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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Beloved Incubus (BP4)

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  • From cynaga on June 06, 2007
    What a fantastically delightful story!


    Happy (late) Birthday to Draco! My favorite bad boy... xD
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  • From NightLo on June 06, 2007
    You know...seeing Sirius was just great, but sad at the same time...how did it feel like...when your loved one can communicate with you? Freely? On his own mind? But without warmth, touches and presence? How did it feel like...when you can see through the mirror, but can do nothing to help, to act, to be there when the living are in danger? That idea was...sweet and cruel at the same time, and suddenly I found that idea was wicked - very very...I just worried about Remus, if his desire to be with Sirium was too strong, would he...accidentally and purposefully somehow planned his murder? Will he desparate enough to do that? If so, would others find out in time? Even when they could find it out...would...would they stop him?

    Originally I though - yeah Sirius was not dead, but now I prefer Harry would never find that out somehow...

    For Draco and the binding, I would just say...Merlin, it's magic! You know, getting male pregnancy with magic was awesome, now...turning a human into an incubus - that was just.......wonderful? Horrible? I really lost my words this time. And if - if Harry is really that powerful, after he successfully learnt the occulemen and ligilement skills - can he turn Voldi into another thing?

    Actually that idea of becoming a kissed living dead, or dead, was really horrible and annoying - the family has just started! They are perfect for each other, and without Draco around, Valen will be hungry, wet and frustrated more; without Harry, Valen ...has no food, not to mention the development of his powerful magic - did others notice that Valen ALWAYS responsed to Harry's magic. It is Harry's magic!!! So I would say...this time, if possible, other should try to locate and open the horcrux...but I know that would be quite impossible...

    Lastly, while I enjoyed how they ensured each other, I would bet...after the first word of dad - Valen's second word probably would be 'f**k'...I know talking dirty would turn both Draco and Harry on, but from now on, as they are parents, they should somehow...control themselves - at the very least - put up one silencing charms please...
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 06, 2007
    So Draco figured it out. I sooo need chapter 37! They know where the dagger is!
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  • From on June 05, 2007
    OH SNAP.




    Gimmeeee! MORE CHAPTERS! OwO; THE SUSPENSE!
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  • From MrsKayleighMalfoy on June 05, 2007
    just ealised if you bring Sirius back - sure Remus would be extatic BUT...Tonks?
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  • From MrsKayleighMalfoy on June 05, 2007
    ARGH!!!!! need more! i've cried, laughed, cried more then almost fainted over the last few chapters! You guys are amazing! MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
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  • From NightLo on June 05, 2007
    ...wow, so Sirius might not die after all! What a great revelation - and the most happiest men would be both Harry and Remus!

    BTW, a good way to start a fight, and Draco must start teaching pure-blood traditions on Harry - after the war, they would be reintroduced to the circle...but I must agree - a great choice of godparents!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 05, 2007
    Oh holy moly! I soooo need chapter 35! Did Valen call Sirius?
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  • From kalaway on June 04, 2007
    LOL, is it bad that I totally laughed at their fight? Is was very well written and I love that they do fight and that they fight about realistic things, but I just find it kinda funny. They're fighting about if an evil dark wizard murders them both which partially pureblooded pair should raise their gayly conceived little one, lol. Anyway, I think it's funny. I can totally see Draco's point, but I don't know if Ron would understand...
    ohh, and by the by HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO DRACO!!!! woot! June 5th!
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  • From DazzlingD on June 04, 2007
    just love these stories. thank you and keep them coming.
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  • From on June 04, 2007
    Oh snap. Trouble in paradise.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 04, 2007
    Uh oh! I sooo need chapter 34! I can see all of Draco's points but I can see where Harry would get angry about the pureblood part. They've got to calm down and work this out.
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  • From cynaga on June 04, 2007
    Ch. 32 - one of my favorites~! I love the talk of polarities and magic. I also like to see Draco showing how brilliant he really is (you tend to forget that in the books because he's mostly such a prat).

    And Valen is such a lovely character. You keep saying how small he is and that Draco can hold him in one hand; does that mean he is preemie size?

    You should make your series available in word docs!

    You have brought a freshness to the HP characters without giving up their canon personalities. I love it when Draco gets a bit tiffed with Harry and calls him 'Potter'.

    Your work is in the top 3 FF I've read (and I've read a lot - not just HP) and to be able to carry it on to novel length is very impressive.

    I know it's fun to write FF but I'd love to read some of your original work (Live Journal is a nice place to post).

    Now I've been verbose - pardon. Thanks for your talent and time! XD

    ~Cindy
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  • From NightLo on June 04, 2007
    Very interesting point you have put, but before that, let me thanks for the lovely family that you have shown us - I just love the idea of the three interact each other, Valen is cute and lovely, and both Draco and Harry are just too good to be parents. The picture really projects calm, happiness and satisfaction - I would love to read more about that. I believe, with Valen around, they would just mature faster, become stronger and stable. Even they are young, not yet 18 (...), but they already are capable parents and husbands...really very very different from one year before, from those two - vulnerable, fragile, emotional and stressful teenages...love and care for each other (now also Valen) has strengthened them greatly.

    And...being busy is no good for child bonding, though I know they don't have a future and Valen's planning if Voldi and Macnair are around, but...it just pains me to see them working so hard on horcrux instead of staying with Valen...hum...really work and family are also complementary opposite - without work, you cannot support your living and daily expenses (though the two will never need this, but we are); however, without family, you simply cannot continue to work for a long long time...

    Back to the point about Draco's death - if soul leaving the body signifies death of one person (as Draco is able to brought back by binding, sex and Harry's magic, so his soul has never left his body, maybe his soul has been binded, as long as they are able to have sex or other ways to put magic inside Draco's body)...this means really Sirius and everyone can live and brought back to live as long as the soul remains inside the body...so what situation will separate soul and body? Devoid of feelings such as love and hate? As blood does not leave body, and magic...magic originates from...? life? soul? Still magic does not leave, it is just gone when one dies...if sex can counter death, those two are just there also - then back to my question again - how can we determine when one soul leaves body? Is this what they must decipher / Harry's weapon?

    Lastly, they only have 4 months left...however, in these period, they can destroy the remaining horcruxes, take care of Valen and plan and defeat Voldermort - what 4 months would be!
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  • From graballz on June 04, 2007
    Chapter 32--Uh oh, we're starting to come to the close of this story! *gulp* What new horrors await? Who's gonna die next? Narcissa?

    Mmmmmm, love, hate, blood, magic, sex, death....SWEET! (Because by "death" I think "violent, angry sex"...not actual death)

    Uh oh...quick edit: the italics don't stop after the journal entry, just fyi. (Might want to fix that)

    *gasp* They were talking about Sirius, weren't they????? Ohhhhh, so many clues, and I wanna know what happens next!
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