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From TheSlytherinPhoenix on April 28, 2020
This is now my favorite Potterverse story. I giggled so much I had tears when Lucius was put in his place by his future missus. I read this whole story in an evening. I Iven had on Harry Potter.. and zoned out to this. Brava! Very satisfied with this one. A

I will NEVER unsee Dracl in a nappie ane Harry as sexy maid. Good gods. It is beautiful.

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From Annecia89 on October 04, 2015
I adored this story! I loved that Harry and Draco became friends... but I do wish we could have known what happened with that threesome!
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From ANON - SL on February 15, 2013
I found the story charming and witty (beyond the Wealey twins) and kept laughing. Plotwise I also enjoy the curveballs thrown: Molly women, Felicia, Lucius. Luna is quite out-of-character but I like her in its own way too.

The story is definitely put in the wrong category. I suspect if it's put in an more appropriate category it will get more readership.
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From purefaith91 on April 27, 2012
Excellent!!! Boy, those Weasleys did their bit for the population restoration. Love stories when Lucius becomes reformed as it is such a waste with him as a scaredy cat deatheater. He just did not have the heart for it. I especially liked that you got Draco and Harry together as friends. They really did have so much to offer each other in the way of friendship. This story was a great read. Thanks for sharing. p
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From purefaith91 on April 27, 2012
You said no more grief and I have cried more in this chapter than any of the others. I am only teasing. It would have been strange if everyone just returned to normal, especially Arthur. Go Fred...he is the one that has reached out. I am surprised that it was not Hermione (she should have taken care of Harry, especially since he did not want to stay at his home). She also did not contact her parents, which seemed strange. She needs to take care of George, but they do not need to exclude Harry...isn't that what silencing spells are for? Oh well, to each in their own time. Each review comes closer to this site cutting me off until tomorrow. I guess we were not meant to read stories several chapters at a time. Knowing this, let me say up front that you have written NO disappointing chapters/stories so I am sure that they will be great even if I cannot tell you. I will continue to hit the rating at the bottom. p
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From purefaith91 on April 27, 2012
They should not have all left Arthur on his own. Of course he wanted to just pull into himself and not deal with others, but I am convinced (after experiencing it way too many times) that friends and neighbors bring food and stay for support because no matter how bad you are feeling, you are still in a daze and don't think about basic necessities for yourself. Also, if they don't give him something to be there for, by involving him in their lives, he is likely to curl up and quit. It is hard for young, and way too many older, people who have not been there to know what is needed as they try to deal with their own feelings, but Arthur seems forgotten. I'm sure he told them not to worry about it, but he is the dad and probably feels like that is what he is supposed to do, plus he may not know what he needs himself. So sad. On a brigter note, I want a George please!!! p
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From purefaith91 on April 27, 2012
Let's see, if we can get rid of Ginny, Harry can marry Luna and I am sure that they would live happily ever after. If Luna marries Ron, that would be sad because she deserves better. Love that her father stood up to Ron's snotty, immature ways. Also, something is not quite right with Ginny? If there is a baby, is it even Harry's? Or does she have some dreaded disease? If she even knows, I am surprised her mother lets her get away with sleeping all day. If she doesn't, why hasn't Harry said anything? Maybe he likes it better when she is asleep? Can't wait to see where you go with this. p
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From purefaith91 on April 27, 2012
Just wondering...is Hermione out of her tree? If I had been caught, I would have either arranged somewhere else to stay until the marriage (taking GW with me) or kept to myself as asked. It was crappy of Molly to tell MM what sh se had seen, but they are well over age. That said, it was really disrespectful for them to do that in the Weasley house when they knew how Molly felt about it. I really kind of hate the way the girls are all jumping the guys and seeming like hosers while the men just react as all men would, but it is your story (which is really good, by the way) so I will just figure that you have method to your madness. p
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From Bajagirl on August 14, 2011
What a fabulous story, I really enjoyed it!
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From ANON - Cari on August 04, 2008
I really love this story. I actually just got done reading it for the second time. My only problem with it is the parts where the fathers are making marriage contracts with the future husbands. It makes it seem like the girls are nothing but property. That aside, this is a wonderful story of love and humor. Great job!
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From MythDouglas on July 15, 2008

I am so glad to see a story with an abundance of humor. Draco Malfoy in baby garb saying momma to his wife was hilarious. It came as a bit of a disappointment when Ginny and Molly died. I understand why you did it, because other wise your story would have ended or gone dry. Both of them was to much though, especially for Harry. He has always wanted a family he is about ready to have one and then instantly losing the one he is gaining as well as the only one he has known. You said it yourself when you said Molly was the glue of the family, she was everyones mother. No one ever took her place and Ginny would have done that beautifully and without a mother for the Weasley clan at the end you feel like the big Weasley family doesn't exist anymore. I love the way Draco and Harry become friends and their respective positions at hogwarts it is extremely fitting. I am disappointed by Hermione's placement at the end of the story. She is an extremely brilliant witch and you make a point of saying this about her but she helps her husbands business, which is really depressing. You expect her to do something great and not be the one to end up pregnant so early on. (She is my favorite character, which is probably why I am being so harsh). I applaud you for your use of Parkinson. Not only were you bold enough to use her and use her as a good person, you did it most intelligently. I love the fact that Molly was the prankster and again the the humor in your story was so refreshing it was nice to not have such a dark, which is usually so prevelent in Harry Potter fanfiction.

Thank You writing this and for reading my long review. I wouldn't write such a long review if I didn't love it.

-Myth

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From Phoenix2000 on July 06, 2008
I think Id like a small sequel. It doesn't have to be alot of chapters just a few. I really enjoyed this story and don't want it to end just yet. I think that Ron deserves to have at least one son and maybe include some of the 'friendly' compatioion going on between Harry and Draco. Also some more of Fred and Pansy's kinky sex life. I think Fred and Pansy and Hermine and George are my favorite couples.
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From ANON - Samantha on April 25, 2008
omg!!! u have to do a sequel, wow. i love fanfiction, like absolutley totally love it, i kno its stupid an probly pathetic, but i cant help it, an ive only found two other stories since i started reading that i love as much as this story, when molly an ginny died, i will admit i almost cried, how u write is amazing, u have to do a sequel, pllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaseee do a sequel, an if u do, lemme no by email, i will so read that, ur amazing with ur stories, i love this one expescially, amazing an not that over the top. thanx for writing this. an thanx if u write the sequel. please email me if u do. draco_luvr1018@yahoo.com. sincerely, Samantha.
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From ANON - erin on April 10, 2008
well your story walked me through my dinner and an entire bag of goldfish snacks... which is to say that im a pig, but despite this i was not distracted from your story which is to say if your writing had be inferior i would not have been able to read it while distracted. I'm really not a fat chick i just ate one meal today ( at 10pm... yikes thats so unhealthy) anyways back to the story I like that fred orders Parkinson around but with the wedding stuff he was too commanding it was almost abusive which is a bit out of character. That relationship needs more playfulness. Hermonie and George are a great couple though.
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From ANON - tiffany on March 24, 2008
just for the record..his name is GRAWP ..not GWARP
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