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By : Rumpelyssa
  • From Citten on June 01, 2007
    you know you could make a career out of people wanting to hurt you, you know that dont you? (just kidding) well maybe not entirely. i am pretty mad you could drive a person nuts! i really do hope there is mush and love and herestically crying in the next chapter. :) i am now going to threaten you if you dont get a chapter up really soon. :) love me.


    ps you do know this is all in good humor, dont you? except getting the posting soon.
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  • From sheherazade on June 01, 2007
    Hooray for Lucius, kicking Steven's arse. And good choice of DVD too - 'Pride and Prejudice'. Hermione should def have made Lucius walk out of a lake wearing that shirt. Swooooooon.
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  • From misslala on June 01, 2007
    Wow, Lucius killing for love. That is an interesting concept overall. I an interested to see what happens next and how Harry holds the delicate balance.
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  • From on May 23, 2007
    Very nice chapter! I am looking forward to the next.
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  • From scotsgirl on May 23, 2007
    Brilliant chapter looking forward to reading more very very soon hopefully
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on May 23, 2007
    Love it!! But is Flavius like Steven? Will Slave Hermione have the same kind of experience as Hermione did? And will General Lucius sort it out for her? (As Lucius is surely going to for Hermione?) :) Have some magic biscuits fr your superb story.
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  • From sheherazade on May 23, 2007
    Ah, slavemaster Lucius, what a guy. Am I imagining that there might be a connection between rotten Flavius and rotten Steven?
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 22, 2007
    Chapter 4: First off, thank you for the glossary of Latin terms. My knowledge of latin is nonexistent and I could look it all up, but I'm lazy and glad you just provided the answers since you knew them already. Too bad I was imagining my own definitions before I found them at the end of the chapter. Domus, tablinum, peristylium, and cubiculum. I see they aren't vulgarities, but my mind filled in risque definitions. I think Lucius wants to stuff his peristylium into Hermione's cubiculum. See?

    The plot thickens with nasty, hairy Flavius, and then Lucius thickens, too. When Lucius said,
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  • From ladyravenna on May 22, 2007
    Your use of a few Roman words really helped to keep me in the time period. Splendid work!
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  • From angelnomiko on May 22, 2007
    wow that was awsome i love it ... and i love where to left the general and slave that was hot.. and will mione tell harry what happen to her .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Citten on May 22, 2007
    well i certainly enjoyed reading it! and yes i do love where you are taking the general and slave counter parts! boy i wonder what lucuis will do when he finds out that..that bastard steven is getting out and i really wonder what the men in her life will do to said bastard once all this comes to a head? (boy if that didnt sound like a suggestion i dont now what does.) :) well as always i will be waiting happily and impateicently for the next chapter!! update soon. :)
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  • From ShilohDarke on May 22, 2007
    Hmmm... I gotta queston... Did you know that Helen of Troy had a daughter named Hermione? Is this Slave Hermione her daughter? If she was then it would certainly explain her being so beautiful that General Lucius is so enamored of her.

    Poor Hermione. That is terrible to feel that it is her fault about losing Lucius' baby. That would be a big reasoning factor as to why she can't seem to bear a man to touch her... (Besides the fact of her being raped) Lucius needs to just go hex the balls off of that muggle creton! Perhaps Ginny and Harry could give him a good taste of Bat Bogie curse!!!

    I love this story. It is very original and I have to admit, Although I love all your stories... this one is fastly becoming my favorite!

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - Mary on May 22, 2007
    Loved it! Poor Severus he cares for Hermione but he seems to love his cousin more. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From on May 22, 2007
    Lucius has his work cut out for him. I think he's up to the challenge. Slave/master relationships usually bother me, but I really like this one. Really, I just love Lucius in this story :) Can't wait for more.
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  • From misslala on May 22, 2007
    I am still enjoying the tale :)
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