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Reviews for Cold Feet

By : Lola2885
  • From pinkbutterflies on May 08, 2007
    I have to agree with Lunicorn
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  • From Sinkingboat on May 07, 2007
    It's tragic... I'm not kidding I feel those damn needles! I don't think I'll ever get Harry's gay fraternity, but I have suffered the fate of shaved eyebrows and surprisingly some people like the look better... Plus can't he grow his hair back? Oh well... Hermione's killin' me here, but jeep up the good work.
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  • From Shananigans on May 06, 2007
    wow wow wow. this is great. Hermione is in a little bit of trouble, i wonder who she will turn out to be with in the end?!?!?!? This is great, her conflicting emotions are portrayed very well. Keep up the good work and update.

    Shannon xoxox

    P.S-Who's Jack?????
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  • From Rosamund on May 06, 2007
    I'm not sure what happened, but I felt some deja vu within the new chapters posted for today. regardless, still enjoying! Please continue...but I can't help but wonder if you truly meant to have this harry/hermione...something's not right there. who was harry on the phone with? what happened to ron flirting with other women? what really happened between draco and hermione?
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  • From Rosamund on May 05, 2007
    this is getting better and better!
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  • From Lunicorn on May 05, 2007
    Okay, I have to admit it - I enjoyed the heck out of this but I was being a lazy arse because it's Saturday morning and I have a billion things to do and my coffee was finished and I lacked excuses not to just get on with the day... and then I read your other reviews, and I simply HAD to. Fear not - this is BRILLIANT. Sharply writen, subtle, funny as hell, and oh so very addicting. I realized there were three chapters right off, and I wanted to cry that there wasn't a fourth by the time I was done. No insult intended at all to anyone reading or revieiwing, but this is so far above the standard of 98% of the writing here that it's going to go over a lot of heads. Be strong, keep writing and know you are putting together a fantastic story here. I hope (and suspect) you are posting elsewhere where this will get the appreciation it so rightly deserves. Either way, I'm with you til the last word you type. Awesome. And thanks for posting it for the rest of us to read.
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  • From Shananigans on May 04, 2007
    Okay okay, i'm an idiot (well half, i still dont know who Jack or the other Harry guy are) But i didnt realize that there was 3 chapters before i practically attacked you, I'm sorry about that:P
    I do like this story, and I will continue reading it. Keep it up.
    Shannon xoxox
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  • From Shananigans on May 04, 2007
    Okay, I do like this story so far but i have a few questions.
    First: Who the hell is Jack?!?! And Harry Peterson?
    I honestly dont understand what that is all about? Am I missing something? Did you make a mistake? Please elaborate.
    Second: Hermione isn't going to marry Harry just because his friends are idiots?
    Doesn't that seem a little bit immature? If she loves him then she should accept his friends to. It's not his fault he passed out and got treacle and eagle feathers stuck to him. I think thats a sily reason, but maybe I'm missing something??? Can you let me know please.
    Shannon xoxox
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