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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Beloved Incubus (BP4)

By : slashpervert
  • From graballz on June 04, 2007
    Chapter 31--OMG OMG OMG DRACO'S ALIVE!!!!! HE LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVES! FUCKING RIGHT HE DOES!

    *whimper* childhood fear......oh, that makes me cry! My poor baby! HARRY SAVED HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!

    FUCK YOU, MACNAIR! I'll bloody fucking kill you! Bastard! I hope Narcissa is okay, even though I'm pretty much assuming that she's dead.

    Ohhhh, there is nothing sweeter than Draco holding his baby! *dying of cuteness* And the girls are crying! No surprise there! hehehe Blonde hair, green eyes...SO PERFECT! Are we really surprised? No, not really, but I still love reading about it!

    Oh shit...are they gonna fuck while Harry's nursing Valen? I don't know how I feel about that...*whew* Okay...

    WHAT? Lucius and MacNair???? REALLY? Did you mention this before? Because this feels like the first time I'm hearing about it...goddamn!

    And what do you mean, Draco can't look for her? He didn't "get away"!!!!! He fucking died and was rescued! So technically, the vow is void because he didn't "get away" so he CAN look for her! Or even if the vow is still in effect, HARRY can look for her, since HE didn't take a vow! Sheesh...

    Adorable chapter! I just hope they don't accidentally fall asleep and roll on him or something while he's in bed with them! What am I saying? Of course they wouldn't! They're fucking Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy! Oy!
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  • From bananasforyou on June 04, 2007
    nicely done
    !!
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  • From NightLo on June 03, 2007
    Yeah...Draco is safe, though Narcissa is still no where to be found, but better get him back sooner than later, as he needs to be taken care, and see his son for real, and experience the wonderful miracle of the bond between Harry, Valen and himself!

    BTW, would Harry seriously consider changing the binding this time? Would Snape help?
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  • From graballz on June 03, 2007
    Chapter 30--OH SHIT OH SHIT OH SHIT!!!! I don't like the title of this chapter already....my poor baby, Draco!!!!!

    YES YES YES YES YES GO HARRY!!! FUCK ALL OF YOU, GET OFF YOUR ASSES AND MOVE TO FIND DRACO!!!!!!!! GO FUCKERS GO!!!!!!!!

    OMG OMG OMG YES YES YES WOO HARRY YOU ARE SUCH MY HERO!!!!! WAY TO FUCKING KICK SOME ASS!!!!! TAKIN DOWN THE WARDS....NOW WHAT?

    NO NO NO NO NO HE'S NOT DEAD!!!!! HE MIGHT BE BEATEN AND BRUISED AND BLOODY AND NOT BREATHING, BUT HE'S NOT FUCKING DEAD!!!!! I REFUSE TO BELIEVE IT!!!!! HE'S NOT NOT NOT NOT NOT DO YOU FUCKING HEAR ME NOT DEAD!!!!!!!

    Oh. My. God. I'm dead. I'm limp. I'm exhausted. I fucking choked to death on my own goddamn saliva out of relief. Okay, so I was adamently refusing to believe that Draco was dead...while still horrified that maybe he was...even though HE COULDN'T BE (because that would probably have made me near-suicidal or something) and then when "Draco's body twitched" I jumped up and began jumping around the room in relief and celebration! And then I fell back onto the bed, choked on my own spit, and hit my head on the windowsill, all while clutching a pillow and trying to be quiet because my mommy is sleeping downstairs.

    Ohhhhh, thank you, SlashPervert and company for not killing my Draco! Now, time to beat the FUCK out of MacNair and find Narcissa!
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  • From graballz on June 03, 2007
    Chapter 28--OH SHIT! Harry had the BABY in the CELL???? FUUUUUUUUUCK! And JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!!!!! That was one HELL of a birth! GO HARRY AND DRACO! I don't think I could've done it!

    Chapter 29--GOD I love it when Draco speaks French!!!!! Even if it's absolutely not sexual in any way...it is just fucking incredible! Awwwwwwww, this is goodbye for Narcissa and Draco, isn't it? Damn! But he needs to get Harry and Valen safe! OH SHIT OH SHIT! The binding promise! Draco! OH NO what's going to happen???? GOD DAMN THAT WAS AN EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!! NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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  • From kalaway on June 02, 2007
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! Don't do that to me! I'm shaking! You're trying to kill me! Phew! ok, I'm good now...
    Valen is such a cute name! And absolutely crazy about Harry cuting the baby out himself. I don't know what I think about the not-so-breast feeding, but Character Death was not in the warnings so I was about to be very angry. I guess that's what that 'other' warning was for though, eww, but bravo and keep it up! *kisses and hugs and thanks*
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  • From cynaga on June 02, 2007
    I enjoy your works as much as the actual books (maybe more!) THANKS!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 02, 2007
    He was dead! Harry brought him back? Not sure what that means! I soooo need chapter 31!
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  • From on June 02, 2007
    Haha, knew it.~ Horrah!
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  • From on June 02, 2007
    Oooo... Just realized it lists Nec among the many things. That means Harry is gonna go sex the ded Draco to bring him back, huh?
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  • From on June 02, 2007
    Gaaaaahhhh!!!

    Harry blacked out...and now he can't get back to Draco! Draco's gonna dieee if they don't have passionate sex! -Purrs slightly but sobs over the sadness of the situation- More chapppteeersss! ;-;
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  • From NightLo on June 02, 2007
    ...what a way to give birth, Harry's life really is nothing but common and easy...BTW, Valen is just cute and lovely, esp. with this "He looked down and Valen looked up at him, almost as if he were regarding him coolly. Such a Draco face."

    My response is '...now don't stop me from eating my young daddy...don't you know you and I can use magic to produce 'milk'?'...really...something interesting to say/think...just 'Malfoyish'!

    And, with the chapter of a parent love...I have a strong feeling that Narcissa is going to sacrifice herself - if Macnair wants Malfoy's property, with Harry and the baby gone, he would just punish Draco and Narcissa together - just to torture each of them...however, with Draco getting cold and deadly (as he wastes time to torture Draco, and with the fact that he knows nothing about that special bond)...he cannot transfer the property properly...so maybe he will force Narcissa to marry him...and then Narcissa will just do something most mother would do - making sacrifices...Or would he ask help? Would he just report to the Dark Lord?

    Harry, be quick, don't pass out for too long, Draco is waiting for you, Valen's father is waiting for you...

    BTW...why does the imperious curse just slip pass Draco? Anything relate with Valen's special magic/blood? And if ever they are safe with each other, how will they be called respectively? Father? Daddy? Papa? ...Mother?
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  • From cynaga on June 02, 2007
    Fantastic chapter - your stories just get better and better.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 02, 2007
    Oh no!!! Draco! And he's turning cold! He won't last much longer! Soooo need chapter 30! My heart is breaking! They soooo can't get a break!
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  • From daynajones on June 01, 2007
    holy f.....king hell. there you are reading alone. la-de-da. and the last chapeter hits you. JHC you are going to be the death of all my fingernails.
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