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Reviews for Empty souls

By : elenapotter
  • From ANON - Lisa on October 21, 2007
    interesting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2007
    ?
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  • From HHr4ever on September 15, 2007
    The admins should have a better way to weed out the children on this site. I can't believe the immaturity!!

    Don't listen the reviews you've been getting. If someone doesn't like your story, then they don't have to read it, right? You're doing a fine job. Keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Ron is gay on September 15, 2007
    Hermione is having Ron's baby? She should abort the pregnancy with this monster. Let Harry puncture her abdomen with a filthy needle. That should get rid of the little bugger. That Ron got Hermione's virginity is making me sick too. What a piece of shit.
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  • From Muggleman on August 31, 2007
    wow those last chapters made me so sad I got a little watery I admit
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  • From ANON - Kimberly1983 on August 30, 2007
    awww..you had me crying! what a sad chapter...but apparantly a good one if it gets people crying, right? ;) can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From Muggleman on August 19, 2007
    I like this story alot so far I hope they find a cure though
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  • From ANON - mike on August 13, 2007
    well you paired ron and hermione together so i don't think you have any right to say anything about that fact that she put them together. This story is good except on the part of harry, he seems to weak willed and cowardly. Seriously every story i read now is hermione is gone and harry wants to find her or do something but instead just sits back and does nothing until someone else tells him to. Yeah Harry having no sense of direction or independance is a bit repetitve at this point. Plus i have a feeling that this is going to be so forced with more unnecessary angst and drama it's going to kill the story. So in conclusion i honestly say i don't like this story, i relly tried to but i can't like it it just isn't good the way you forced situations and made hermione so weak and harry so dependant on anyone.
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  • From Sinkingboat on July 07, 2007
    its rons baby! ewe! i thought it was harrys
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  • From acky on July 02, 2007
    its definately an interesting storyline, but you really really need to work on the grammar and such
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  • From SnapesSweetheart on June 04, 2007
    Hi! I tried to email you but it sent it back saying that you didn't have an email account under that name. Let me know if you have another one.
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  • From SnapesSweetheart on May 29, 2007
    I like your fic but it would be better if you had a beta. Changing some of the grammar and spelling would make it easier to read. I like the plot though. Let me know if you are interested in a beta.
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  • From ANON - jhaymar on May 09, 2007
    The story is OK but damn your spelling and grammar are terrible. A simple spellchecker would make your stories so much easier to read...
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  • From angelnomiko on May 08, 2007
    wow that was sad .. but how did that happen and how will they act when mione comes back .. please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

    angel
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  • From angelnomiko on May 03, 2007
    wow that was great ...will they find her and will she tell them why she left.. please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

    angel
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