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By : ccino49
  • From misslala on June 14, 2007
    hahahaha It must be fun writing a 15 year old character! LOL God I remember when "dick and fart jokes" were funny, lol Sometimes they still are, but depends on the situation and who says it and I'm 24! LOL They are both in for a rude awakening, lol I can't believe that they have it so hard, but I am sure nothing less comes from volide! What a piss poor idea indeed.

    i look forward to seeing what happens once they get passed all the initial stuff and she is doing better about not disobeying or actually has the hang of it. Poor girl. Why does Severus all end up with willful women?
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  • From ccino49 on June 14, 2007
    Thyrsday 14th June.
    Hi. Thank you for all your wonderful reviews. I just feel compelled to say that those who were not happy with some of the chapters did not ask me to remove or alter them in any way. They only said it was not for them and would not read further. It was my own decision to put in revised chapters for them, (not that they were very well revised, I'm not very good at that kind of thing. lol) No one actual critisised me outright for what I wrote and I will continue to write in my own way. I welcome all reviews and opinions from readers, regardless of what they say, it's just that the best ones are....well....better. I admit I don't always think to put warnings at the beginings of me chapters, then again, if you bought a book from a shop you would not find warnings on those chapters and that is I suppose the premise on which I write. Can't help itt, It's how I am. Please all keep reading and reviewing. I will try to put up a few chapters tonight because I will be out of the loop for a few days because of personal things. Will resume as soon as possible.
    ccino.
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  • From lizziek on June 14, 2007
    This is a great story. It's well-written and compelling. However, I'm uncomfortable with the censorship that took place. Putting a writer in the position where they feel compelled to self-censor really isn't much of an improvement on forced censorship.

    This is the ADULTfanfiction.net, right? This is where there are thousands of other stories to read if one is displeased with the story one is reading. I cannot understand the snarking you got - it certainly wasn't literary criticism. I did find it interesting that those who have a huge issue with imaginary B&D, apparently have none with equally imaginary paedophelia.

    Anyway, nevermind. If you feel you must continue posting two versions of every chapter, I suppose it's up to you. I think it's uncalled for and most unfortunate. I will, however, continue to be an avid reader of this story and of any other other story you'd care to post.

    I'm very disappointed in some of the readers here at AFF.


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  • From KCGreen on June 14, 2007
    I sincerly hope you have not given up on telling Lou's story. You are a wonderful writer.
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  • From CharlotteBlack on June 11, 2007
    Just so you know - i like your story just the way it was. please update soon!
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  • From MoniqueB on June 10, 2007
    I think the story is lost a bit. It would be better to see when Lou fight back, without being beaten. It would better if she go to the muggle world, be happy and let Severus and Dumbledore fight there own battle. ANd let her enjoy her money and develope her skills.
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  • From impiriusvirgo on June 10, 2007
    Yay! Now everyone is happy!
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  • From Happyappy on June 10, 2007
    Life is really sucking for Lou right now. I surely wouldn't want to be her. Hopefully this time will go fast for her, and she can get it right, and not have to be punished all of the time. I surely hope that this all will not make her really hate Severus, and have long term effects on her feelings for him.
    Sansa
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  • From KCGreen on June 10, 2007
    I wont say I "enjoyed" the original versions better but, well, they were a lot more powerful. You have a great talent for evoking strong emotions. I have to say the toned down versions do not pack the same punch. It is really a great read. I am hooked!
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  • From missbliss on June 09, 2007
    I did think the original chapters were pretty brutal but that's not what I would have thought anyone would have a problem with. Rather the whole seven days prior and after thing. That seems a bit much, overkill. For the binding, I mean. But I love the way you write so either versions of the new chapters work fine for me. I was all excited when I saw there was 61 chapters, I figured they were new ones. But I understand revising. It's nice of you to do that for concerned readers.
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  • From risatine on June 09, 2007
    I don't have to revise anything, you're the author after all and if people don't like ur plot summary that could piss off lol, but no really your story is pretty dark and angsty but I still think it's really good! and i'm looking forward to reading what comes up next!!!
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  • From misslala on June 09, 2007
    I don't think you should have revised. :/ I mean, yes it was extrmeme but this is your story, although I can see why you would at risk of losing loyal readers. :/ I didn't like what Severus did, but I understand that is part of the way the story has to go for it to make sense to you and the way you wrote it :) I support your decision, although I do hope that you will maybe keep doing it this way? Adding the regular and revised edition for those who might not like the squick value? I mean it isn't arousing or anything, but it is part of the tale, therefore I accept reading it :) Please take this is support for the way you are going and not anything else.

    I look forward to reading more!
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  • From Alabaster on June 09, 2007
    hold up I wanted to read the originals can you send them to me? at alabastershadow (at) gmail.com :D
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  • From impiriusvirgo on June 09, 2007
    P.S.S. It wasn't distressing to me at least. (I read my last comment and think it might have something to do with you taking the chapters down- if not... I am vain I suppose). It was good... I suppose my comment sounded like I was upset by it when really- I was upset for Lou. When I am reading a good story or watching a movie- I get the emotions that the main characters is feeling (and sometimes the facal exspressions) and thats because I am a theature girl. But yeah, if this had anything to do with my comment- know that after I read it and made my comment, I got up and went and talked to my mom about my graduation- no emotional scars. Just the comments after reading a GOOD (perfect the way it is) story.


    I'm done now...
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  • From impiriusvirgo on June 09, 2007
    I agree with everyone above me.
    Your story is perfect the way it is.
    People come to this site because they don't want watered down stories. This story has abuse, beatings, and hard themes... but thats what make the charactors go on such a journey. The story wouldn't make since without it.
    Please don't change it, it's amazing the way it is. And don't water down the rest of it- it wouldn't be the same without the wonderful detail you put into it!
    -Elle
    P.S. When I said I was close to tears... thats a good thing because I am emotionally involved. Most stories arn't like that. It was a goooood thing, not a bad one.
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