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Reviews for Invasion

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From ANON - Marcus Licinius Crassus on May 22, 2007
    Well, that was another goodie. I can see this becoming one of your larger stories, well done.
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  • From ANON - Marcus Licinius Crassus on May 21, 2007
    Hmmmm, another good chapter, very deep and moving I thought. Good Work :D
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  • From on May 20, 2007
    Oh my, that
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on May 20, 2007
    I think Lucius will look for Steven and kick his ass, or at least scare him half to death in prison. I bet that parchment contains the whereabouts of Steven.

    And I bet idiotic Viktor approaches Hermione at the match. Maybe Charlie arranged it and that is why he tells her in his letter to go. If Victor approaches Hermione Lucius will go nuts. To see in person what he could not stand to see in the newspapers, will not end up well.

    At some point a frustrated Lucius will slip and Hermione will find out Severus told him about the rape. I would not want to be Severus that day; she is going to break hi jaw for this one.

    Perhaps since Severus is the only one that new the entire story, Hermione will confide in him about how she feels about Lucius. Maybe Severus can become the matchmaker for these two.

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  • From ANON - Janeplay on May 20, 2007
    Good writing! I liked Snape, and the way you wrote the hard stuff you had to write was really well done, and shows the depth of openness between Lucius and Snape too. They might not always like each other, but you've made them totally honest with each other. Well done!
    (And poor Hermione! Lucius will kiss it and make it all better won't he? ;) )
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  • From sheherazade on May 20, 2007
    Oh dear, after everything Hermione has been through it seems that Lucius is going to have to dig deep for some (gulp) sensitivity and tact. Is he equal to the challenge? I look forward to finding out.
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  • From ANON - mary on May 19, 2007
    Loved it! Poor Severus, well at least he warned Lucius! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ShilohDarke on May 19, 2007
    I was so happy this afternoon when I got on and found that I had not one, but two chapters to read. I enjoyed both very much and I feel so bad for poor Hermione. My heart goes out to her, and also to lucius for the hard job he has ahead of him.

    I love how he just keeps gritting his teeth and telling himself I just have to prove to her I won't hurt her. It reminds me of my own love and how long and hard he worked to show me I could trust him before I finally believed... (had a few teary moments as I could understand how she feels)

    Oh, and I need to let you know... in A Ghostly Curse... Harry is gone, so I'm not being unfaithful to your loyalty to Ginny not being with anyone else while Harry is still alive. But I didn't kill him off in th4e Final battle. I should have chapter 5 up probably sometime in the next day or so.

    Ok, enough now... just update soon as I am looking forward to it!

    Shiloh
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 19, 2007
    Chapter 3: This was a very fierce chapter. Lucius isn't going to give up on Hermione, but he has an exceptionally long way to go to gain her trust. I would have liked to know exactly what punishment Steven got. Was it a Muggle court or Magical? I'm assuming Magical if the rape was viewable - was it by pensieve?

    I'm glad Harry and Ginny got their wish to be parents. And I hope Luna isn't in trouble with Hermione for letting Lucius know where she was.

    Thank you for letting the reader know that Snape is out of the running on this story. Lucius has his hands full enough without competing with the dark-haired hunk.

    It's warming to know that Hermione's friends are all behind her, but I don't understand why Molly couldn't gracefully accept that Hermione wasn't going to pick another of her sons. None of the other sons wanted Hermione so it wasn't that Hermione was making anyone miserable. I hope Molly comes around. It's sad for Hermione to lose Molly's comfort and counsel after the horrific thing that happened to her. Did Hermione talk to her own mother?

    This was a strong, if angsty chapter, and I hope Lucius makes some headway. How is the ancient couple getting along?
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  • From scotsgirl on May 19, 2007
    good chapter was very pleased to see an update so quickly thank you. Hope Lucius has a wee word with the muggle. will we find out anything else from the past with the other Hermione and Lucius.
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  • From angelnomiko on May 19, 2007
    wow poor mione .. i hope lucius can get mione to trust in men again .. please update soon i wo uld love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ladyravenna on May 19, 2007
    Dimples are very cute, I agree. Wow, in one chapter you introduced a lot of new information. My head is still swimming around Hermione being raped...Lucius will worm his way into her heart.
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  • From ANON - sinbad on May 19, 2007
    I'd really like to see more of this story, it is an original concept in the sense that Hermione and Lusicus are related, and you are weaving quite a tale.
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  • From scotsgirl on May 18, 2007
    good couple of chapters i enjoyed very much hope you update soon
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  • From on May 18, 2007
    Oh my, so Lucius and Hermione had a drunken love encounter. That is so hot! And I loved the way they were so chatty as they undressed and got into bed. I always imagine both of them as being quite verbose. Now Lucius is besotted with her. That
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