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Reviews for Core Pursuit

By : GryffindorToy
  • From ANON - chineseartist on April 03, 2008
    oh, that was great. i loved it. was wondering though, if you'd work on "Broken Glass" again, 'cause i really liked where that story was going. just a suggestion. can't wait to see your next chapter of this fic. good luck.
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  • From Silkylove on March 22, 2008
    fuck that was intense. lol. Loving the stroy. Can't wait to see what is instore for the next chapters. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on March 05, 2008
    OH WOW that was amazingly hot. I liked the contrast you made when they made love and when they fucked. Their love making was sweet and sensualy while thier fucking was fast and hard. A truly wonderful update
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  • From blesseddarkness on March 01, 2008
    More Please... Its getting very good
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  • From ANON - Layla on February 15, 2008
    i am enjoying the story. i find it interesting how everyone is thinking the worst of Harry. i have a funny feeling that there is nothing to do about Draco's interest when it comes to the feeding. I think Harry should tell Severus about his dream for it will have a major impact on their relationship, especially with Harry's insecurities. Please continue for I am hooked on this story and wish to find out what is happening.
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  • From ANON - Allaye Riddle on February 12, 2008
    I think it would be cool to mix the two together. but thats just me ^.^. Also I heart this story so much. Draco is a little bit crazy in this, but I love how Sev is acting and everything. So much cuteness!
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  • From ANON - landra on February 09, 2008
    I love your story and am frustrated every time I have to wait for the next chapter!!!
    My vote is against including the Deathly Hallows in the story because I think they don't fit with your story so far(as I don't know where you're heading with this ff).
    But either way you decide in the end I will remain a devoted reader and fan of your work.
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  • From ANON - jackie on February 07, 2008
    I really like this story but you need more snape in it. If you can get him back in hogwarts I think this story will be just as popular as part one. The fun is seeing Harry and Snape together and what happens. I would love to see Snape in class trying to hide his affection for Harry. I think that would be greatness. These are your plot bunnies but I am enjoying the story so far.



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  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2008
    no DH
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  • From ANON - usmcgal on February 03, 2008
    i absolutley love your fics, i cant get enough. it completes my day -hugs you-
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  • From ANON - Dark Disaster on February 01, 2008
    I loooooove this story! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on February 01, 2008
    Oh wow those two updates was just nice. It always amuses me when the Prophet publishes stories that are so far from the truth and I love how sweet Severus is to Harry. Ooooooooh the Snarry smex is up next, I am looking forward to it

    Update again soon
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  • From ANON - jesssica morrow on January 27, 2008
    more!!!!!!!!!!
    i want more!!!!!!!!
    please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From AshiTenshi on January 26, 2008
    Like it
    *feeds plotbunnies*
    go make me some more xD
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  • From KillingProphet on January 25, 2008
    I have noticed that throughout each chapter you manage to get stronger and stronger with your writing. The only one thing that bothered me is Sev just doesn't seem to be himself I guess I like him more on the strict side. Call me ol' fashion but I love my Alan tall dark inhumanly hawt and dominating as all get out. Oh and Harry is a little to ... Fluffy? lol. I love the new Draco and I love all the other characters although Ron seems a lil more grown up but it is going smoothly. You have a reader with me! Good luck and update soon.
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