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Reviews for Bent

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  • From barbarade on June 05, 2007
    Wow. Poor Severus now he is feeling the guilt and Hermione is in no condition to help yet. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 18, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From ANON - sinbad on May 14, 2007
    I like the story much better without the song. Not only does it flow better, but the song was taking up the story. I think a line or two from a song in a song fic is Ok, but too much will take over the story.
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  • From ANON - better on May 07, 2007
    much better flow this way. nothing against having the song lyrics included, maybe a directly applicable portion at the start or end to highlight the angst.
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  • From ShilohDarke on May 07, 2007
    This is a very interesting plot idea, and I can see that it has the potential to be a really BIG emotional story. (I like a little angst here and there) But I do have one request... If I continue to read it, I'm gonna need a happy ending. Well written, and only a few errors that I noticed, so all in all, I'd give you a 4 for presentation. Good job!

    Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

    Shiloh Darke
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