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By : ccino49
  • From Madietta on June 09, 2007
    I don't see why you would wish to rewrite your story, just because a couple of people were freaked out? This is an adult site for adult people, you are free to write whatever you want. There are far worse stories here than this one, both in quality and content. As I wrote in my previous review, obviously the topic of abuse is an issue you feel you need to exploit, since the heroines of both your stories get afflicted by it quite a bit. But, if you feel like you need to bow down to popular opinion, go ahead ;-)
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  • From willowgirl on June 09, 2007
    Oh no, please don't rewrite them! Yes it's true that Severus has been very hard on Lou. Severus has to be, they are going up against the Dark Lord. I do wonder why Lou is fighting so much on obeying him? Did she not understand why it has to be this way? All she has to do is obey his orders for seven days and he won't spank her anymore or at least as much. I know Severus keeps trying to get her to realize what she has to do to avoid punishment by having her read and reread the book. Why can't he just explain the bonding to her again? Is it because once the bonding has started he can't talk to her about it again and explain the plan to defeet the Dark Lord? Yes I know I've asked a lot of question. Please don't rewrite your story it's good just how it is.Thanks
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  • From Emmylovedraco on June 09, 2007
    No Hey! I like the chappys you wrote don't rewrite them. I love this story the way it is ccino!
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  • From Katha on June 09, 2007
    I must say I am a little dissappointed that you want to rewrite the last chapters! You picked the topic of abuse and that is never pretty! It is upsetting and I think you wrote it well. I liked the story anyways!
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  • From impiriusvirgo on June 08, 2007
    Omg... this is getting so despressing! Like, I am close to tears when I read it and I usually like stories like this. Arg!
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  • From misslala on June 08, 2007
    whew! this is getting crzy!
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  • From KCGreen on June 08, 2007
    I'm not sure how much more of this I can take! Poor Lou, please Master, there must be another way!
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  • From Miepje on June 08, 2007
    I loved reading the naughty lemons, but the rest just made feel bad for Lou. I mean; I love Snape, but I hate what he does to her, even if it is for the right cause. She's scared enough to flinch, cower and run away (as I think I would too) and doesn't that weaken the binding instead of making it stronger? I kinda hope she can escape ^^
    And I'm curious; how did Ron know she wasn't a virgin if she had her hymen again?

    My gods, this story has me hooked even if some parts of it squick me. I can't wait to see what happens next. ~Miepje
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  • From risatine on June 08, 2007
    poor lou, now i really feel bad for her. hope she gets away! update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
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  • From KCGreen on June 08, 2007
    still really enjoying this fic!
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  • From impiriusvirgo on June 08, 2007
    Oh god!

    These chapters were so sad... I like my Snape mean... but he is so... I don't know. So nice one minute- and the next insane and curel. I wouldn't be able to deal with it either. Crazy.

    Can't WAIT for more!
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  • From Happyappy on June 08, 2007
    Binding really sucks! Poor Lou. I don't blame her for trying to run away. Now what is he going to do to her? Couldn't he just give her some kind of potion or put her under the imperious so that she could be subservient and always obey for the 7 days? That behaviour only has to go on for the 7 days, right? Not forever? If it were me, and it was forever, I think I would be looking for a bridge to throw myself off of. Maybe they better think of putting that other cuff back on her.
    Sansa
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  • From willowgirl on June 07, 2007
    I love how you post more than one chapter at a time. I'm really into your story and hope Severus can pull this whole thing off. Poor Lou, she really is going through it. Lou is in big trouble now. I thought Lou would of relized that running off would cause the dark lord to kill Severus.
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  • From Madietta on June 07, 2007
    Having read both stories you posted here makes me wonder about possible issues you may have. The practically neverending streak of abuse and violence hurled at your heroines, preferably from their loved ones, would probably make them end up in mental institutions in real life, yet they remain nice, cheerful and grateful at all times. Interesting.
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  • From misslala on June 07, 2007
    Poor Lou and poor Severus!!!! That sucks that he is having to be such a bastard, but it is needed to placate the madman I guess. :/ That sucks but I look forward to more!!! :)
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