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Reviews for A Year's Temptation

By : Lomonaaeren

From ANON - dm999 on May 25, 2007
Hi!!!

Your fic is sooooooo wonderful!!!!
I love it, I have read a lot of veela-fics but yours is oustanding, the characters, the plot, everything.

Please keep writing.
DM
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From thrnbrooke on May 25, 2007
That was beyond perfect! I sooo need chapter 8!
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From acr1228 on May 24, 2007
great chapter. Wow!
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From Roedhunt on May 24, 2007
Hi there! I was rec this story and I'm really glad that I was! I love this story for many many reasons. One - and the most important reason - is that you are not Ginny bashing! I cannot STAND character bashing. *shudders* Everyone is always so quick to call Ginny a bitch or a slut or a child or anything else they can think of that it really makes me sick. I've stopped reading stories that turned into a character bashing one. Especially one that does it to Ginny. And you haven't - IMHO anyway. You have portrayed her as a loving wife and fully supports her husband, but now is in a situation that is tearing her apart. I don't blame her. How would *any* woman feel if her husband was with someone else - no matter WHAT the circumstances were? If my husband or bf *ever* cheated on me - there wouldn't be a second chance. He'd be gone - or I would. I know Harry is only doing this to save Draco's life - as well as Ginny does - BUT it doesn't change the fact that her husbands dick was touching someone else. Now add to the mix that she sees Draco falling for Harry and Harry for him. How the hell she is *suppose* to feel??? "Oh, it's ok. I know you love me, but go ahead and fall for someone else and I'll understand." *snorts* I think not. I've seen RL actresses that refuse to do love scenes because their husbands hate to see them with someone else - acting or not. They are stll swapping spit. (Johnny Depp felt guilty for kissing Keira in Pirates btw.)

Another reason I love this story is because of the torn emotions everyone is feeling - Especially Harry. He knows what's right, but can't help feeling *something* for Draco and it's tearing him up as much as it's tearing up Draco *and* Ginny. And Pansy...? *shakes head* What a coniving little woman she is. I feel so bad for Draco. If I was him and she did that to me.. I know I'd probably wouldn't have been able to get it up! I was surprised *he* did!

The last reason is because I love Veela fics, but sadly most of them are alike. Yours, however, is more realistic. Everyone is fighting it (which I love) and it's more complicated - like real life is. This is not a "You're my mate and we'll jump in the sack and then Harry falls in wub with me even tho I've been a dick to him." *gags*

Thank you for a truly wonderful and refreshing story. I am anxious to read the rest!
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From rafiq on May 20, 2007
This is getting really good. To many stories stories start out good and then fizzle out. Yours just keeps getting better. Poor self-centered Ginny. Draco should be very happy when he finds out that she has run home to mommy and daddy instead of supporting Harry.
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From ANON - Pete on May 20, 2007
Really very well written, a fascinating story, great plot...I really like it and hope you continue it, you are a very good writer, so much so, in reading it you flow, there are no harsh finalities (which is hard to explain) or errors which leave the readers hanging. Great Job! ;-)
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From Darkless on May 20, 2007
Wow! I'm drowning in all the angst...but it's in a good way. I love it!

What a great story, unique plot and wonderful character representation and interaction. Very clever diologue, internal and external. Very well done. I'll be waiting for more.
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From ANON - Emily on May 20, 2007
oh dear... If Draco is going to have Pansy killed Harry is deffintley going to suspect him. I diden't expect this of Pansy. I thought she would go to the papers after the divorce that was just waiting for to happen. But it seems quite stupid to try and blackmail Draco, he is a Malfoy. Has been a deatheater also. She should be surprised if he diden't try to do something back. Maybe she is expecting that? But still, having a fake-marrige like that.. how anyome could want to be married to someone who despise, and now in this case, hates you. Perhaps she dosen't want to lose her face in their circels, being left for a man nonetheless. her selfassurance must have hurt. Or maybe she loves him in her own way. Anyway, can't wait to see what will happen to her.

It wasen't that suprising Ginny leaving Harry.
She has talked about how Harry being a veela's mate is affecting her, but not Harry. It feels like she is only thinkng of herself, and not giving Harry the support he needs. As soon as things get though and is not to her liking she leaves. She is acting lika a spoiled child. Harry tries but she dosen't, she just takes and are not giving at this point. One can understand she is not happy with the situation, but she isen't even willing to work on their marrige.
And it fells like Harry has this idolised pitcure of her, and I can see him staying with her because she is a link to Ron and Hermione.

In this chapter almost everyone is in denial -land.

I love this story, it's well writen and have a great plot. And it is moving forward with each chapter. You have potratied this characters extremley well.
I am happily waiting for the next chapter of this amazing story.

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From ANON - Emily on May 20, 2007
oh dear... If Draco is going to have Pansy killed Harry is deffintley going to suspect him. I diden't expect this of Pansy. I thought she would go to the papers after the divorce that was just waiting for to happen. But it seems quite stupid to try and blackmail Draco, he is a Malfoy. Has been a deatheater also. She should be surprised if he diden't try to do something back. Maybe she is expecting that? But still, having a fake-marrige like that.. how anyome could want to be married to someone who despise, and now in this case, hates you. Perhaps she dosen't want to lose her face in their circels, being left for a man nonetheless. her selfassurance must have hurt. Or maybe she loves him in her own way. Anyway, can't wait to see what will happen to her.

It wasen't that suprising Ginny leaving Harry.
She has talked about how Harry being a veela's mate is affecting her, but not Harry. It feels like she is only thinkng of herself, and not giving Harry the support he needs. As soon as things get though and is not to her liking she leaves. She is acting lika a spoiled child. Harry tries but she dosen't, she just takes and are not giving at this point. One can understand she is not happy with the situation, but she isen't even willing to work on their marrige.
And it fells like Harry has this idolised pitcure of her, and I can see him staying with her because she is a link to Ron and Hermione.

I love this story, it's well writen and have a great plot. And it is moving forward with each chapter. You have potratied this characters extremley well.
I am happily waiting for the next chapter of this amazing story.

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From caroll on May 20, 2007
Hip Hip Hourraah!!Ginny's gone!!!The bitch!
She was too annoying anyway!Harry did not sleep around on her and it was not adultery since she did consent to Harry helping Draco!She should have known that the Malfof's charm added to veela's power were not to be tested!She only got herself to blame !Harry asked her and she did give her accord.Now she's crying to mummy and making Harry guilty and miserable.
Harry is geting annoying too, he needs a good kick in the arse or a good shrink!(don't they have that at the ministry for their agents?) for always feeling guilty about things he doesn't have control over!Yes you killed your best friends but it was that or the rest of the wizarding world perishing!Stand up for yourself Harry!And let someone else take care of you!
And I loved the fact that Harry got to discuss with Fleur who has veela experience.Hope Harry will turn more to her in th future, if only for more Harry/Roxanne cuddling time.

PS:Pansy is such a slash fan!!!I'm sure those pcs are really for her personnal collection!

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From ANON - Anon on May 20, 2007
I really like the idea of Ginny moving out. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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From ANON - Moyima on May 20, 2007
Wow. I can't wait to see how Draco reacts to that bit of news. Great chapter!
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From acr1228 on May 20, 2007
great chapter. It's amazing the way you've made Ginny such a villian in your other fic, yet she's so sympathetic in this one. ANd yet, both chracterizations can be drawn from the canon ginny!

I kind of hope that was a wake up call for Draco. He really ISN'T giving Harry anything, nor has he even thought about it.
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From ANON - Lena on May 20, 2007
*Snarl*
No! Harry is so F***ing annoying! And Pansy is even worse. I hope she suffers, and that someone gives Harry a good clobber over the head.

-Lena
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From thrnbrooke on May 19, 2007
I sooo need chapter 7! I'm wondering if it wasn't someone who fought with Harry in the war. She did say Harry would never guess. Pansy is truly evil.
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