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Reviews for Dying to Stay Alive

By : GryffindorToy
  • From stasa on May 02, 2007
    SO can
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  • From ANON - Snarky B. on May 02, 2007
    I'm not too fond of your characterization of Harry. The bad-boy wannabe / angst-y & rebellious male-teenybopper combination is a bit too OOC from Rowling's characterization of Harry. (Draco is off character too) You should consider putting an OOC warning up. It's probably because I'm old, (32 years) but every time I see that characterization of Harry I have to roll my eyes. (I don't mean that as a slight to your story.)

    Other than that, you seem to have a good story started. I didn't see any obvious errors, and your dialogue is good.

    I've never heard of the music you mentioned. (I have no idea what you kids listen to these days) What type of music is it? Rap? Country? Rock? Grunge rock? Heavy metal? Punk? Whatever it is goths or emo's listen to? You may want to menton that in your story, so those of us less informed of 'popular culture' can get a better feel for the story.

    Keep writing,

    S.B.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 02, 2007
    Tooo funny! Need chapter 4! Dean is soo understanding!
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  • From ANON - Lady Lynn on May 01, 2007
    Yup, the conviences of fanfiction are indeed great. I liked this chapter a lot... ha ha Draco is so obviously jealous. And didn't he just have a ocnversation with Harry earlier where they pretty much agreed that Dean and Seamus were together??? Ah, the silly person. (though I'm not at all discounting the jealousy). Can't wait for that meeteing, though if you wanted to put it off for more flirting that would be fun as well.
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  • From Vibora on May 01, 2007
    hehe i love a jealous!draco! update soon please! i cant wait to see what happens on saturday and i hope draco doesn't read harry's journal out of spite because of seamus
    awesome fic!
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  • From ANON - koneko on May 01, 2007
    rarr you should update SOON.
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  • From Foxy on May 01, 2007
    I really like this story. Please keep writing.
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  • From stasa on May 01, 2007
    I really like the story. It has a good start and a truly promising plot.
    Can
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 01, 2007
    Glad to see there is not Seamus/Harry. I've always imagined him with Blaise or Dean. Can't wait for chapter 3!
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  • From shevien on May 01, 2007
    OOOO, quite intriged.
    "Bill Weasley, Oliver Wood, Blaise Zabini, Fred and George, and- particularly- the very blonde Slytherin that had him questioning his own sexual orientation."-Harry has *excellent* taste^_^
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