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Reviews for The Labyrinth

By : graballz

From Danine on May 15, 2007
Ah alright, the link to youtube helped greatly! How very interesting! Poor draco trapped with Voldemort, having to wait and hope someone who is not his friend comes to rescue him, if he manages to actually get there! Ahh! Cannot wait for more!
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From thrnbrooke on May 14, 2007
Tooo perfect! I soooo need chapter 6! Such wonderful memories!
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From YamiBakura on May 14, 2007
Chapter 5

AHHHAHAHA!! I loved the Marauders!! LOVED!! And the helping hands... :3 I could see them in my mind, too. I think I'm going to have to actually watch this along side the story. It was SOOO Funny imagining Voldemort dancing around with Draco, though XD You totally should have written that out. XDD

Oh, me and one of my friends got bored in our high school chorus class once, and rewrote the beginning to the magic dance magic song. "You remind me of the pants." "What pants?" "The pants with the power." "What power?" "The power of fubu." "Who do?" "You do." "Do what?" "Remind me of the pants!"

XDD There was one other thing that I wanted to say.... Harry's now in the oubliette, right? OH YEAH. ^__^;; When Harry's talking to the marauder/door things, I heard Sara's voice in my head, while imagining it actually being Harry and the Marauders doing the talking XDDLMAO

Update again!!
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From YamiBakura on May 14, 2007
Chapter four

Ahahaha! You made a great huge reply to my reviews *is happy* AND I'm SOOO glad I made you laugh! You ALWAYS make me laugh with your reviews, and I look forward to getting them! I was actually happy this morning to get reviews on Magia Scura from you! ^___^

And you're welcome about the reviews, btw. They were fun to leave! I'm not as insane today, but I can leave a big review anyway. There just might not be as much HUGE FONT LIKE THIS IN IT!!! XD

Except for that of course. LMAO~~ Hagrid the WORM. I had no idea.. .I was TOTALLY expecting it to just be the same worm from the movie, and then it was like, "Hagrid," and I was like OMG! LMAO! *dies*

And I LOOOOOOVE that movie SOOOOO Much. I've seen it about three thousand times, of COURSE I can hear the words as they're being said. It's all in Sara's voice, of course, but Hermione's lines were in Hoggles... XDDD I CAAAN"T WAAAIT to see how her character plays out in later scenes.

Also, you're not the only one combining them in everything. I don't know if you've ever heard of Weiss Kreuz, or if you even watch anime at all, but it's a somewhat obscure, either you hate it or you love it - there is no in betweens - show that ran a few years ago in japan, and is popular in the underground anime communities (AKA, not on american tv) And I can make a story out of ANYTHING and weiss. Seriously. ANYTHING used to spark off ideas about it. I could also apply that to HP/DM. Okies, I've got a big, starbucks mocha frappaccino coffee drink in front of me, and I bet anything I could sit down and write a fanfic in which Harry works as a barista in a starbucks, and Draco comes in for some coffee.... :3

Anything is crossable. I actually started writing a crossover between HP and Weiss Kreuz. I've wanted to write one for AGES, so if you ever read anything by me with a telekinetic, and a blonde haired, blue eyed japanese assassin... that's been crossed with Weiss. X3

Okies, you've written more, and I have more to reply to. enough rambling. (this is going to be the longest review I've ever left, and it's mostly just me rambling)

LMAO needing Tom and Dan to randomly remake the movie XDD I'd so watch it over... and over...and over...and over......

Okay, I think I covered everything I wanted to say with this chatper XDDD Hurray for huge reviews!

Thank you again sooo much for reviewing my fanfics! It makes me squee, reading what you think. Keep updating! I must have more!
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From Danine on May 14, 2007
Unfortunately, I've never seen this film, so I'm totally lost, but it's interesting!
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From sunset20 on May 14, 2007
*sighs in relief* Good, I'm happy there will be some Draco in it, 'cause let me tell you, I miss him already... :D See, I know you well enough to guess the ending *giggles*, and well, there obviously has to be some major angst in the story first - a story without angst is no story for me (yeah, why doesn't this surprise you :D). But to be honest, right now I think I suffer from an overdose of angst - ME!!! Can you believe that?! - I blame the fantastic story Memoirs of a Serpent's Son (WOW) and the writers of a series I've been watching (I still can't get over the way they finished it - BASTARDS - I might have to make it into a story *shrugs*). Weird 'Mione was sweet! haha Can't wait to read more! :D
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From YamiBakura on May 14, 2007
Chapter 3

AHHHH!!! Hermione is Hoggle?! LMAO!!!! And she's freeing houseelves!! XDDDD

Also, I loved that she popped out of a washing machine XD

AWww... way too short. UPDATE AGAIN ^___^

I love this. LOVE THIS SO MUCH. *sits back to refresh AFF spastically until another chapter appears*
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From YamiBakura on May 14, 2007
Chapter 2

LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE.

I have much love for you right now. :3 Much, much love. For this fic, as well. As I'm reading it, I can hear the voices in my head from the movie. It's weird to think that that was nearly twenty odd years ago, because i just watched Dark Water today, and that has her in it, and she looks EXACTLY the same, but she sounds more mature. Also random, I started muttering things like, "Beware... Beware! Soon... it will be to late." etc and all that, and then I find this.

Nothing really stood out to me, except the dialogue, which amused me greatly. XDD Gonna keep reading now. ♥
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From YamiBakura on May 14, 2007
Have read the first chapter. I STILL LOVE YOU. :3

And you're not the only one that the song 'chilly down' annoys. I HATE that song, PASSIONATELY. But, the glass-ball-gown scene is one of my favourites EVER, with the poisoned peach...and now you're going to do that to Harry (Yes, Harry, right?) And I lOOOOOVED the nympho narcissa XDDD Poor Draco!!

I love everything about this so far, and we demand that you update it all as fast as you possibly can!
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From YamiBakura on May 13, 2007
I haven't read this yet, just the an at the top. But, I had to tell you.

OMG I LOVE YOU!!! Labyrinth?! AND HARRY POTTER?! And it's written by YOU !!! *spazzes*

This is gonna be good. I'M SO GLAD YOU WROTE THIS ^_______^

Now it's my turn to give you some screaming reviews XDD I just dosed myself with ovaltine though, and then won something on ebay, then came here to find THIS, and it was like, COMBINATION ATTACK! *WACHA* (
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From thrnbrooke on May 13, 2007
I don't want Jareth dead so guess it's better this way! Sooo can't wait for chapter 3!
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From sunset20 on May 13, 2007
chapter2 - wow, that sounds soooo interesting! What happened to my poor Draco???!!! He'll be fine, right? Harry will find him and they will live happily ever after (sorry that sounded sooooooooo bad - but it's well after midnight and I should be sleeping because I write a test tomorrow... today... whatever). But Harry WILL find him (if not, he'll have to face my wrath)... and I count on your need for happy endings... :D But I hope there will be some Draco-stuff too, not only about Harry doing God knows what in order to save "his dragon"... oh and give Draco a BIG hug from me :D (sorry, I can't help it, I have just watched Chamber of Sectrets... if you have bad mood just watch that part, Ron is hilarious!!! :D and I must tell you, good looks runs in the Malfoy family, bastard or not, that icy poison that radiates from Lucius is hot! - but there was not enough Draco in it grrr). Anyway, great story, can't wait to read more!!! :D
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From sunset20 on May 13, 2007
chapter 1 - I'm hooked... :D I haven't seen the movie so I don't know what to expect, but I liked this first chapter. *hugs Draco* Narcissa, you're a sick bitch and you don't deserve Draco as a son!!! (I see you don't like her, eh? I mean she's such a bitch in WoaT too :D). *hugs Draco again* But he'll talk to Harry, right? Ok, I know that wouldn't solve the problem, especially because Harry can be REALLY thick sometimes, but it'll be all right, right? Don't let Draco lose his virginity to that sick BITCH that calls herself a mother. Mother... my ass!!! *hugs DRaco - yes, I know I tend to do that a lot, but can you blame me? :D*
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From thrnbrooke on May 12, 2007
Holy moly! Too bad he didn't say goblins! Would have loved to have seen Jared. *sigh* David Bowie was soooo hot in that movie! What happens in chapter 2?
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