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Reviews for Invasion

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From Citten on May 14, 2007
    oh my goodness honey you have me drooling and panting for more! so what else is in store?! i do hope this is one of my long stories? (hopeful voice there!) and i do hope that you have some intenchion of filling in some gaps in the next chapter! well what are you waiting for update. ;)
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  • From wicraven on May 14, 2007
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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  • From ladyravenna on May 14, 2007
    You have me caught, hook and all. LOL. I can't wait to see where you go with this plot bunny.
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  • From ShilohDarke on May 14, 2007
    Well, this looks like an interesting and unique idea. I can't wait to see where you're going to take it!

    SD
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  • From ANON - Susan on May 14, 2007
    What an orginal piece. I can't wait to see where you take this story and what happened that ONE NIGHT!! Thanks for a great story.
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  • From ANON - Marcus Licinius Crassus on May 14, 2007
    As a fan of the Roman period of history, I have to say I liked this story, especially as Roman history and culture owes a lot to Ancient Greek culture. I like cross-over fanfics, just like that Red Dwarf/HP fanfic you did.

    K
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  • From on May 14, 2007
    Love it. You definitly have me hooked. Looking forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Mary on May 14, 2007
    Loved it! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From Emmylovedraco on May 14, 2007
    update soon luv, Oh maybe some more update's soon today.
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 14, 2007
    Chapter 1: This is a very promising storyline. Of course, I want to know all about that drunken night first, you understand. Prurient interests come before genealogical ones. I really like that both Luciuses seem more calm and friendly, not hard-nosed and one-note vicious. It fits nicely into this plot so far. Roman Lucius isn't anyone's pushover, but he isn't a ravening fiend either. Just a believable conqueror of his times.

    Nicely done. I'll be interested in reading more.
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  • From sheherazade on May 14, 2007
    Oh my word! Sexy Roman Lucius - stop it, you're killing me! Love this idea (I love historical fiction anyway, especially with an erotic edge) and would love to see it continue.
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