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Reviews for A Year's Temptation

By : Lomonaaeren

From ANON - Yanic on June 06, 2007
Ok, I stumbled upon this when I was reading your other story, and this is *awesome* too! You are a very talented writer and you have a gift for telling a good story. Thanks for sharing.
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From ANON - Seishuku on June 06, 2007
I was just being a junky and re-reading this chapter when I noticed some grammar that sounded strange.
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From ANON - bm on June 05, 2007
I loved it, as usual
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From NightLo on June 04, 2007
...if Harry knows nothing about that, then we must wait and see...but as Fleur told - Harry should make a decision that he feels right, feels most comfortable and HAPPY to comply, but not to make no one hurt...

As Draco has decided to commit a crime (?) that 'squashed' Pansy's mind, willingly and whole-heartedly, for ALL costs - I would not suggest what should Harry do, but at least he should acknowledged it and accepted - but not to make judgement too easily...

But I loved the idea that Harry is human, so as Draco, Ginny, Pansy and Snape - we are not perfect, we are small and insignificant - we have emotions, feelings and obsessions. So it is really normal for us to be selfish, as in Draco's playing with Pansy, as in Pansy's action of taking photos, as in Ginny's decision to demand - so what is wrong with Harry making a decision to make himself happy and satisfied? For his partner Ralph (?), if he really has a crush on Ginny, he should court her as soon as possible!

The fight is just too fantastics - fighting nake! Wow - what a scene did that make! And...and a naked powerful possessive blond veela Draco holding an equally naked, unconscious and damaged auror Harry, demanding attention and treatment, making a scene, dropping all his facades of coolness...that was just HOT and too fairy-tale like...too sweet to think and imagine!

But as Harry has made his decision, maybe it is time to let them know each other more, as I do agree that such kind of bonding should be taken seriously - as attraction and allure cannot sustain love, and love is built on trust, sharing, passion, carings and truth!
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From Bookworm51485 on June 04, 2007
I didn't think it would be Snape. The comments from the person, Alecto I think, made me think that the person was like a Quirell type. Gave the impression of being less than he was, and I don't think anyone would doubt Snape's skills. So I didn't really think of him. Not only that, despite him disliking Harry, I always thought of him as being inherently good. But I guess after HBP a lot of people questioned his motives, at least that's the impression I've gotten. I never actually made it all the way through the book:)

Moving on, I'm glad that Harry ended it with Ginny. It's better for them both in the end, though I will confess that I found myself not caring that much, actually not at all:), how Ginny ended up. It takes two to ruin a marriage they say, but I feel like she didn't try as hard for him as he did for her. But whatever. In the end I'm just happy he'll be moving on from her. And I'm glad he talked to Fleur. I think he needed someone who had full knowledge of the situation, but didn't really have a personal stake in it, to bounce his feelings off of.

And moving away from any analysis or deep thoughts, I loved that restaurant scene. And the end at St. Mungos. Probably not intended to be funny, but I found myself laughing, especially at Draco's description of their dramatic, and naked, arrival at the hospital.

Anyways, that's all I got for your. A bit shorter than last time but I think it's still god. And yes, this chapter did answer some questions. Like Pansy with the pictures. I couldn't have imagine how she would have thought that that would have been a good idea. But I guess Veela-allure caused desperation can make a person do stupid things.
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From beth2438 on June 04, 2007
i absolutely adore this chapter. keep it up please.
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From thrnbrooke on June 04, 2007
I soooo need chapter 10! I hope Harry will understand what Draco has done to Pansy. Their bond is sooo fragile. Severus was willing to kill Draco? But that would mean his own life as well. Or did he believe that Harry would save him in time? I sooo need more!
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From ANON - manx on June 04, 2007
OOPS! Disregard the last review. The cat tried to walk across my keyboard while I was typing. I originally thought of Snape, but as he is a Potions Master, AND a strong wizard, that has to be wrong. I thought of Percy and Neville, Blaise and Nott. I don't think Crabb and Goyle would be thought of as a middlin' wizard, more like poor. Seamus, Dean? With the willingness to say Voldemort, I thought perhaps someone who fought on the light side?
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From ANON - mnx on June 04, 2007
I originally thought it was nape, but he is KNOWN to be far from weak.
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From NightLo on May 29, 2007
Oh...I just love this - as Harry finally realized he indeed needs to be loved, and should be loved and cared in return! And Draco...really...great use of skill and allure!!! And the fight against Ginny...just fantastic...he can even gain support from another veela, maybe his quidditch profession and strategic scheming skill helps a lot!

Well...though Ginny's last decision has acted wrong (but I admire her attitude - never give up without a fight!)...but it is really understandable, she is Harry's husband, she has right to protect what is hers, so she just acts it on her own accord - to request/demand Harry to let it go...but even she has suffered, Harry has suffered too...and relationship is not built on command...would this help Draco further?

Even with the support from Fleur, I still have one...worry...Harry has mentioned that his happiness should not built on Ginny's pain, or other's pain...if ever he witnesses what Pansy has become...would Harry condemn Draco and leave him? Or...would jealousy and possessiveness be born inside Harry? Can Harry face the press and the world? Draco only has four more months before the agreement ends...with one crazyman, one rival, one wife and one mate to fight for...who win in the end?
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From caroll on May 28, 2007
I loved this Go Harry!!!It's good to see hm starting to go after what he needs even if it's slowly.
And Fleur Delacour just became my heroine in this one!
Seriously Ginny does not know Harry!
But I'm curious, did Fleur really tell her the things she mentioned in the letter about the veelas?And about the rest of the weasly's do they know about what's going on?
Also why do I get the feeling that Ginny only accepted that Harry tells Ralph about "it" to get some sympathy?
Anyway...this fic is amazing, but une and august are my favourite so far.
And is Remus dead like the Malfoys, cause if not, I think that it'll be goodd for Harry to have someone who genuinely cares for him and who could give him some kind of advice about hapiness.Orr that he will have a little talk with Fleur's husband(he sure kows not to resist a veela)!
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From Dezra on May 28, 2007
I think Ginny needs a lesson on how to treat Harry. Draco is being so wonderful. I hope that Pansy gets whats coming to her. Great story, I'm so hooked.

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From Jan on May 28, 2007
I think if Ginny really loved Harry she would back off and let him have this Happiness that she her self saw, and stop trying to interfere in their relationship. Please update soon. I love this story. ^__^
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From Argo on May 28, 2007
It bothers me that every time both Harry and Draco thinks about fucking (I think it would be time of eventual and full claiming?), both of them automatically means that Harry should be bottom. It is on contrary to Draco's usual desire for Harry to think about his own needs and do what he wants. I supposed Draco wants them to be equal partners, since he was enjoying Harry as worthy contender in Quidditch and considered equal to him in all. Also, I always saw Harry, as protector, caregiver and leader, who was too much controlled and manipulated in his life to be agreed being ordered about or even be anything but equal in relationship. It was bugging me along all story, that Draco always takes leading role and seems be sure that he will be always a leading one, if (and now when) he and Harry will be together.
Now, in this chapter I was absolutely delighted to read phrase "absolute surrender for absolute surrender". That was that has calmed my discontent about Harry and Draco's situation and reconciled me with my reactions at few mention about boys, having a steady relationship.
I still angry about Draco constantly using his Veela power to get what he needs from Harry - and he IS taking advantage every time they have intercourse, but you can't see him not doing that, what with him being true Slytherin and all. More so, since he had promised Harry to not use his wings and claiming mark to make Harry be more obedient to him. And Harry finally explained that he needs to be on control of his own life and his choices. so there is hope, they both will get what they wants.
Although I still hope that they will manage to stay apart for year, and Veela in Draco will quit. Then they can chose to be together on equal ground and fully because they chosen each other, not because creature and nature did them.
I really want to see Harry finally doing a decision and taking some active role in their action with Draco, I'm becoming tired from his passivity. Take a lead already, Harry, for Merlin's sake! You're a man, not a some scared virgin! (Ok, you're virgin, but Draco also is, in that sense) :)
I also wanted to point that Ginny was SO wrong, then she deny Harry sex. Ok, they can't have full action, but please, both of them can give each other the satisfaction and pleasure, and more than that, by doing that both of them would return feeling of belonging to each other, to share something intimate, personal. Ginny, by denying Harry not only sex, but even some hugging also, shows that she doesn't care about his needs and desires, as she wants to show. Very stupid from her side.
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From thrnbrooke on May 28, 2007
Soooo need chapter 9! Maybe Ralph is the answer for Ginny! Fluer is on Draco's side! Thank goodness! I soooo gotta have more!
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