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Reviews for Naughty Boy (or He Couldn't Help It)

By : MelMel1982
  • From Angelkitty7888 on May 20, 2007
    I feel loved....... :) I'm glad you liked my idea! btw i don't know if i mentioned it but i hunted down that vid you saw on youtube (lol very funny) and that person seems to be fond of making slash vids XD some are pretty nice!

    NEways i think you could do it either way if you wanted to.... but if you put it in the other section you'd just have to do another AN ok? please? i don't happen to frequent that catagory lol....

    Or you could just make it one big series (write the prequel and rearange and then write the sequel as the next chapter) hell if you wanted to make it **section appropriate** wink wink you could make harry have a dream with him and malfoy or something like that

    just thoughts :)

    But please keep up the wonderful writing!
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  • From xXBrokenDreamsXx on May 18, 2007
    Is it wrong that I am now horny as fuck?
    Prolly so lol.
    But that was hot as hell!
    Please write more! I need it!!!
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  • From Angelsfear on May 17, 2007
    OHHH that WAS HOT O_O I wrote a Ron/Draco fanfic once but ever since I've only been able to read Harry/Draco ones but this has REKINDLED MY LOVE haha even if it's more Harry/Draco than with Ron, OH WELL, that was just bloody awesome hahahah I love how Draco was the only one unaware that all these boys were lusting after him and Harry was in love with him X_X hahaha sooooo great!
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  • From graballz on May 17, 2007
    Chapter 1--okay, honestly, I almost didn't click on this just because I was so afraid of the DM/RW pairing...I'm Harry/Draco all the way (it's Harry/Draco or nothing with me lol) But FUCK! I shouldn't have worried in the least! This was HOT HOT HOTHOTHOT!!!! So good!

    Okay, I'll say it...FUCK Ron can watch all he wants! Hell, all of Hogwarts can watch for all I care, as long as it's Harry and Draco, baby! SO GOOD

    OHHHH FUCK Draco's orgasm was nothing short of spectacular! Ron's watching...Ron's watching...Ron's...KISSING DRACO???!?!?!?!??!?!?!!!??!?! *growl* You know, I thought I'd be more upset than I actually am, so good for you!

    *whimper* shit! SHIT SHIT SHIT! I don't know whether to be happy or sad that Draco wants to...*shudder*...suck him. *pout* I guess I wanted Harry to be Draco's first. But then again, I also want Draco to practice and get good for Harry...FUCK I don't know what I want! And trust me, no one loves giving head more than I do, but Draco's mouth belong's on Harry's cock...not Ron's.

    (Sorry, Ron)

    Mmmmm, YES and we're back into the GOOD STUFF! THE STUFF I NEED! YES HARRY FUCK DRACO'S ARSE! YES YES YES OH JESUS

    HOT HARD AND DEEP HOT HOT HOT OH GOD!!!!!

    I'm definitely hot under the collar after reading this! SO FUCKING GOOD! If you do a sequel...*gulp* is Ron going to fuck Draco? (I'm going to hope no, but I trust that it'll be okay)

    I'd rather Ron watch while Harry spanks Draco...he's been such a naughty boy, after all...and I'm sure that he won't be able to help just falling facedown over Harry's knee...*hot and bothered now*
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  • From RYoung on May 16, 2007
    Yeah, that was hot. Had a pretty arousing effect on me anyway, can't wait to see what comes next.
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  • From Daemonenbraut on May 16, 2007
    wow just say: HOT HOT HOT. I need a very very cold drink ^^
    lg nici
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  • From Mitamay on May 15, 2007
    Now that was droool worthy!! Now it'd be even MORE hot if they were both in Draco at the same time! I loved it!!! A sequel involing all three would be so...just damn, that's all I got to say!!! EM
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  • From shevien on May 15, 2007
    OMG! So f@#$ing hot!!
    Do I even have to say it?!
    SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Waenyvien on May 15, 2007
    That was an amazing story. I now will say this YOU MUST MAKE A SEQUAL!
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  • From Angelkitty7888 on May 15, 2007
    SEQUEL!!!!!!!!! Pleasepleaseplease?!?!?!?!

    Gods and Goddesses that was hott! and i loved every minute of it! it's a rare thing for something to make me wish I smoked lol after a scene like that i think even i needed a cigaret lol but please more? you could turn it into a slight kink thing...... with maybe a plot? (that did have a slight plot you realize and left room for such a wonderful story) you could ven make a prequil out of the ron and harry fight if you wanted! there's so much you could do! please continue it?

    And if you do continue it could you email me? Angelkitty7888@yahoo.com
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  • From LoveGD on May 15, 2007
    HOLY FREAKING GOD!!!!!!!!!! Wow, that was just....wow. I'm seriously in awe of you now.
    Hell, yeah I want a sequel!
    Keep up the good work!
    //LoveGD
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  • From pretender on May 15, 2007
    SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEl
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  • From Rannapulla on May 15, 2007
    Oh my good lord that was so hot! i do want more lots more
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  • From chantalmalfoy on May 15, 2007
    Yum!!! Wonderful, fantastic, bloody f-ing brilliant!!!!! LOVE IT!
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  • From gravybaby on May 15, 2007
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    I think I could use a "stiff one" myself. ^_~
    That was bloody fantastic! Well written. BRAVO!
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