2007
    Awww. Is that the end?
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  • From NightLo on June 18, 2007
    Hum...I love this very much - esp. how the two shared and cared for each other, now they truly showed they have deep feelings, they plan to share life, they think as one and even act as one...they have so different backgrounds, but they try to find common grounds...

    Afterall, there was some sadness in this story, and their happiness makes this piece more lovely.


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  • From Extraho on June 18, 2007
    im so glad they're getting closer. finally!!!
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  • From ANON - brilliant on June 18, 2007
    This is a brilliant fiction. I absoulutely love it. I am also reading your other fic Building With Worn Out Tools and honestly had no intention of opening this fic. Because it had HET and Pansy/Draco and Harry/Ginny. I don't like HET nor do I read HET Harry Potter fics...but this was different and I knew it from the first chapter. I was weary the first couple of chapters but after awhile I just had to keep reading and see where it all went. And it was/is brilliant. I was surprised but awed and greatly pleased all the same.

    It is one of the best Veela stories I have ever read as well. And, wait for it, it includes one sexual position or act that I don't see often in fan fictions; the position where Draco was making a move to "prepare" Harry for penetration dubbed the backside rub for lack of a better term. I personally think it is a sensual position and is very intimate and at time considerate and is the very reason why many authors don't think to put it their ficiton. Most writers here would rather boast NC, moresomes, bdsm, and literally list every "warning" to gross their readers into arousal. :D

    yeah.

    SO anyway. I love the fic and considered going back to review every chapter just so I can see your review count go up because it should be in the hunderds, this is such a good fic. But I am also aware that this fic is on more than one site and that it has been updated rather timely so to finish it in 12 weeks or more so it hasn't garnered the thousands of reviews a fic left to drag on for 3 years might. And I thank you for those timely updates. Personally I like to read finished fics although I do make exceptions for great writing. :D I am also reading every chapter of BWWOT as it comes out because I just love that fic.

    Ta


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  • From thrnbrooke on June 18, 2007
    I soooo need chapter 12! When are they going to bond? After the divorce? I don't think Ginny is going to give up easily! Though if she were to see how happy Harry is.... no even then she wouldn't.
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