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Reviews for Core Pursuit

By : GryffindorToy
  • From FairyBean on December 31, 2012
    I am guessing that you dont write here anymore? No worries, just wanted to say thanks for this little story and a half, liked the second part more than the fist but both are awesome. Love your Snarry. :)
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  • From ANON - yanzebilo on March 17, 2011
    Great more pls
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  • From julieqt2 on October 04, 2009
    This is an incredible storyline which i'm enjoying immensely. Looking forward to more. Thankyou
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  • From someonenotme on August 25, 2009
    I LOVE this!!! Much fun!! Keep it coming!!
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  • From ANON - BVB on July 29, 2009
    Firstly, Wow at chapter seven. It's nice to know you did your homework instead of just writing down your own boring experiences like *some* authors. As for chaper 6, I dont think I've ever read a sex scene that hot before, so well done on that. Really.
    Please, PLEASE update this. I loved the first story, and I know this will be just as good.
    Keep going. :D
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  • From ANON - LoBaR624 on July 13, 2009
    WOW! It is great. I got to the 7th chapter and went to clip the "next chapter" button, and there wasn't one. I was mildly perturbed (more like mad and irritated). Please continue.
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  • From Dracoroxmaisox on March 01, 2009
    this sequel is sooo cute and amazing.
    i'm so happy i started reading this...for some reason, i didn't immediately start reading the sequel, but i'm glad i did
    I love Draco Harry & Sev so much!!
    they're soo cute as a little family unit thing
    and Draco is SOOOO bi!!!!!
    he can't deny it
    Love the first 7 chaps can't wait for more!!
    -Kyle
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  • From shidaenogard on February 09, 2009
    Ok I have to admit snarry fics are my new fav and this one has me wanting more and more. Pretty please write more of this story.
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  • From rfernandez on January 29, 2009
    That was a good chapter! I really can see Draco dragging Harry along to every freaking expensive clothing store. He is such a rich pretty boy. It's funny that he got Harry to try on some leather pants, not that Harry wouldn't look good in them. Those two morons are luck that Harry didn't end up killing them, they really messed with the wrong person. Everything does always seem to happen to Harry though. I look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Hello on January 27, 2009
    Ahh. It was getting so goooooood. Love it so far. Please update soon. :D
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  • From rfernandez on January 27, 2009
    That was amazing! I have to say that I love Harry/Severus most of all. I am really enjoying this and I am looking forward to reading more. I kinda of like Draco/Ginny, since I think she is one of the only girls that can bully him into what she wants him to do. I really hope that you update this soon!
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  • From Darkless on November 09, 2008
    Hey there! I finally found this, glad I did. I enjoyed the first story and was unaware this was up.

    I'm enjoying this one so far, just keep up the good work.

    On whether or not you should include 'the Deathly Hallows' to your story; I think not. While adding the Horcruxes helps with the overall difficulty of offing old snake-faced Moldyshorts, try to keep your plotline original to your work. That way it stays your story and not just a creative retelling of Rowlings' story. Just my opinion, of course, but it would keep your task of telling your tale easier. If you want to add something, make something up...be as original as you can. Makes a story more memorable, and more yours in spite of it being 'fanfiction'.

    Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From foxeechik on October 23, 2008
    i like it! if poss, can u e-mail me wen u update again? my e-mail address is kissagram_22@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Angel of Immortality on August 01, 2008
    Please finish the story soon! It's too good not to be finished!!!!!
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  • From Poisonedlips on June 17, 2008
    I DEMAND more! *sweet innocent look* or there will be dire consequences.
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