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Reviews for Invasion

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From MargBennington on April 30, 2017

    I think Lucius might have been put on trial. Harry might help him get out. I'm glad Steven is dead. Hopefully Lucius will not be sent to Azkaban. I enjoyed reading this story!


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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2011
    This is just getting to the good part and you stopped up-loading. I know that real life takes precedence over things like this, but it would be nice if a note or two was droped once in a while to let us readers know that you are alive and healthy.
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  • From Scarybearhair on November 16, 2007
    I just wanted to tell you I love your story! I think it is so creative and you have such a brilliant premise. You have been such an inspiration to me thank you. And I really hope you decide to finish it someday!
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  • From Shalengreh on October 07, 2007
    write more please...this is good
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  • From ANON - firefairy on September 18, 2007
    I absolutely love this story. Please please keep me updated.


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  • From Rosamund on June 27, 2007
    Very interesting story I found tonight...this is quite the delight! I adore this setting for Hermione and Lucius! Oh, glad Steven is no more. Now, more Hermione and Lucius please! No Azkaban for him!
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  • From ANON - katie on June 21, 2007
    great work love your stories cant wait to see more
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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on June 13, 2007
    update soon! Love the story and look foward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on June 02, 2007
    I think that when Hermione finds out that Lucius has to go to Azkaban, she will go nuts and probably offer to confess what Steven did to her in court. Don
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  • From ANON - Marcus Licinius Crassus on June 02, 2007
    I can't wait to see what happens next, with regards to Snape and Lucius, and to see Lucius act as though a Gryffindor rather than the cool, calculating Slytherin, was interesting.
    And that leering, slobbering letch called Stephen deserved to die - well done.
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on June 02, 2007
    I love the fact that Lucius killed Steven. He deserved it. I just wonder who was helping him in his search for Hermione. I do think that someone had to aid him seeing that it took Lucius such a long time to find her. I just hope that she can forgive him and not fear his rage. Keep up the great work on this story and your others, it makes my day when I see that you have updated one of your stories. Cheers!
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 02, 2007
    Chapter 5: So Lucius thinks Hermione is really pretty and like the red (or maybe I should say blue) -blooded male he is, he's angling to delve into her knickers. But how clever of him to recognize her outfit as her comfort barrier.

    And it sounds like he's making some headway with her, not jumping her and scaring her away.

    Ooooh, Pride and Prejudice. I just adore that aloof, prideful, and underneath awkwardly shy Darcy. Colin Firth can jump in my lake any day. But I think Hermione should have chosen Sense and Sensibility. Then you could have introduced Colonel Christopher Brandon and snuck "Snape" into your story in another guise. That colonel was one HOT Alan Rickman.

    Well about time someone knocked off that arsehole Steven. He was wasting good air by continuing to breathe. What I don't understand is why Lucius just left his body for anyone to find. And now Severus has to turn Lucius in? Is he the Magic police? Confused here. Snape should just help Lucius dump the body. There must be miles of countryside needing some good fertilizer.

    Well, I'll have to wait and hope Lucius gets off from having to go to prison. Hermione knew Lucius killed Steven. Does that make her an accessory after the fact? She didn't try to turn in Lucius.


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  • From angelnomiko on June 01, 2007
    man ..im gald they talked and that lucius took care of steven and i hope harry and mione can get him off... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ladyravenna on June 01, 2007
    Lucius should not go to Azkaban! He killed for love! We should all ban together to protest such an action! LOL. Just kidding. It would be funny if it did it happen though. And I loved the reference to the 1995 TV miniseries of Pride and Prejudice with Colin Firth, I love that series!
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  • From ANON - mary on June 01, 2007
    That was good! I'm wondering how Stephen knew where she was too! Quite unexpected! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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