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Reviews for A Year's Temptation

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Zoha-Lixue on February 04, 2019

    I absolutely love everything you write but this has to be one of my favorites.


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  • From Lily on March 28, 2017

    Wow - what an AMAZING story!

    I just finished and must say that it is a phenomenal work you have made. The build of the story was just right, and the way you came around explaining the changes that happened to both Harry and Draco was extraordinary well written. I'll have to se what else you have written because this was professional work in my opinion!

    Best wishes Line


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  • From ANON - on July 08, 2016

    This is one of my favorites, I've read it many times. 

    Hestia 


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  • From ANON - Hestia on January 21, 2016
    This is one of my favorites that I've read a few times. I'm wondering what you changed.
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  • From Severus1snape on May 17, 2015
    So, I REALLY did not want to read this because I don
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  • From purefaith91 on February 20, 2011
    At the beginning of the chapter, my thought was that while Harry promised Ginny that he would only ever love her, she did not make such a promise to him. Now I am afraid that she will end up with Harry's partner. The end of the chapter is just too sad and made me cry for him. Harry always makes me feel like he needs a hug anyway and this was worse. p
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  • From ANON - Blood on the Water on September 09, 2009
    I am most definitely in the Veela's corner in this, and I hope Ginny has an unfortunate accident. I love how you portray her character! It makes it so much easier to hate her!
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  • From MaskedLily on September 07, 2009
    This was fabulous =) I know I have said it before and I will say it again many more times... you have a gift with words and stories. Absolutely loved the whole thing. I had to stop readng and get some sleep, but I really didnt want to. Your story caught me and held me and I didnt want to leave the fantasy world for reality when fantasy was just so much better. Cant wait to read more stories and see what else you have in store. Congrats and much love =)
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 09, 2009
    I really liked that, though I felt sorry for the wives, you just can't keep the destined apart.
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  • From TatsuTipatico on April 01, 2008
    totally loved the story!! I discovered it by chance a couple of weeks ago and couldn't stop reading!!
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  • From Diane on March 09, 2008
    *claps* Oh that was a good one. So much angst and so delicious at the same time. I love the twists in the characters' view of their what's happening, the changes in them. It's great that you didn't turn their realationship into something perfect and dreaming. Instead you kept it real while keeping the characters true to themselves and their nature. That's so different from what everyone else likes to do with creature fics. It also makes way more sense and makes for a better story. I was a little surprised that Snape wasn't more of a problem in their lives. Also, I noticed that they never really talked about the wild magic that burned Harry or what it really was. And finally, I think it a little odd that Harry didn't have a problem returning to Number 12, but I suppose a lot of years and a lot of shit had passed since Sirius's death. *sigh* I'm actually sad to see the story end. I was having so much fun reading it. Oh well, on to the next.
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  • From TimeFlys on March 01, 2008
    May Chapter: You made me cry! Seriously you did! I felt so bad for Harry, with everyone trying to force him in different directions and he doesn
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  • From TimeFlys on February 29, 2008
    March Chapter: Loved this chapter, my favorite so far! This is the first time I
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  • From ANON - Kayo on January 31, 2008
    I'm afraid I don't have much of anything meaningful to say simply because I read everything at once (relatively) and I can't separate/remember the things I was thinking about each chapter. Overall, though, I loved it, wholly and absolutely. I didn't like Draco in the beginning solely (I think) because of his wanting to get Harry sexually aroused just cuz. I didn't like Ginny in certain parts, but I don't hate her. In fact I felt a lot of sympathy for her, and in no way did I see her as some type of villian. I'm glad you escaped character bashing in this sense. OOOH! But I wanted to KILL RIP and REND(!) Ralph. Bloody Bastard. 'Nuff said, he's not worth the extra time. Harry and Draco were skillfully developed (it wasn't senseless, oh look, we have the opportunity to have sex! Oh look, now we're madly deeply in love!) Mmm, I can understand Harry's need for a secret of his own, but I wish it wasn't that one. And go! Harry for standing up for his convictions by taking down Snape regardless. And go! Draco for understanding and letting him do it, even though he did try to talk him out of it. And go! Draco for inviting Harry out to Quidditch to see what they could be like in a friendly type situation. And, oh! Draco in his game when Harry was actually there and performing all those spectacular feats was amazing! Draco in his courting was amazing, too, and kudos to him (and you) for his Birthday present and the conversation in the Pheonix's Nest with Ginny. On that topic, when Harry went with Draco there (the first time) and said something along the line's of, "I knew [that glamour] was there for a reason," and they had decided on that option instead, for some reason I found it absurdly wonderful. Please ignore my atrocious grammer today, I'm typing with a stream of consciousness mentality. Another moment that strikes me is (was it at the end of a chapter) when Ginny left him and he's thinking about his goals and he holds up a torch/image of her in his mind (or something) as his hope/goal to aspire to. I botched that description, but if you can make it out, I loved that scene. I also was on some kind of teetering edge in the scene when Ginny leaves behind her wedding ring. I think I almost didn't want Harry to go to Draco (even though I've been rooting for them all along). Sigh. There are many other moments swirling around in my head (like oh god! the end of a chapter where Draco apparates himself, naked, and Harry, naked to Mungo's. Then the next chapter where Draco described it. I was laughing SO hard!) but I can't seem to catch them all.

    A wonderful story that clamored for my attention as soon as I started. I like your writing style, grammar, fluency, effort devoted to character development and analysis, and general pacing of plot. I think the only thing I really didn't like was when Harry went straight to Draco to prove something to Ginny, and the only character was Ralph (which is intentional, I'm sure since he became such a bastard) partly because of the line where Harry compares him to Ron. Draco /was/ selfish, especially in the beginning, but Draco is Draco and the fact that you kept it that way even while subtly developing him added to the story (and was a generally good thing). I felt awful for Harry, being torn in so many directions. Btw, you are excellent at the distrurbing with the Pyhrric Victory Hex or Curse or something like that.

    I love your work! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Mihri on November 30, 2007
    This was so sweet! I loved it, especially Draco.
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